Jeene ke Ishare mil gaye.[FF:VirMan] NOTE-pg57 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Erika95

wonderful story...please pm me 4 the next part...:-P


yep, i've added you to the PM list. so will let you know.
and thanks! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Loved it... Continue soon...


Thanks! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Amri174

I am loving the way you are building their relationship...awesome story:)


hey, Thanks a lot sweetie! haha yea i try hard with their relationship.. but more romance is awaiting in the next few chapters!
And btw i've added you to the buddy list so PM will be on its way soon 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: preethis

Awww superb loved it. So Virmaan are lost again... Waiting for next part...


haha yes you guessed it right..
and thankss! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

plz pm me when you update it..plz keep write it up...its realy nice

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanaakram

plz pm me when you update it..plz keep write it up...its realy nice


Hey, i've added you to buddy. So will send you a PM when i update. Hopefully soon. And thanks! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you are too sweet...you're doing a fantastic job...keep it up...please pm me when you update...thanks 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Soon cute please PM me soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzz update quickly... how long have to wait,, cant wait.. il be v. bzy even exams ahead. but coming on forum for your updates...keep it up.. and pm me plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys, I'm back with Chapter 4. Those who have been waiting for long, the wait is over! woohoo 🥳

I've been getting good responses so far so thankyou! And I hope you continue the support. I am trying to update as quickly as I can. 😊 but you guys are just too quick for me haha.

Chapter 4

"Are you sure, please check again. I will call my brother and family, they are probably sitting inside." Virat said to the man on the reception.

Maanvi was panicking and gave Virat dirty evil look. She started blabbing to Virat..

"What is this! Sab log kahan hai? Aur tum muhje konsi jagha par leker aiye ho? Yahan per sirf couples hi couples dikhai de rahe hain!" Maanvi said looking around at the couples sitting and that too all in one breath, she was tensed. She didn't realise how loud she was and everyone now gave them a weird look.

Virat tired to calm her down, "oye bandariya, tohdi der k liye chup rahongi please! Mein yahan kuch pata karne ki koshish kar raha hoon toh please, 2 minute k liye bilkul chup mere maa?" He did his eyebrow remark.

The man at the receptionist seemed to be amused by their arguments and gave a little laugh. Virat saw this and told the man to mind his business and he grabbed Maanvi's hand and left the place.

"ouch, choodo muhje virat" Manvi said with little pain.

Virat realized he held her hand too tight and let go and saw finger marks and skin going red. He went closer to maanvi and said "Sorry, mein tumhe hurt nahi kar na chahta tha Maanvi, woh. .bas--"

Virat was cut off by Maanvi, "Haan, ab choodo iss baat ko.. Meri Di aur sab kahan hai?!"

"Arrey haan'yahin toh hai, tumhe dikhta nahi hai kya?! Virat said sarcastically. "agar muhje pata hota toh hum yahan par nahi hote dafar!" he added.

"Dekho Mazak mat karo! Tumhari faltu baatein muhje mat sunao, mein ja rahi hoon.." Maanvi said in frustration.

"Oyee, pagal ho? Kahan jane ki baat kar rahi ho?" Virat screamed as Maanvi started walking.

"Tumhe kyun baataon?" Maanvi said.

"Rooko, chalo mein bhi aata hoon." Virat caught up to her.

Just then Virat's phone rang, and thank god he thought it was Viren bhai. He quickly picked up the phone and said "hello Bhai" Maanvi heard this and stopped her steps and turned to face Virat. She was now eager to know what was going on and made faces at Virat.

"Virat, tum aur Maanvi kahan ho?" Viren asked concerned.

"Bhai, pata nahi, aapne jo Restaurant kaha tha wahin gaye par aap sab toh nahi dekhe aur booking bhi nahi hai aise kuch reception walene kaha." Virat explained. Maanvi tried to snatch the phone away from Virat but he was too tall and turned the other way. She kept on trying but it was a fail but instead she would end up touching him in one way or another which Virat was greatly enjoying.

"Seriously, tumhara dhiyahn (concentration) kahan tha? Mein tumse Oceans 3 Resort wale restaurant kahi thi aur tum log galat ocean 3 par ho, abhi ke abhi wahan se sidhe(straight) yahan ah jav." Viren ordered. Virat nods in agreement and Maanvi sees this and asks him for explanations through her mute expressions.

"oooh, achaa (smacked his head lightly), ab it makes sense bhai. Hayee, phele batana chahiye tha na!" Virat said sounding like a fool. Maanvi also smacks him on the head and Virat cuts the phone off.

Maanvi stood a little further away hearing this conversation and was still confused as to what was going on, she couldn't think straight, all she knew was her stomach was rumbling and she wanted to eat!

"oh-ho, ek minute bhi sedhi khari (stand) nahi reh sakti ho? Har baar, Bandariya ki tarah -" Virat questioned her.

Virat couldn't finish the sentence, Maanvi already knew what he was going to say so she just got straight to the point without making too much fuss over who is Bandar and Bandariya. She said "Muhje bhaut bukh lagi hai! Tumhari vahjase meine kuch nahi khaya hai, ab muhje kuch ho gaya na toh tumhari zimadari (responsibility). Samjhai chep!" she screamed at him with her empty stomach.

She frowned and made a cry baby face and turned other way. Virat said "yeh kya hai Maanvi, mein maanta hoon meri galti hain par ab please chalo"

"nahi, tumhari saath nahi jana" Maanvi whispered.

"Arrey, ..hmm okay theek hai, toh.. mein '" Virat continued.

"toh tum kya? Huh?" Maanvi Continued

He started walking towards her, and she stood there adamant without moving, almost like facing a challenge, after all she was Maanvi Choudary, she wasn't scared of anyone, "Mein tumse nahi daar ti...kya kar longe haan.?" but then he started to move closer and closer to her which made her jerk a little and take a step back, she lowered her eyes as he came closer to her and now was only an inch away from her. He grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him, with the force she crashed her head straight into Virat's chest and he slowly wrapped both his hand around her slim waist, it was just like a tight hug. "ab bolo.. kya huwa?" She tried to escape from his arms but everytime she tried pulling apart Virat would tighten his hands around her waist. "abhi bhi kuch nahi hota Maanvi.." he said in his husky voice. He gripped onto her tightly maanvi gasped, she couldn't think straight and not a word was coming out her mouth.. she closed her eyes and spoke in a low soft voice "virat..please ..kya kar rahe ho.." but Virat didn't want to hear it, he just wanted her to stay in his arms forever, it felt so right. She looked up and saw virat looking at her smiling, she had all these questions she wanted to ask but didn't know how. She felt so good being so close to him, so close that she could feel his heart beat and his warm breath tickling back of her neck. She couldn't resist his touch, the sensation and the hot chemistry was building up and he removed his right hand from her waist to lift her chin up so that she would look at him and her eyes were glues to his lips, and before she realized he crashed his lips onto hers and starting nibbling on her lower lip waiting for her to kiss him back, she just felt the warmth of his lips and groaned a little but she pulled apart without responding to the kiss, he stood there shocked as to what he just did and Maanvi didn't know what to do..but Virat had somewhat felt it was right, she belonged to him, he was starting to realise this but was afraid of what Maanvi thinks..

He started "dekho Maanvi.. mein.. woh.." but instead he didn't complete the sentence but bent down and just picked her up from the ground and now she was resting perfectly in his strong handsome arms. Her head resting on his broad hard chest and he looked down to meet her eyes and she slowly raised her eyes up to his and was lost in his dark eyes. She tried to say.. "Virat..Choodo..muhje, tum asie nahi kar sakte.." but it was barley heard by Virat or he chose to ignore it and replied "mein aise bilkul kar sakta hoon, aur kar raha hoon!". And kept on gazing into her eyes and thinking how beautiful she looked while smiling at her innocence. She spoke "par Virat.." but Virat gave her the look and she lost herself in his eyes and He continued walking while carrying her in his arms and she fitted in well with his arm with her petite body touching his. She felt so magical lying in his arms and she wished to be there forever. She held onto him tightly and felt the electric wave run through her body. Virat all this time wished how he can keep her in his arms forever and whispered " Aise kyun dekh rahi hoon? Kuch huwa? Kuch.. kuch.. hota hai..bolo na?" Virat hinted her so that she would say something but she remained silent.

He put her in the car, and she spoke "Tumhe yeh sab karne ka haak kisne diya.. aakhir hum aap k hai kaun?" he expected this to come up but Did she not want to say anything more? What she felt? This was disappointing but at least he held her close to her even for like 4 mins, it was enough ...for now he thought. The journey after that reminded quiet but it wasn't too bad as the restaurant was only 15 mins away from where they were and so Virat speeded his way through the road and looked at the time it was 9:00pm. They were supposed to meet at 8:30 but didn't think too much about it as Viren was there to take care of Bau's anger. He turned on the radio, just for sake of removing the silent moments.. and the radio played a song Meine Socha na tha.. Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha..

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen

Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen

Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen
Maine Socha Na Tha

While listening to this both of them were thinking about their moments they spent together and their nok-jhoks. Maanvi starred outside and wind blew her hair so now she had this strand of hair on her face, Virat who was watching her from corner of his eyes wanted to go closer to her and remove that strand of hair away from her beautiful face.

Virat and Maanvi exchanged glances and then quickly looked away and finally reached where they were supposed to be half an hour ago. Virat let a sigh of relief and turned off the radio and parked the car. Both got off the Car and made their way to the main reception of a 5 star Ocean 3 Resort Restaurant. Maanvi looked around and was amazed by the furniture, decoration and even people. This was all too high for her but never the less she saw someone she had wanted to see, her Di.

Virat followed and they all looked at them with anger filled eyes but thought it wasn't the time to say anything. They didn't want to create any drama in the restaurant so kept quiet and told them to sit. They sat down next to each other and felt a little awkward and Jeevika asked "Maanu, kya huva?"

"Di, yeh sab na aap k pyaar dewar ji urf(a.k.a) chep ka fault hai! Koi kaam theek se nahi karta!" maanvi replied looking directly at Virat who was acting all innocent and started doing his mute hand actions to his bhabhi. Jeevika gave a little smile and said "Ab tum yahan bhi mere dewaar ko taang mat karo. Ho jata hai aise khabhi khabhi" Maanvi rolled her eyes and gave virat and evil angry smile while Virat was smiling hearing his bhabhi's words. After this the awkwardness disappeared in no time as they tuned into everyone's discussion to hear what they missed out on and soon everything seemed to be normal again. Jeevika and Viren were having their private eyes to eyes talk, whereas dabbu and chachi were enjoying the food, on the other side, Indar chachi and K Chachi were tuning into the Bollywood mix songs. Virat and Maanvi felt satisfied. Maanvi looked at the meal that was present in front of her, from which half the things were unknown to her and other half that she disliked. Virat noticed and decided to tease her a little "oii bandariya, kya huwa? Khana khane k liye hi hota hai, goor(stare) ne k liye nahi, aur waise bhi tumhre haath ka bana huwa khana se toh yeh kafi achaa hai i'm sure, kyounki tumhe to kahna banana aata hi nahi hai." he said mocking her cooking skills, while maanvi gave him a big fake smile and rolled her eyes, he just admired her innocent face while her eyes searching for something like spicy Punjabi food. Maanvi didn't care what there was to eat anymore, she was hungry and she could eat anything right now. Her funny expressions brought smile to Virat's face and he continued eating his Italian food. He looked around for the waiter to order a desert but saw a guy who was starring at Maanvi.. He didn't think too much about this guy but didn't like anyone starring at his bandariya. So he moved his chair a little closer to Maanvi and with this Maanvi was really surprised.. she thought "oh god, yeh kya kar raha hai? Sab k samne kuch kare na.." remembering what he did earlier on their way to the restaurant. Maanvi felt a little uncomfortable and Virat acted all cool, he looked at the guy and who was still starring at her so Virat decided to talk to her hoping she wouldn't notice the guy and after everyone finished their dinner, there was still desert left to order. Virat knew this would make Maanvi happier than ever, after what she had ate, he was astonished and impressed so it was just a little treat from Virat to everyone but her especially. She was at last satisfied that at least there was one thing she ate which was her choice- her Kulfi ice-cream. "Ah, that tastes just perfect" She said cheerfully licking the kulfi stick. Everyone laughed and decided to go home but leaving Viren, Jeevika, Virat and Maanvi to enjoy the night at the restaurants special night dance ball party. . .

...to be continued...

Sigh* yeah finally finished. So how do you like the story so far? Boring?/needs more romance/needs improvement/maybe some twists? I know i've dragged on and on but promise to get the holi scenes in the next chapter!

BTW guys it would be nice to know your name when you comment, otherwise i feel awkward 😆

Hope you all liked it. If so please LIKE and comment! 😃

-Much Love Pooja.

Edited by Poojaa_P - 13 years ago

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