interesting part!loved d prologue where u mentioned shyamu chakki pissing n pissing...reminded me of khushi acting drunk n imagining arnav chakki pissing in jail!!!
great start! i love what shyam is doing now :P
interesting!! will be waiting for more!! :)
Originally posted by: umamashahid
it seems to b interesting.update soon and thanx for the pm
Originally posted by: meenaluma
great start sandy pls continue soon
Originally posted by: ouiouith
oohh nice starting continue soon plz
Originally posted by: starlight06
Love the title
Originally posted by: gunjan.ria
Hmm..nice start..eager to knw wat wud hppn..update soon,n do send me a pm..thank u :)
Originally posted by: ...Rafid...
continue !!!!!!
looks interesting !
Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
sounds very interesting yaar.. cant wait for their first meeting :D
that was a good start continue soon waiting 4 ur PM
interesting...continue soon...😊
Originally posted by: aakriti120
very interesting start..
will look forward to reading further..
please continue soon...
many thanks for the pm..:)
nice start, pm me
Originally posted by: icegurl789
amazingg plzz continue soon ...nycc start :D
continuee .. Please .. !! interesting .. c
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