OS: I held her heart

Addie07 @Addie07 IF-Dazzler Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

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Addie07 @Addie07 IF-Dazzler Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

This OS is dedicated to those three frns who keep me sane- Harshu, Bhavi and Aparna...

I know i havent been commenting much but thats because i havent read.. m gona catch up on every FF after exams... so plzzz dont mind if i dont comment... till may...

I never make it a compulsion to comment every time i write something but yea at least make it a point to hit on the like button,...

neway... my FFs are on a hold till may...

happy reading

PMS later

Note: I donot accept frn req from those who have never commented...

Edited by Lyraa99 - 12 years ago

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Sanchari @.hea. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Me first again..😆

Well I could have said that it was gorgeous, I could feel the words stringing my heartbeats, and it felt I came alive as I read the last line, the two scenes reflected the two sides of my heart

I knew I loved her and she loved me

She loved me and that was all I wanted to know

Seriously, you are the finest writer I came across, I have to admit you never fail to amaze me with you strings of words

Edited by -Murphy369- - 12 years ago

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Res;)
love to res

okk first thanx u very much and dear i keep u sane haye:*
omg i thought i m girl who always make u insane by constatly saying that lyraa u r scaring me:p

coming back to OS
this is beautiful as i always say, u know what there is flood of all emotions in ur each updt.:)
first that payash wedding days scene, loved how u described his realization of love and all his mind thought:)
IT HAD NEVER BEEN ME WHO HELD HER HEART awww poor my arnie :|
and holi
bestest epi ever:)
u know i cannt copy paste, there r many lovely lines that i loved:)
awsome
muuuhaaa(2nd kiss frm me):D

p.s.- HARSHU (holy) ;)
i know m crazy:p

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beautiful banner:):)Edited by aparna5293 - 12 years ago

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Nadia @naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

one word for your os Beautiful

loved it very well written

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nj123 @nj123 Senior Member Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Breathtakingly BEAUTIFUL! Loved every bit of...it conveyed his feeling so damn perfectly.👏

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Harshitha Shankar @-_-harsh42 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww... I love you Adi!! Seriously!! :)
What shall I say? I love your writing. As I've already told you over phone... (yeah, people... We're cool that way!!) ;)
Thank you for giving such a beautiful OS and dedicated to me too... :)

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Not Available @Ribelle IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW!!! u described arnav's feelings beautifully n so accurately..this is what he must have been feeling those times...luvd the holi part especially😍🤗dear,have i told u that u r a genius!!😃

ps-i just saw that my comment has appeared on the 1st page..yippee!! this is the first time!!

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Bhavapriya @Bunny_Bear IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww lyraa you dedicated to me. I am totally honoured. Well you too keep me sane from ipkknd obsession and also our exams hon. Os was beautifully written. I have so manu fav lines tat i lost count of it. You are so good with human emotions especially angst as many will agree with me. Well now time to get back to books. Happy reading.

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