OS: I held her heart - Page 11

Posted: 12 years ago
This Os left a sweet stinging pain in my heart. Amazing.!
Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my that was beautiful and sad. Excellent piece of work.
Posted: 12 years ago
Lryaa U have Done it again , U made me speechless WOW AMMAZING BEAUTIFUL Stunning Heart breaking , SO much more๐Ÿค—

I always Get tears flooding in my eyes when EVer i read ur Stories, Seriously :)

I wanted to also write some thing, choose a fav part that did make my Heart feel the emotion, the position the description that was amazing and Brilliant, but It was all too good, and remarkable Beautiful always keep it up, ...I HAVE tears in my heart and EYES ...woww 
Posted: 12 years ago
wow...lyraa...
that was absolutely beautiful...
u described arnav's feelings in the best possible way...
LOVED IT... 

luv ya
~~~ sam
Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written
Loved it.
Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...it's so sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ! I swear you have da ability to make me feel any range of emotions with just da play of words that you use ๐Ÿ‘...my heart went 'thud' when u portrayed da desparation with which Arnie wished to be loved by da 1 girl he had ever loved...
Posted: 12 years ago
nice os :) hope he realises soon that she only loved him and not the snake!!! liked how you put the two scenes together thank you :)
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... It was beautiful. Very well written. Great job!!!
Thanks for this wonderful FF.
Posted: 12 years ago
really luved it๐Ÿ˜Š
beautiful display of arnav's emotions
Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully  written Lyraa.

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