OS: I held her heart

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
This OS is dedicated to those three frns who keep me sane- Harshu, Bhavi and Aparna... 
I know i havent been commenting much but thats because i havent read.. m gona catch up on every FF after exams... so plzzz dont mind if i dont comment... till may...
I never make it a compulsion to comment every time i write something but yea at least make it a point to hit on the like button,... 
neway... my FFs are on a hold till may... 
happy reading
PMS later

Note: I donot accept frn req from those who have never commented...
Edited by Lyraa99 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago

Me first again..LOL

Well I could have said that it was gorgeous, I could feel the words stringing my heartbeats, and it felt I came alive as I read the last line, the two scenes reflected the two sides of my heart

I knew I loved her and she loved me
She loved me and that was all I wanted to know

Seriously, you are the finest writer I came across, I have to admit you never fail to amaze me with you strings of words
Edited by -Murphy369- - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
love to res

okk first thanx u very much and dear i keep u sane haye:*
omg i thought i m girl who always make u insane by constatly saying that lyraa u r scaring me:p

coming back to OS
this is beautiful as i always say, u know what there is flood of all emotions in ur each updt.:)
first that payash wedding days scene, loved how u described his realization of love and all his mind thought:)
and holi
bestest epi ever:)
u know i cannt copy paste, there r many lovely lines that i loved:)
muuuhaaa(2nd kiss frm me):D

p.s.- HARSHU (holy) ;)
i know m crazy:p

*edit again*
beautiful banner:):)Edited by aparna5293 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
one word for your os Beautiful

loved it very well written 
Posted: 11 years ago
Breathtakingly BEAUTIFUL! Loved every bit of...it conveyed his feeling so damn perfectly.Clap
Posted: 11 years ago
Aww... I love you Adi!! Seriously!! :)
What shall I say? I love your writing. As I've already told you over phone... (yeah, people... We're cool that way!!) ;)
Thank you for giving such a beautiful OS and dedicated to me too... :)
Posted: 11 years ago
WOW!!! u described arnav's feelings beautifully n so accurately..this is what he must have been feeling those times...luvd the holi part especiallyDay DreamingHugdear,have i told u that u r a genius!!Big smile 
ps-i just saw that my comment has appeared on the 1st page..yippee!! this is the first time!!Dancing
Edited by abcxyz2099 - 11 years ago

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