OS: I held her heart - Page 9

Wow, that was such a beautiful OS Lyra, the way you portrayed his emotions was amazing :)

ery beautiful OS.. You have portrayed Arnav;s feelings so brillianty.. Loved it..

Beautiful! What a journey it has been since that night on the terrace. And you have captured it so well!

aww..i loved it..so emotional!!d hope factor plays a key role here n its been portrayed very well!!

beautiful update as always...arnav's feelings were captured brilliantly
and the last line bowled me over

there is a next part?

Originally posted by: naddiya26

i am not able to find the next part you have send the 12 page link

AMAZING!!
That's right Arnav just let your feelings take over! Man you need to understand she's innocent. Can't blame you though..you're too cute ;)

Awesome writing again! I read this OS like 5 times because it truly captured Arnav's emotions essence! Gotta go but will keep refreshing the page to see if you update ;)

I know there was so much angst throughout the OS, but it was the last line that stung me the most! :'(

Beautifully written Lyraa! :)

very well written!! 

Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101

AMAZING!!
That's right Arnav just let your feelings take over! Man you need to understand she's innocent. Can't blame you though..you're too cute ;)

Awesome writing again! I read this OS like 5 times because it truly captured Arnav's emotions essence! Gotta go but will keep refreshing the page to see if you update ;)