OS : A day without each other updtd chap 3 pg 24

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Sana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Awesomee!! Loved this.. You have to continue it yaar...

Ha ha Khushi checking him out 🤣

And the Jeff part was too good. Arnav being so possessive about her 👏

And the last part.. feel bad for him 😭

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Devi

@devibnair2009

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Lovely...do update...wenever u do plz PM...

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asumi

@asumi

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

for starters!!! good that you continued!! LOVED it!!

aww he things she doesnt love hiM!!! that was soo touching!!! :) :) :) simply superb!

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limitless

@limitless

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

please continue :) loved it

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taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Awesome update, pls continue it. Thanks for the pm

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molten_lava

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

I absolutely loved this part. Starting from those three girls complimenting Arnav to Khushi and Khushi telling haven't you seen Salman. That was hilarious!😆

And I loved Khushi checking out Arnav that too peeping through his button hole.😆

And finally I loved the whole Jeff thing and Arnav's possessiveness when Jeff mistakes Khushi to be Akash's wife.😆

It was nicely written and I could imagine every part of it. I think this part was better than the first part.

But u know at the end, I felt bad for Arnav when he says why can't she love him. Dumbo doesn't realize she loves him as much as he does.

Thanks for the pm. Are planning to continue this? I think you have a creative mind and these scenarios were wonderfully depicted.👏

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aashshhs

@aashshhs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Lovely update...thanks for the pm, I really appreciate it :) :) :)

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HansaN

@HansaN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

continue soon thanks loved the update

thanks

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628497

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

awww...

i could say cuteness n awsomeness persoified in dis os...

loved it

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peepli

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: molten_lava
I absolutely loved this part. Starting from those three girls complimenting Arnav to Khushi and Khushi telling haven't you seen Salman. That was hilarious!😆
And I loved Khushi checking out Arnav that too peeping through his button hole.😆
And finally I loved the whole Jeff thing and Arnav's possessiveness when Jeff mistakes Khushi to be Akash's wife.😆
It was nicely written and I could imagine every part of it. I think this part was better than the first part.
But u know at the end, I felt bad for Arnav when he says why can't she love him. Dumbo doesn't realize she loves him as much as he does.
Thanks for the pm. Are planning to continue this? I think you have a creative mind and these scenarios were wonderfully depicted.👏

Thank you so much for taking out instances from the OS and appreciating it!!