Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! - Page 57

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Part 37:



They all finish Dinner and everyone heads towards their room...
Manvi, Jeevika, Viren and Virat are all sitting in Virat's room...
Manvi: I ate so much today..
Virat: If you eat like a pig that's what happens.. * mumbles*
Manvi: Kuch kaha kya?
Virat: Nope...
Viren: Waise I ate too much too.. Feel sick now..
Virat: Kya Bhai.. That should have been Bhabhi's dialogue.. * laughs*
Manvi: Your jokes are sad like you...
Virat: Accha Ji.. * raises his eye brows*
Viren: Guys please no fights.. Guys do you want to go for a walk outside? * smiles*
Manvi: Hmmm... Then we can eat Kulfi... Ive been having craving for Kulfi since ages..
Virat and Viren look at each other and Then at Manvi...
Virat: Manvi you sound more pregnant than Bhabhi... I mean Bhabhi doesn't get cravings and you..
Manvi is shocked...
Manvi: Viraaat.. Whats wrong with your brain.. I think your screw is still lost..
Viren: Manvi calm calm... I mean you said you ate too much and now you want to eat Kulfi..
Manvi: Jeeju.. Kulfi is light you know..
Virat: Yeah right!
Virat: Wasie Bhabhi... Why are you not talking?
No answer..
Manvi takes the Magazine from Jeevika's hand. Jeevika is fast asleep.
Manvi: Shhh.. Di is sleeping..
Viren: So early.. * looks at the watch* it's only half nine...
Manvi: I think she must be tired..
Viren: Oh yes.. Maybe I'll just take her to our Room..
Virat: Yes Bhai..
Viren: Okay guys... Good night.. Go to sleep you guys..
* stands up and walks towards Jeevika*
Viren picks up Jeevika in his arms and she opens her eyes..
Jeevika: VirenJi..
Viren: Don't worry.. I'll take you to our room..
Jeevika: Im not sleepy anymore.. It was my nap time..
* grins*
Viren: Nap Time? * confused*
Jeevika: Yes...* grins* Now I won't sleep and won't let anyone else sleep too... * grins*
Viren: Dekho Jeevika..
Jeevika: VirenJi pleaseee...
Virat: Bhabhi you are awake...
Jeevika: Yes DevarJi...VirenJi please put me down now...
Viren: As you wish Madam...
Manvi is busy looking at her nails...
Manvi: Di do you think I should change my nail varnish colour?
Jeevika: Yes Maanuu... I'll give you this nude shade I have.. It's so pretty!
Manvi: Oh really! Di you should change yours too...
Viren sits next to Virat...
Viren: Seriously! *'whispers*
Virat: I know... These two sisters...
Viren: I can't imagine what will happen to us when Manvi gets married to you... They will always be together...
Virat: I know Bhai.. We might have to book appointments to meet them...
Viren laughs...
Jeevika and Manvi look at them and start talking again...
Viren: MadamJi... Saali Saheba... Please stop this gossip club..
Manvi and Jeevika: Sorry!
Virat: So what should we do? ToEntertain ourselves..
Jeevika: Dance.. * grins*
Everyone just looks at Jeevika...
Virat, Viren & Manvi: No!! * say this at the same time*
Jeevika: Okay... I'm just suggesting..No need to get excited..
Viren: Hmmm... Let's just go for aWalk outside in our garden..
Manvi: Then Kulfi... * grins*
Viren: Anything for you Saali Saheba..
Virat: Let's go then...
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They all are walking in the garden..
Viren and Manvi together and Jeevika and Virat together...

Manvi: Jeeju do you remember that night? * smiles*
Viren: Which one? *'confused*
Manvi: Waise Mein aisa bilkul Nahi... Mujhe Jeevika Ki Yaad arahi thi isliye mein aagaya... * giggles*
Viren: Saali Saheba are you making fun of me? * puts his arm around Manvi's shoulders..*
Manvi: Nahi Jeeju.. But it was so cute! * pulls Viren's cheek*
Viren: Afterall Jeeju kiska hoon.. * winks*
Manvi: Tusse Bohot Cute ho Ji... * grins*
Viren laughs..

Virat has his arms around Jeevika's Shoulder...
Virat: Bhabhi you seems so happy...
Jeevika: Yes I am DevarJi... You wont believe...I want to do Bhangra and Jump.. * grins*
Virat: Bhabhi.. I never seen you this happy...
Jeevika smiles...
Jeevika: You know I'm so excited to dance in your wedding.. Should I show you a trailer? * winks*
Virat: Bhabhi... Calm down... Please..
Jeevika: Viraaat... Please...
Virat:Bhaiii... Help!
Viren and Manvi turn around...
Viren: Kya hua? * Manvi and Viren walk towards them*
Virat: Bhabhi wants to show a trailer of her dance.. The dance she plans to do at My wedding..
Viren: Jeeevika... The grass is wet so dancing here won't be right and plus do you want to hurt the baby..
Jeevika: Sorry VirenJi... I'm just so happy.. * hugs Viren*
Virat and Manvi just look at them and smile...
Manvi: Okay... Let's walk now... * smiles*

Viren and Jeevika start to walk in the front... Viren has his arm around Jeevika...
Manvi and Virat are walking behind them..
Everyone is quiet and just listening to the things around them... The cool breeze making the whole atmosphere pleasant..
Virat holds Manvi's hand...Manvi looks at him and sees him smiling.. She smiles back and lays her head on his shoulder..


Ani

Yaaay im the first to comment..!! It was lovely..! I have to say ur doing a great job with this ss..! Plz plz take it as a pretty request..! I love virman..! And i know ur adding virman bits...!! Buuuh a lil more romantic bits for them pleeeaseS...!! Thankss..!!

Originally posted by: Dina98210

Yaaay im the first to comment..!! It was lovely..! I have to say ur doing a great job with this ss..! Plz plz take it as a pretty request..! I love virman..! And i know ur adding virman bits...!! Buuuh a lil more romantic bits for them pleeeaseS...!! Thankss..!!

YAAAY 😆
Surely in the future updates I'll try to have romantic bits for VirMan 😊
Thanks for your lovely comment 😊

LOL!! finally u posted!! thankss!! awesum updatee!! u knw m soo greedyy!!

aniji please update sooon! i know i say this all the time but after reading your updates i cant think of some other words!😆

Originally posted by: kanishkakaran

LOL!! finally u posted!! thankss!! awesum updatee!! u knw m soo greedyy!!

haha kanu i think we fall in the same line there! greedy i think were her story's greediest fans!!😆

Originally posted by: virenjeevika

aniji please update sooon! i know i say this all the time but after reading your updates i cant think of some other words!😆

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TinaJi Tusse bohot sweet ho Ji...
Love you 🤗