Arhi FF: Ripped * Part 9 Update-pg23 19th Oct*

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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

U r writing like its a novel...good one...reminds me of sidney sheldon..

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hatathbristi

@hatathbristi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

wow..It seems here La n Shyam are involved with each other and might be ASR is trapped..lets see..what you unfold...

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Poor Khushi :( She Is Advantage For Everyone As She Is Too Innocent 🥺

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Wow that was really well wrote
Loved the uodate
Thanks for the pm :)

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Wah_taj

@Wah_taj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

wow..very well written!! loved it:)

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

I came across this FF, by chance and have been totally captivated by the way your are building this story and the suspense. Every character stands out in the story and everyone seems to have a strong trait.
I'm sending you a buddy request, if you do send out PMs when you update, Ill be grateful to receive one and comment.

P.S- Out of interest why is the FF titled Ripped?

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

great part dear... so lavanya is back or is it her memories? um confused!!!
i feel bad for khushi... sad yaar

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Woah! That was...something!

If the entire update wasnt confusing enough and WHAT THE enough, the last part was just OMG!

Very powerful writing, intense emotions and action filled chapter. Do update soon and PM me. :)

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

See! See! I was right! No matter what you try and say that this is crap or whatever but it wasn't!

Argh! Garima! How much do I want to kill her? And Payal is almost as bad.

Hmmm even more intrigued now about Lavanya and Arnav.

Is it Lavanya and Shyam together? Eww!