Originally posted by: CHIKA784
Awww this was a lovely OS Munny! : )
Really enjoyed it, HAHA i see how you tried to make Koki look like the good one, As in she knew where Gohem were!😆Cheeky! :PHAHA i was laughing at Gopi's questions, She's just too cute!😆 and Ahem in awe just finding out more about his wife day by day!: )Great OS Munny, Keep them coming and thanks for the PM!😛
Munny. This was really cute. I like your take on the way Ahem was slowly finding out more about his wife in a roundabout way.
😆 Im unable to stop laughing Munni...I was just about to go to sleep & saw ur OS !!!
So Ahem seems to received shocking answers to his questions 😛 With this knowledge, he is going to play around with Gopi & tease her till she confesses her love ...Smart Guy !He took his wife some 30 kms to buy peas...& smartly handled his mom saying they missed the route 😛
👏Munny, that was simply brilliant. I loved their little conversation. But the best being his sneaking in a confession 😉 Beautiful...Loved it I hope to read more soon. Thank you for this much needed OS...
Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
Munni... The OS needed no car breaking down, rain or Kisses..
It was wonderful as it is👏 Fantastic take on the drive Munni..I am glad this Aham had a longer drive and was able to articulate and understand a lot more about Gopi than in SNS..I loved the game, Gopi's philosophy, her awkwardness, her innocent questions & answers. 👏⭐️An almost confession😃 And BABIES.. Beautiful.. Gopi wants many😉 and Aham certainly is not averse.. Superb superb.. Well done⭐️
Originally posted by: varshu27
lovely os munni...gopi going from single word answers to talking in full sentences and then to be being completely comfortable was wonderful...loved her reaction to the baby billboard...she is so engrossed in the baby that she lets ahem know she wants a bunch of them...so sweet...loved how ahem got her talking and got a view of her childhood...loved it...
Originally posted by: goody7775
i was super awsome munni .it was bang on without even kiss or hug.had a gr8 laugh.enjoyed it 👏
Munni thanks for the pm and lovely story. Love the rapid fire round and her confessing, wished it was more than an os
Munni what can I say. I have this huge smile on my face after reading your wonderful, excellent, fantastic, fabulous OS.
I just loved how he got her to open up about everything. And as Harini said it didn't need rain, car breaking down, hug or a kiss. This is simply a beautiful start of a beautiful journey of their love and life.He even winged a confession out of her and knows how many babies she wants, and is not oppose to the idea of making them.😃Bravo for this work Munni.👏
Really nice munni!!! Loved the god is one part!!very sweet os:-)
Originally posted by: gohem123
That was an amazing OS munni👏 I loved aham here who understand his wife and take the mantle in his hand to know her more..And you made kokila a know-it-all'😉 good one'
Best part was babies..😳 That was hilarious..I was picturing their reactions in my mind..
Thanks for saying gopi's feelings so beautifully...Nice answers and her take on everything was so cute'Well done'👏
i read it in the morning...feel so fresh...thanks Munni ben for us wonderful OS
Originally posted by: shruts18
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When I opened your OS, I kept it as res. but I didn't know that in its length had been hidden such a wonderful, nice Gohem talk just the way they are so natural and normal...love your OS Munni and they are true to their actual character in your OS!A very fab fab job perfectly done!⭐️
munni that was a brilliant os...
love it...very well written
Originally posted by: feviewer
I had a good start to my morning thanks to your OS...imagining Gohem as parents😊
Originally posted by: Nilu.Dasuni
wow munni u did it perfectly! I love it!
Esp aham, love his behaviour
👍🏼 aww kaash aisa sach mein hotta!!!!!!! by the way awesome o.s!!!!! hope someday it will come true!!!!!!👏
OMG..what an OS..it was..awesome...fantastic...marvellous...oustanding...(actually i have no words left to praise u...all the words which praise are bestowed to ur oustanding writting ...love ur OS alot...😃😛
i was actually imagining the drive while i was reading it...😍again..hats off !!!!!
Originally posted by: navithareddy
amazing os munni i loved it thank u.
Munni that was a wonderful OS.
It is incredible what a little drive can bring out and make one feel, say and do. Ahem smartly executed his conversation with his wife to end with a quick fire confession, leaving them both in a better place.Do write more stories.
That was awesome munni , really fantastic , I loved it
amaing update...muni😃one thing i liked the most is ahem being very talkative otherwise the cvs hardly give him long dialogues.
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