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Posted: 12 years ago
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bc is so much angry...coz he cant believe that he was a traitor...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 8
i just love this episode so much...
the way HIS entry was too good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 9

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A young boy riding on his bike attends the phone call from his mobile & replied,"Yes maa,am reaching...it's not aeroplane...it's a bike..."Then he saw a beautiful woman driving a red car & disconnected the phone & started flirting with her.He follows her car & he introduces himself,"Chori,...am Captain Malik...Vikram Malik...am going to KMA.Woman like u have to be in the army."


That woman who was irritated thinks of having fun with him & said giving a wide smile,"Really...will u help me with the admission..."Malik said proudly,"Of course,let us meet on Friday night dinner...I'll explain u all abt the courses...what say u madam?"


That woman said innocently,"Really...lekin suna hai academy ke gates 6 baje band ho jaathi hai...aur abhi band hone mein 2 minute bache hai...???"Malik said confidently,"Bet with me my dear we'll reach..."That woman said confidently,"1 minute 40 seconds..."Malik said confidently,"Let's go madam..."



Malik went ahead in the bike from the car.That woman also drives in top speed.Malik comes on the time of gate closed & that woman also.The guard saw the womna's car & opened the gate,that woman entered & Malik also entered immediately.The guard protests then Malik said calmly,"Abe diktha nahin hai mein Captain Snghal ke saathe hoon!!!"That woman was amazed & Malik smiled at her widely.




That woman said impressively,"Doctor Captain Shalini Singhal(Dr.S)...very smart..."And she exited from there.Malik followed her & said smiling,"Madam,I've won the bet...if u're free then...let's go to friday night dinner...?"Dr.S said bossily,"I'll not socialise with Cadets."Malik said confidently,"No problem madam...I'll not be wearing the uniform on that time..."Dr.S said immediately,"First let us meet Brigadier Chandok..."Malik said happily,"Of course madam...let us meet tawoo..."They report to BC's office.




BC asked bossily,"U're late Mr.Malik..."Malik said confidently,"I was here before the gates were closed..."BC asked sarcastically,"Oh & where u lost?"Malik said confidently,"I was repairing Capt.Singhal's car."Dr.S was shocked hearing this while Malik smirked seeing Dr.S.BC asked Malik,"Are u mechanic?"


Malik said,"No sir I'm a farmer's son...but in the fields...i repair my tractor...jai jawan jai kisan..."BC asked  seeing towards Dr.S,"Is it true?"Dr.S said calmly,"Yes sir..."Then BC admits Malik...Dr.s & Malik come from BC's cabin while Malik follows Dr.S & tries to impress her for the dinner.But Dr.S was least interested then Malik asks the way to boys hostel.


But Dr.S sends him to girls hostel giving him wrong direction.Malik reaches girls hostel not seeing the board & enters room no.202 & sleeps on his bed.



Here Geet comes near hall of the fame & picks her bro's photo from the dustbin but someone said apprehensively,"Miss Singh!"Geet threw the photo back to the dust bin & turned & saw it was Maan.Geet was mesmerised once again in those chocolate brown eyes & their eye locked for a brief moment.Both come to the present world after their eye lock & both saw the ground immediately.



While Maan asked enquiringly,"Miss Singh,aap yahan kya kar rahi hai?"Geet was nervous & stuttered,"Woh...actually...mera rumall yahan gir gayi thi...usse hi dhonndne aayi hoon..."Maan was bit felt awakward but said warmly,"


Miss Singh,aap jaanthi haina ki Brigaider bahut strict hai rules mein...aath baje lights off hoga aur ab aath bajgar 5 minute hai...ab agar aap apne kamre mein nahin gayi toh abhi aap apna rumaal khoya hai...lekin aap ek aur minute bhi yahan par rahegi tab aap apne admission se hath dho baitogi...aap samajha rahi haina..???"Geet nodded politely.Maan said smiling warmly,"Dismiss."



Geet was once again mesmerised with his smile but comes to the present world & went from there & hid herself behind the pillar.Maan saw around him & went from there immediately.Geet came back seeing that he had gone & took her bro's photo from the dustbin & rolled it & went towards the way where Maan went.


Maan went but not to his room but to BC's office.Geet observed this & followed him but before that she took her bro's photo.Maan entered BC's room & started searching something in computer...in drawyer...in cupboard where the files were kept.He didn't get what he was searching & thought,"Agar Cadets profile yahan nahi hai toh kis ke paas hai!!!!"



Then Geet entered her dark room holding the picture of her bro & sat on the bed.She didn't switched on the light & closed the door & not thinking she sat on her bed,then Malik screamed & So Geet also.Geet said angrily,"Kaun ho tum aur tumhaari himmat kaise hui mere kamre mein aane ki???"


Malik was puzzled & asked her with amazement,"Kaun ho tum chori aur tumhaari himmat kaise huyi mere kamre mein aane ki?Yeh room no.202 haina???"Geet said angrily,"Yeh girls hostel hai naaki tumhaare room no.202."


Malik blabbered something abt jyothishya but Geet shouted at him.Malik tried to touch her in dark but Geet twisted his hands.Malik screamed with pain & said,"Phoolandevi...mere haath chodo..."



On that time Pooja got up rubbing her eyes & said excitedly,"Rohit...Rohit...at last u came...!"And tried to hug Malik while Malik frees from Geet's grip on that time his watch falls to the floor & said uncomfotably,"She's is an indecent girl...she's so dangerous yaar..."


While Geet tries to convince Pooja that he's not Rohit but Pooja insists on switching on the light.But Malik stops Geet by pulling her back on that time Lolita Sen comes there & shouts from outside to open the door.Malik jumps from the window to escape with his bag & luggage while lolita sen shouts to open the door.



Precap is same.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Excellent one...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting part...

Pooja misunderstood Vikram to be Rohit...

waiting for next...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates..all updates are very well written..Thanks for giving fast updates..Sorry for late entry,but loved all your updates..thanks for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
nice part...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 9
nice part...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 10


Malik entered the boys hostel & entered the room number 202 & said doubtfully,"Jai jawan jai kisan."No one answered & then he entered the room & opened the blanket of Kunal.Kunal gets off & said shockingly,"Who's that?"Malik asked doubtfully,"Are u a boy or not?"Kunal said innocently,"What?"Malik said then confirming that he's a boy,"Nothing...tum so jao."


Here in girls hostel,Lolita Sen enquringly,"Are u sure that was a boy?Am guessing that he's ur boyfriend!"Geet said clearly,"Madam,mera koi boy friend nahi hai..."On that time Pooja got up.Lolita Sen asked her,"Do u have any boy friend?"


Pooja replied innocently,"Rohit."Lolita Sen said angrily,"Come again!"Pooja asked innocently,"Where?"Geet said innocently,"When I find out then i'll inform u madam."Lolita Sen said,"If u inform me or not am going to kill him,"angrily.


Geet saw the watch on the floor in front of Lolita Sen's feet & smiled mischievously.Lolita Sen asked seeing Geet smile,"What makes u smile Cadet?"Geet said innocently,"Nothing madam.Lolita Sen said bossily,"Fine lights out & close the door Cadets."And she exited the room.Geet closed the door & locked it.



Pooja asked innocently,"Kya huva yaar?"Geet answered,"Kuch nahi tum so jao."Pooja said angrily,"Ab neend kaise aayegi...badi mushkil se mein apne aapko sleep mode mein daali thi aur woh bhi davayi khaake lekin woh toh full volume mein rest hogaya hai."Geet switched off the light & said,"Good night Pooja."And went to sleep while Pooja also wished her good night.



In the meantime,in boys hostel,Ali woke up suddenly & saw that fan isn't on & asked to Arjun,"Kya bijli chali gayi hai kya!!!"Arjun said,"Mujhe woh glass dena aur meine hi pankha band kar diya hai...mujhe achchi nahi lagthi ki koi bhi cheez mere room mein hile..."


Ali gave the glass & asked,"Apko paani chahiye...?/?"Arjun said directly,"Nahi...so jao..."Arjun opened an alcohol bottle & poured some rum to the glass of water & started drinking & asked to Ali,"Peeyega...waise tumhaare dharam mein ye allowed nahi haina???"Ali said feeling uncomfortable,"Why don't u sleep,we've to get up at 530hrs tomorrow morning.


Arjun replied,"I was getting up at 430 hrs in jail..."Ali felt even more uncomfortable & asked,"Jail...kya kiya aapne?"Arjun said carelessly,"Khoon."Ali felt uncomfortable."Tension nahi lene ka...ek kaan se sunne ka aur doosren kaan se chod dene ka...!"He started drinking while Ali said feeling uncomfortable,"Hum abhi washroom jaa kar aathe hai..."And he exited the room...



When Arjun was drinking the alcohol then he got the message from Geet in the mobile.Arjun answered it immediately & his it inside his sleeves.Ali went to meet Kunal while he met Malik there.Malik appreciated the girl who is residing in room no.202.


Ali feels uncomfortable & said that we've to give respect for woman.But Malik said in flirtation style,"Hum bhi auraton ko izzat dethe hai...aur unhe mohabbat bhi..."Ali commented abt his roommate that he's decent not like Kunal's roommate just he has the drawback of drinking.Kunal asked innocently that he has come from the jail then Ali nodded yes to him saying that he said it himself.


Malik noticed that he has lost his watch & remembered that it has fell in the room no.202 of girls hostel.Then Malik took Kunal with him to take the watch from the room no.202 girls hostel.Then both Malik & Geet quarell each other on that time only Malik sees Geet's bro's photo & Geet twists his hand once again.


Malik screams with pain calling her phoolandevi once again.Geet ties his hands & takes him to BC's office but sees Maan there.Geet asks Maan apprehensively that what he's doing here while Maan saves himself by sending them both back saying that they've to solve their problem only.


Geet was a bit suspicious that what Maan was doing in BC's office & sends the message to Arjun to come & meet her near the hostel.
Arjun came there while Geet stood there waiting for him.Arjun asked worriedly,"Kya hai Geet tum aise mujhe kyun bulaaya sab thik to haina...???"


Geet said calmly,"Sab thik hai Arjun...mein Captain Khurana ke baare mein baat karna chahtha hoon...mein unhe aaj shaam se BC ke cabin ke aas paas bhatak the huve dekha hai..."
Arjun took a deep calming breath & said smiling,"Tum bhi na...Geet...mujhe daraa diya..."Woh isliye kyunki Maan Cadets ki profie dhoond raha hain...aisa mujhe HQ se information aaya tha...Woh unke mission ke kuch sambandh ki isiliye woh Cadets ki profile dhonnd rahe hai...aur kuch nahi..."

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Geet asked worriedly,"Par kyun...!!!"Arjun said smiling,"Woh toh abhi...Abhijeet se pata chalega...tum uski fikar mat karo...mein tumhebata detha hoon...kal...ab tum so jao..."Geet nodded & went back to her hostel.



While Maan had seen Geet's guts when she charged the flriting Malik after meeting with Maan.She apparently twisted Malik's arms.He was getting suspicious of her...but his heart said that she's not the culprit...


Maan was mesmerised with her beauty & her big grown eyes which were windows of her soul made his sleep snatched...He was awake all the night without the sleep & sleep came when he concluded that she's not the traitor...


Precap-Geet's first training - encounter with Major Nair.


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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