Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!!

Hello guys... I'm Ani 😊 I haven't ever written anything like this before but since I love this show
I have decided to write. My writing skills are pretty bad! Feel embarrassed. Lol just posting it anyways.. Hope you guys like it.


Manvi was once again in chandigarh and Manvi and jeevika are playing Carrom in Jeevika and Viren's Room.
Viren and virat Are going to sleep together in Virat's room so the behnas get some time together.
It's about 9pm.

Manvi: Jeevika di OMG why are you cheating? Aap kitne bade cheater hai
Jeevika starts to laugh.
Jeevika: Maanu kitne Badi drame baz hai tu
Manvi: jeevika di app ko Kahi apake uss Devar ka disease toh pass on nahi ho gaya naa... I mean he is the biggest cheater.
Jeevika: Oi don't say anything about my Devar.
Manvi: aacha bachu... Devar kya mil gaya.. Behna ko bhul Gaye. So quicky party change.
Jeevika: maanuuu
Manvi: Nahi Di... I won't tolerate this...main...main...Yes... I'm
Going to complain
Jeevika confused and Amused at the same time..Manvi seeing jeevika's expression becomes annoyed.
Manvi: I'm going to Virat's Room and complaining..
Jeevika: Maanu tu meri complain Virat se karege toh woh toh meri hi side lega Na. *smiling*
Manvi: Do you think I'm a
Fool... Mein toh Jeeju se complain karuge * wicked smile*
Jeevika with a OMG expression...
Jeevika: nahi Maanu please please don't tell Viren ji.
He might ask for a Jurmana
* whispers the end bit*
Manvi: Jurmana?? Ohhh Jurmana... Haaaye then toh I'm running to tell Jeeju..
Manvi runs towards the door and jeevika runs after her. Manvi reaches Virat'sBedroom door and opens it without knocking. She sees the two brothers sleeping so comfortably. Jeevika arrives and gets hold of manvi from the back. manvi doesn't move. Jeevika looks at the sight Manvi is seeing. Jeevika
Smiles.
Manvi turns around to face jeevika.
Manvi: Oi hoi... Jealous ho gaye kya? *giggles* Mann mein toh you must be wishing it is you instead of Virat sleeping next to Jeeju.
Jeevika: Maanu... Ek chaped maru tujhe... Aapne bade Di se esse Baat karte hai.. * embaraased*
Manvi: Oi hoi shy why ho Gaye meri behna * smiling*
Jeevika: shup Kar chetan... Let's go
Before we wake them up.
When they are about to leave... They hear someone say Jeevika...they turn around and find Viren
Saying Jeevika's name.
Manvi starts to Giggle whereas Jeevika hides her face and blushes.
Manvi: Lagata hai Jeeju apake naam
ki Mala jap rahe hai *giggling* bade Beeji se competition hona chahiye. *laughing*
The two bhaiyas are still sleeping.
Virat: Who is this idiot? Oh manvi...
Manvi is shocked... She is confused whether Virat is awake or asleep.. He goes near him and sees him. He is in deep sleep.
Manvi: Chep... You get up and see what I do to you...* some idea strikes her mind* Mein idiot huh? Wait my one and only chep..
She runs out of the room.
Jeevika is still standing there and decides to move towards sleeping
Viren. She adjusts the hair coming on his face. Viren smiles. And says Jeevika again... Jeevika smile and goes towards the door when suddenly Manvi bumps into her...



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This is the link to the 2nd Thread:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3492083Edited by -Anika- - 11 years ago

aww that was cute! great start plz pm me the next part wen u continue!

Plz contiune!! loved it!❤️

Bad writing skills???
I think u meant superb writing skills i loved it lol especially virat mumbling idiot maanvi lol please pm me when u continue thanksz

please continue soon, this is really good i wonder what manvi will do to poor virat. please PM me when you update, thanks

Edited by amee1 - 12 years ago

awww so cute. Plz cntinue nd do telme

do continue it was so superb

So cute.eagrly wating 2 c wht is going in manvi's mind.cntinue soon

nice...so wats manvi's plan ?

Aww that's soo cute. It was a great first try at writing. I'm eagerly waiting for the next bit :)