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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Wow! Awesum. Luved it. Ab maaneet ko zyada der door mt rakhna. Update sn.
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Hira
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on new story
waiting for the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
interesting concept...plz cont. soon... add me in your pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
interesting dear..
continue soon

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Interesting
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Nyce concept
loved it..
do cont.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Break Away
Part 1

world

He was stuck in the crowdie noisy traffic of Mumbai

On his way back to hotel again striking a new and a big deal in his hands he was suppose to party round as he always did

But it had been ages now'when he lost his soul

 

Surrounded by vehicles, peoples'but'still lonely

Noises from everywhere, noises from every kind'horns, screams, crying of children, yelling people, whistles of traffic inspector'but he couldn't listen any'

The only sound rhythming in his ear drums was the drizzling tone of rain, continuously pouring from the skies sharing his loneliness, protectively hiding his loneliness from the entire world

He was lost'lost in his own world'in himself'

He wasn't acting himself'

He wasn't in his senses'

 

He knew it was not possible not at least in this birth time

But he was feeling her essence, feeling her'

He knew she is too far'far to another world

Far away from where she could never come back'from could never escape

BUT

He was feeling her'feeling as if she was somewhere near him'close yet to FAR

 

It was her 5TH DEATH ANNIVERSERY

It was the most difficult day of his entire year'

Something he escapes'something THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA escape

Something he fears'THE GREAT MSK and fear'

Yaa he dreads this day the entire year

The owner of KI, The ruler of Business World, The Dictator of Power, The Man with Terror

Fear'hides'dread a date'

 

11th April it is the date which kills him

Which killed her'

Took his soul away from him

Took her away from him

 

5years'5 damn years without her

Living without his life'without his soul'without thudding hear'without flowing blood in veins'without his dream'his khwab'his mishthy'HIS GEET

 

He was a dead structure passing his non worthy life from past 5years

He wanted to die'kill himself the moment he heard about her death

Geet's Maan died the moment Maan's Geet left this meaningless world

 

Maan was driving to airport love of life, his lady luck, his Geet

The two days away from her were like hell on him'he was dying every moment away from her

He wanted to fly'wished this time to run as fast as it can but for him time wasn't ready to move an inch

Driving with all his thoughts lingering on his jaan'

 

Geet you know what I hate you'he said pouting complaining to her photo kept on the dashboard of the car

Do you have an idea what is going on me all this while'

2 days'2 lllooonnnggg days'feels like I lived 2 long lives

You must be enjoying yourself over there

With your friends right'he made a puppy cute face

Now you have to payback...

For killing me, torturing me two whole days

I'll make you count your each punishment Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana

Better watch out baby'he said with a sweet naughty smirk on his lips and that shinny glitter in his eyes

 

His smile faded when his sudden car brake made her photograph fell from the dashboard

Before he could have reached the broken glass frame

His phone buzzed

It was Rajji'

He switched on his Bluetooth, handling the wheels and trying to reach the broken frame

 

Hei little baby don't worry I am going to pick your di up

On my way

Will catch up with you the time I reach her'he said all in a cheerful happy voise with enthusiasm

When rajji starts crying

Hey what happen baby'why you crying

 

Maan Veer ji'veer ji'she tries to speech within her continuous sobs and crying

Wo'woo'

 

Oouucchhh'he shrieked in pain cutting his finger from the broken glass'blood started ozzing out drenching the gorgeous face in the frame

What is it rajji'first stop crying and then say what happen to my little baby

If your di came to know ou shed these tears in her absence she will defiantly kill me'Maan kept the fram back to the seat speading up for airport

 

Maan Veerji...Geet di'

Geet di is no more she left us

Your Geet'she left us Veer ji'she died

He couldn't formulate what happened his whole world just tossed upside down,

His earth snatched away from his feet

He couldn't think, couldn't feel anything'ANY DAMN THING RIGHT NOW

 

His geet'no'nomore'no'no'hell no'this is not possible

This can't just be

No

He wanted to scream but couldn't

His veins became blurred his mind paralised'he lost his conscious

And

 

BBBAAANNNGGG

 

His car badly crashed in the roadside tree

 

Veer ji'veer ji' Rajji cried, screamed on the receiver hearing the noise

 

Maan was almost in coma

When he gained conscious almost after 3 days'

He was in hospital he knew

He knew he was alive

But he was no more the same

Geet's Maan died with her

 

Maan whom Geet loved madly insanely was lost somewhere

He turned in a ruthless, arrogant, emotionless, heartless business man nothing else

he tried committing suicide several times but everytime her voice echoed in his ear drums
Maan promise me You'll live, live even if am not there, you'll have to live always
for me...for us
promise me maan you will

the continuous dripping of rain made him back to the real world


Precap: Maaneet Last Meet


Prev:Intro And CS Next:Part 2


sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry FOR ALL THE LATENESS AND ALSO FOR GIVING IT TILL HERE

I WASN'T REALLY ABLE TO TYPE MORE πŸ˜• ME STILL NOT ALLOWED TAKE STRESS

and sorry sweeties i couldnt reply to all so i didnt replied to any

but

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVE YOU PEOPLE SHOWED


chalo chalo now tell mw how many shocked Geet already died

🀣 AND future k baare main kyaa socha πŸ˜³ mujhe nahi btaaoge kya πŸ˜‰


Ohkiz guyz This SS is specially for our new page

Geet-Begining Of A New Ere


so now give me my comments and like

will be waiting

❀️Luv Divzi

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
yeh kya yaar SS started and geet is no alive😭😭😭
awesome upadte
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Divzzz...ye kya kiya...😑
Geet better be alive...else moi not gonna leave you...πŸ˜†