'Maan'
still remember. When he was so close to me that my cheeks felt hot, my heartbeats increased and I felt butterflies in my stomach.
Twirling myself around I spread my arms out again, as if I was being lifted up in the air.
'But, by the time you get this; It'll be too late'
A tear trickled down my cheek. . . even though Geet ran . . . i wanted to run with her . . it could't be too late!!!! NOOO! it just couldn't 😭
Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu
Sadiiieee...aaahhh
I thought it was a sweet, simple and cute story...but no...i wanna cry...omg...beautiful and painful...superb attempt.
Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..
<font size="3">If I Say I Cried while Typing, Will You believe me?</font><font size="3">Thank You Vidu,</font><font size="3">Its An Attempt, though I Doubted It would make anyone cry...</font><font size="3">But Thanks For reading🤗</font>
Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu
Its hard to believe that Sadiie cried 😛 but i know everybody cries, even those who say we dont cry...an am sure you must have cried...its a sad sad one sweety.
aah welcome dear...why not...?? It can ... I am the one ...n am sure there'll be many...one of the main reasons behind this is maaneet...they can make me cry...n then you have written it really beautifully...what true love is... 👏
'Maan' . . . just the thought the mere thought of something happening to him made my eyes well up in tears. . . .'Maan'
His name was. The name so peaceful and soothing to my aching heart. The mere name itself had its desired effect on me. The water rippled around me, wanting to capture me.From the very instance i read that. . . i felt like a sharp dagger struck my heart. A fear grew inside me. . .making me very hesitant to continue reading .. . for their may be an ending i wouldn't be able to take. . .
To be honest . . . i was actually taken aback. . . confused in a way if i was in the right thread. . .Each line that i read was cutting me deeper and making the wounds bigger. . . and i was like sadiie always made me laugh. . . am i in the right place. Fabulousely written 👏👏. . . and u say you can't describe. . . for a girl who does not believe in love or had a heart break. . .u did a pretty dang good job !!!!still remember. When he was so close to me that my cheeks felt hot, my heartbeats increased and I felt butterflies in my stomach.
Twirling myself around I spread my arms out again, as if I was being lifted up in the air.
BAM!! u don't know what these lines mean to me. . . for a second i thought i was reading about myself..'But, by the time you get this; It'll be too late'
A tear trickled down my cheek. . . even though Geet ran . . . i wanted to run with her . . it could't be too late!!!! NOOO! it just couldn't 😭'Maan I want to see your eyes! Why have you got that stupid cloth on your eyes?!'I shattered 😭😭my maan's qatil nighahein weren't there anymore. . .he wasn't there anymore😭i don't know how i continued to read. . .hearing Geet's denial and screams for Maan.SHe screamed and screamed as my vision became blurred. . .SHe took her own life. . . i don't even know what i would have done. . . the person who gave her and painted her a life filled with so much color. . . reason for existing . . . was no longer beside her. . . no longer in her world.The beauty color just faded away. . . The painter needs to be there or else everything will just fade away . . .I believe in love, but their is always that fear. . .Does love like this exist. . . if yes. . .then i rather not get a glimpse of such love and then have it snatched away from me!!! Nothing is crueler than that!i demand a hot and passionate OS next time missy. . .to make for the tears i have shed! and oh yeah i will get even . . . i have a Sad OS in mind . . . don't know if i will have the heart to write it though :(Luv u sadiie. . . u just raised the bar in ur writing 👏luv,Zee
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