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Posted: 12 years ago
just pretty amazinnn DEE..😳.sry fr late comment but i just came across this right now...🥱
It's justtt perfect !
i mean what can i say abt ur writing...uff...sooo gr8...as said earlier!😆
i'll say it once again fr suchhh a lovellly FF...i mean really thoughtful...😍👍🏼
mwuaaah...keep writing these FF so that i can comment nd lyke ! 🤣lolzzz...
nd ya whenever u update any of ur FF...OS...anything...do not forget to PM me DEE !!!😉 oherwise i'll be heart broken..!!!🥺😆
Have said enough rubbish !hehehe🤣
~~~🤗luv u tonnsss🤗~~ (i'll keep it sayin so don mind) 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

just pretty amazinnn DEE..😳.sry fr late comment but i just came across this right now...🥱

It's justtt perfect !
i mean what can i say abt ur writing...uff...sooo gr8...as said earlier!😆
i'll say it once again fr suchhh a lovellly FF...i mean really thoughtful...😍👍🏼
mwuaaah...keep writing these FF so that i can comment nd lyke ! 🤣lolzzz...
nd ya whenever u update any of ur FF...OS...anything...do not forget to PM me DEE !!!😉 oherwise i'll be heart broken..!!!🥺😆
Have said enough rubbish !hehehe🤣
~~~🤗luv u tonnsss🤗~~ (i'll keep it sayin so don mind) 😆



Gosh yar..u r really a fabulous commentor for sure...luv ur comments😊..hope u wud never becum tired commenting!!!
Edited by snigdha143 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow  love it...waiting to see charlie and kriya's reaction...lolz!!
updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
                                       Part 4
 
Charlie gets down d her in her own accent giving a huge smile to rey n swaron.Yes she was beautiful dan before..she was wearing a top n jean shorts.D boys around were drooling over her but she was over rey.She shifts her gazes to kriya n dey share a tashan-tashan look.Sharon senses d situation.
Sharon:Charlie..nice to meet you*giving a hug*.
Charlie:ya same here baby..
She moves a bit forward n shakes hand wid reyam..wen she cums to kriya she ignores her n moves while every1 were looking at dem.
Sharon:chale??
Charlie:yup..
Reyam set d luggage in d car.Charlie sits in d driver seat wid Sharon beside her.Kriya n swayam was sitting backside with windows on der side n rey between dem.Charlie adjusts d mirror to look at her love n starts blabbering.Kriya was annoyed n she dozes off on rey's shoulder.Charlie who was looking at dem becums angry n fells silent.They reach d apartment in which dey had to say.Rey carries kriya in his arms to d room n lays her down on d bed as soon as swayam opens d door.Charlie's jealous had no bounds..it reaches d peak level.Rey joins d others n dey sit talking for a long tym.Kriya wakes up n checks out d room..it was a typical room but a gud one.She freshens herself n comes out.Rey n charlie were sitting together.She was angry n jealous.She didnt want to disturb dem n goes to d same room.Rey watches her go by n follows her.
Rey:Kriya tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho..aao sab bahar hain..
Kriya:Rey mujhe koi interest nahi hain..let me sit here.
Rey:Ok..mein bhi yahi baitha hun..
Kriya:No..
Rey:Yes..
Kriya:No..meine kahaan na..
Rey:N i told yes..mein tumhara sath hee bahar javoongi..
Kriyaansh were having convo n so did swaron but charlie was busy checking out in d direction of room.Rey n kriya doesnt come out.
Charlie:sharon hum bhi andar jake baithena...
Sharon:Ok..chalo.
Charlie n swaron goes to join kriyaansh.Now it was d tym for charlie to becum jealous.She was fuming in anger to see dem so close.She sits on d other side of rey.Rey gets uncomfortable bcoz he was btwn dem.There was a complete silence.
Kriya:sharon i think hume jaake clg dekhna chahiye..
Sharon:kyun..hum directly college jaa sakte hai na..
Kriya:v can go..jaane ke pehle hee dekhiga tho accha lagega..
Charlie:Oh pls..tum ye tym waste programs nahi rakho..
Kriya:Huh..tym waste..tym ke baare mein tum baat kari rahi ho..miss...watever.
Charlie:haan..y cant i speak?.
Kriya:Hum sab tumari tym ka punctuality aaj morning hee dekha...aadha ghanta wait karvaliya aur tym ke baare mein baat kar rahi ho..
Charlie:huh..u never changed kriya n never will..
Kriya:Tum bhi nahi badalogi chipkali..
Charlie:chipkali??????..mein chipkali tho tum gadhi ho'.
Kriya:mein gadhi tho..tum ****** ho..
Charlie:Tum tho ****** ho'
{Don't misunderstand ***** itsnt censored words I don't know wat to fill in d gapJ..dats y.}
Rey n swaron watches as dey fight often laughing between der comments.They became even more serious wen dey were laughing n continue d fight making it endless..
Rey:STOP IT!!!TUM DONO CHUP HOJAVO..WARNA PATHA NAHI MEIN KYA KARLUNGA..
Kriya:tum mujhe nahi usko bolna chahiye sab isne shuru kiya hain..
Charlie*interrupting*:Wow..tum ladna shuru kardi ab mera naam le rahe ho..
Kriya:Hello u started it'n u kno wat ur big chatterpox..kabhi bhak bhak karne lagte ho..
Charlie:mein chatterpox tho tum use jyaada ho patha nahi bakhwaas bathe karte ho..
 
Again d fight starts.Poor rey he was between d two..he did so many ways but nothing really worked out.Atlast he gets an idea.He helds kriya tightly n closes her lips wid his hands but kriya tries her level best to remove d hands.
Rey:Charlie ab tum bhi plss chup karo..Kriya..its enough..
Kriya agrees n makes herself calm.She gets up from d bed to go outside as she was already fussed up of d fight.She goes near d door just den..
Charlie:thank u kriya..ur making d place peaceful by going..
Kriya cud no longer resist her words..she took a pillow which was on rey's lap n throws it on Charlie.Even Charlie anger raged she gets up from d bed to start a physical fight but rey pulls her by d waist to d bed to stop her.Kriya glares him a look n den at his hands..he notices her looks n removes his hand. She leaves d room angrily.Sharon goes out to accompany kriya.
Sharon:kriya bahar kyun aayi..
Kriya:Mein nahi ladna chahthi hun isiliye..
Sharon:nahi ladna chahthi tho pehle hee chup honi thi'
Kriya:Mera galthi nahi hain..she started it..
Sharon:tum continue kiya naa?
kriya:haa she started d fight..she doesnt have any ryt to speak to me lyk dat...who d hell is she to say me...
sharon: hayee kria plz gussa maat karo u know naaa how is charlie ...
kria: ya i know but still she shuld had not spoke to me such..
sharon :ooo cool down kria ab chodo naa 
kria haa yaar why shuld i bother abut her...
(mean while in d room)
rey : I'm dead...kria ab mujse naaraz hogi...all dis cozz of charlie urggg😡
charlie: wat happened rey*coming closer to him*
rey:ha ntg i will be back in 10 mins..
charlie:hmmm where r y gng?
rey*in mind*: yaar why dnt she leave me despo gal grrr!!!
rey leaves wid out saying anything to charlie...
rey searching for kria(in mind):kahaan ho baatcutter..just hope u wont b angry wid me!!!:(
sharon: kria let me bring u sum water so dat u can chill out😉
kria: hhaaa u also started to make fun of me !!!!!
sharon:no not like dat...i think u need a break...
kria : kk plz bring sum cool water ya den ...if u dnt mind 
sharon:yup sure darls anything for u
rey atlast finds kriya sitting in d corner sofa.
(sharon doesnt see rey nor does rey see sharon)
kria: *thinking to herself*:aagaya super hero...ab maafi mangegi!! 
rey :Hi jaanu...kaise lag raha hun mein...i kno i am dashing hawwt... heartthrob of gals nd...😉
kriya turns her direction avoiding him..He comes infront of her.
rey :"r u angry wid me sweets"????
kria*angrily*:Mein kaise tum par naaraz ho sakta hun..rey ???? 
Rey:sorry baatcutter!!!I'm really sorry..mein kya karun tum dono tym bhi nahi diya hey baat karne ke..*keeping a baby face*
Kriya:mujhe kyun sorry keh rahi ho..go..go enjoy wid dat idiot!!
He goes down on knees n says sorry.
Kriya:Tumhari galthi nahi hain rey...get up..mein hee pagal hun.Utho..
Rey gets up n sits next to her.
Rey:Hello madam...college kab jaayenge??
Kriya:U r such a swthrt rey!!!Thank you..
Rey:Mujhe patha hain..
Kriya:kya??
Rey:yeh hee ki mein swthrt hun...
Kriya:pakka flirter ho tum..cassinova!!!
Sharon comes wid d glass of water notices dem talking happily n goes away not wanting to disturb dem giving a gud smile.

Precap-New college,new atmosphere n shivam's entry.
Thanks to **Suju**..she helped me to complete d update very soon.
Pls dont forget to post ur reviews n Chasing Midnight SS will be posted 2day!!


Edited by snigdha143 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update.
plz update next part as soon as possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super cool update... Wid awesum Precap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it.

fight was so good.

loved the unofficially official couple.
plz continue like this. love tthis
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hahahaha . . . . Bachpan me ek muhavara(idiom) suna tha ki - "2 billiyon ki ladai me,, bandar fayda uthata hai"
..

but yahan to ulta hi ho gya... Dono ki fight me khud hi fas gaya rey . . . . . Lol 😃

kriya ko manane gaya fir bhi . . . . . How sweet . . . ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one
i loved tat chalie-kriya fight
nicely written
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha143



Gosh yar..u r really a fabulous commentor for sure...luv ur comments😊..hope u wud never becum tired commenting!!!

hehehe DEE...!!!! don even think of that...i will never ever...evr stop commenting on the gr888 FF'S FOR SURE...ESPECIALLY ANYTHING RELATED TO UR'S !!!☺️
so just keep the way u post ur work !!!👍🏼 nd don wry fr the comments...will alwaz give !!!❤️
nd tnx fr the commentry line ...😳