Me first again..
Well I could have said that it was gorgeous, I could feel the words stringing my heartbeats, and it felt I came alive as I read the last line, the two scenes reflected the two sides of my heart
I knew I loved her and she loved me
She loved me and that was all I wanted to know
Seriously, you are the finest writer I came across, I have to admit you never fail to amaze me with you strings of wordsEdited by -Murphy369- - 9 years ago