Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#321

oh she laughed 😍

she actually laughed i mean she used to laugh but not for arnav not with him

and she did i dont abt arnav right now but i am on cloud 9 after this

i really want a repentance track of this type in the show too

and as i mentioned in your other SS/FF i would be forever grateful to rae for making the post

"thank you FF writer"

otherwise i would really have missed this wonderful FF of urs

its just excellent

her wait with first aid box

their silence speak more than their words and i so love this king of love

great work dear(sorry dont know ur name)

loved it totally worth the wait for ur updates👏

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

this was brilliant, just BRILLIANT!

She laughed!! and that too for him not at him!! She genuinely cared and laughed and arnav saw it all!!!! LOVED IT!

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

beautiful...
And Khushi said the first thing that came to her head.
'I was just wondering whether you
broke the main tap in the guestroom bathroom?'
seriously ?! 🤣

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

This is stupendous! My heart stopped beating a while! I was holding my breath while i read this!

Ah today is a nice day for me. All the updates I'm reading are breath taking and this one was stopping it cos of its cuteness!

Thanks for the pm.

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

I was telling myself the same thing throughout the update - Breathe. Breath! Hahahahaha!

This is heart-breaking beautiful writing. The last three lines gave an altogether different and much welcomed dimension to the update.

Hope your exams went well!

Keep up the brilliant work! :-)

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Great update...It is really wonderful to see your update msg in my inbox.

I hope now you will be updating frequently.

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Yay. Your exams are over. That means that you are going to be updating regularly =]. Lovedthis chapter it was perfect.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

Finally, an update after so many days, just kidding……

It was a nice one actually, both are so unsure of what to do next, their love for each other is evident but the question remains, what to do next. I guess the uninhibited laughter of Khushi's may pave the path to a simpler, sweeter and cherished reconciliation.

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

Wow! After reading this i am sooo glad ur exams are over and we are going get updates...ugh! Greedy us...hope u did well and hope u rest well before presenting your greedy readers with the next update 😃
Need to go through the whole story again - awesome update!