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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Thank you so much guys! 😃
You are guys are too sweet. I have written the next part and I'll post it in a few minutes or hours 😉
Ani
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue ... continue ... continue ...

Good Job ... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys 😊
Thank you so much again for your comments 😊 Please give our feedback on this part too.


Jeevika: Maanu tu kya Kar rahe hai?
Manvi: Di... Shhh... Why are you shouting? Listen... Your Devar needs to be taught a lesson * wicked smile*
Jeevika: * confused* Lesson?
Manvi: Yes Lesson... Don't you feel Di that the Glow on your Devar's face is faded away. * smiling looking at Virat's sleeping form*
Jeevika giving her a suspicious look.
Manvi: Arre yaar aap bhi naa...
After living with Jeeju you have forgotten about my baadmash company...
Jeevika: please Maanu don't get into
Any panga... Meri Baat...
Manvi: Nahi di... Ek bar Maine commitment Kar di phir me aapke kya apne bhi nahi sunti...
Jeevika: Haaye...Meri Maanu kitne filmy ho gaye hai... Tujhe toh pakka award Mile ga..
Manvi: Thank you... Thank you.. Di I have already written a thank you speech too.
Jeevika: Ek chaped Maru ge.. Mannu let's go from here..
Manvi: Naaahii Di... Pehle I have to finish my commitment.
Jeevika: tu kya Karne wali hai?
Manvi: I'll tell you Di.. After all Behen hoon mein aapke khoon ka rishta hai hamara *smiling*
Jeevika: Maanu baata mujhe..
Manvi holds jeevika's hand and takes her towards Virat's side.
Manvi: look at your Devar... Tch tch tch.. The glow on his face is disappearing. To make him look good I have the manvi special blusher. That will give him a good glow Na* giggling*
Jeevika: Mannu please yeh...
Manvi: please di... Thode masti please
Jeevika is smiling.
Manvi: well done my behna... Now
Listen... Yaad hai chachi said this when we were getting you ready for
The mata ki choki.
Jeevika has a confused look..
Manvi: The red lip-is-stick makes your face bootiful * laughing quitely*
Jeevika has a confused look first then it changes into a shocked expression and smiles a bit.
Jeevika: Maanu meri Baat sun... Yeh maat...
Manvi: please Di please Di... Pleaseee
Jeevika: theek hai *smiling*
Manvi: YAAAY...
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai...
Jeevika: Ssshhh Mannu..you will wake them up
Manvi: Nahi Di... Manvi apne excitement ko control mein rakh.
Jeevika is just looking at manvi and remembering their time in Hrishikesh.
Manvi: Di.. Silent mode se bahar please.
Jeevika: chalo chalo let's do it * excited*
Manvi: Di I'm very proud of you* giggling*
Manvi Sat down next to Virat and for a few second got lost in his face. She thought Should I really do this? Jeevika nudged her and she came back to her senses. She smiled and got the blusher out. With her wicked smile she started to apply it. He moved a little. Jeevika and manvi both got scared; they ducked down just in case Virat opened his eyes. Their guess was right... Virat opened his eyes a little.
Virat: Who was tickling me? Oh man I'm sure it was just my hand or was it a insect?* mumbling* Whatever man.
Jeevika and manvi decided to stay where they were for a bit long till
Virat went into deep sleep.
Jeevika: Maanu tu bhi naa
Manvi: Chill di... I think now no more
Blusher. Let's move to Lip-is-stick.
* giggling*
Jeevika was giggling too. They both got up to check and found Virat fast asleep.
Manvi got the red lipstick out and applied it on Virat. Finally they did it.
Jeevika felt really bad for doing this
But thought it is okay. Anything to make her Mannu happy.
Jeevika: Mannu i think something is missing.
Manvi: Di kya?
Jeevika: ruk 2 mins.
Jeevika ran and went to her room to get something special.
Manvi: Di Jaldi... What have you got?
Jeevika: To make my Devar more Bootiful I have bindi *giggling*
Manvi: Omg Di... You have become
Naughty too... Jeeju se lesson liye hai kya naughty hone kai liye
Jeevika: chup Mannu... Now put this
Bindi on my Devar... I feel so guilty Maanu.
Manvi: Di We are just having fun so chill! Now let's leave.
Jeevika: ek minute... Not so fast... If my Devar has to get pranked.. Then why not Viren Ji?
Manvi: Diii... You- Will-Do- That- On -Jeeju? I don't believe it! * shocked*
Jeevika: Mannu ... Let's put a lipstick mark on Viren ji's cheek. * Excited*
Manvi: Okay... Who are you? Where is my jeevika di?
Jeevika: Mannu now I have also become a part of your badmash company.
Manvi just hugged jeevika. She was so happy that her sister was happy. Nothing in the world mattered to her than her sister's happiness.
Jeevika applied the red lipstick on herself and kiss her hand to get the mark. She Walked to Viren side and kept her hand on his cheek.
Manvi came behind her.
Manvi: Di you could have done a direct kiss on Jeeju's cheek. I mean I would have turned around if you felt so embarrassed. * cheeky smile*
Jeevika: Chup Kar chetan. Let's go now.
They both left the Room. It was 11pm by the time they went to sleep.

The next day:

Around 6am..

Viren's alarm went off he woke up and nudged Virat to get up too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesommeee!! Updatteee quick n sooon gettin restless already to see reactions!!! pls update soon! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOL. I can't wait to read about their reaction to the makeover! Update soon please!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: virenjeevika

Awesommeee!! Updatteee quick n sooon gettin restless already to see reactions!!! pls update soon!



Thank you so much! I haven't finished writing the next part... I'll update tomorrow now 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey update soon dear...it was osum, u made me laugh thrugh d whole part.eagrly waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i was egarly waiting for your update... now i m even more egar for the 3rd part!!!!! plz update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahaha  Too funny plz continue pm when done thanks :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's was great please continue and pm me sooon