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Posted: 13 years ago
Firstly, Sorry for the late comment...was busy with some wrk!!
To the story, tremondus job hoor...totally awsem
truly loved it to the bottom of my heart
cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hoor , you shouted at me for making Manvi's condition critical in my FF and now you yourself made her go in coma !!!
Make her well soon , nahin toh main tumhara khoon kardoongi !!! 😛😉
Manvi's in Coma , Virat is broken and whta about Maya ? Hope her role is over . But still I wanna kill her !!! How could she do this to Manvi ?
Love it when Jeevika called Maya a bitch , I wished that ever happened in the show!!! 😆
The past was amazing , Maya with Virat and then with Viren . You always cook up something more diffrent than others .
Update super soon and make Manvi well soon !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no maanvi is went to coma ????????,
sad , continue soon and thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
The b***** maya I hate her.I just hate heer...omg manvi in coma.hey u did not pm me :-(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys im back with another update…I know u guys hate maya so do I so from now one she will not be in this FF… so thanksz guys for the beautiful comments and threatens…. Heres the next part it is going to be emotional so beware guys:

Virat: COMA!!!

The word coma had just shattered virat he knew manvi had cancer he knew that she is in pain but he never knew that one day she will be a lifeless corpse. He promised her that nothing will happen to her but today he himself broke it.

Virat slowly walked toward the OT and looked through the window she looked angelic yet the pain was evident on her face. She was laying still on the bed with an oxygen mask placed carefully around her lower part of her face. She had various pipes around which virat was sure that if she saw all of this his sherni would run away but….

Its too late she is in coma. The repetition of that word made virat sigh he kept his intense gaze on manvi and tears began streaming down his eyes he tried brushing them away but it jus wouldn't brush away they kept on coming.

Virat felt a cold hand placed on his shoulder he expected it to be his brother but as he turned around he saw him mother. He couldn't resist himself he quickly flew his arms around his mom and his sobs went louder

Virat: ma manvi..wo..kyun…ma

Vanshika:beta main janti hoon ke tu manvi se bohat pyaar kartha hai woh teek ho jaye gi

Vanshika slowly made virat sit on the chairs opposite the OT and made him clean his tears he slowly wiped his tears and looked straight at the OT door while his mom kept on consoling him

Vanshika: virat main janti hoon ke manvi ke cancer ki baat sunkar tujhe aur jeevika ko bohat dukh poncho jeevika ne apna dukh viren ke saath share karli lekin tu akele hi tarap raha hai, lekin virat tujhe himmat rakhna hoga agar tu hi toot jayenga toh phir manvi ko khon theek kar payega, tera pyaar hi manvi ko theek karsakta hain use coma se nikal sakta hain aur iss cancer ko haara bhi saktha hai pyaar mein itni takkat hai

Virat: sach??

Vanshika: much, pati patni ka rishta aisa hi hota hai pyaar ka bandhan kabhi toot nahi sakta aur tut oh manvi ka dost, partner, patni aur premi haina? Toh phir tune himmat kase tori agar manvi teek hoti toh kya kehti tujhe honsla rakhna hai manvi ke liye

Virat jus looked at his mom shocked at how much strength his mom had he always thought that his mom was emotional but her strength today was truly amazing he jus hugged his mom and pecked his mom's cheek

Virat: thanksz mom

Dr manan has just came out of the OT at that time virat immediately stood up and approached dr manan

Virat: manvi kaisi hai??

Dr Manan: manvi danger se baar hai lekin kyunke who coma main hain hum zyada kuch kehnahi sakte aur

Virat: aur:...

Dr manan: manvi coma mein toh hai lekin woh sab kuch sun sakti hai issliye please koi uske samne roye maat warna uski haalat bhigar jayegi

Virat: jee,, um doc can I see manvi??? Please

Dr manan: only you jeevika ko please maat leke janaa andar warna who rogi aur phir anvi ki haalat..

Virat: jee

Virat slowly approached the OT he shivered and nervously pushed the door opened he walked in the OT and went close by manvi. His heart let out a cry while he saw her beautifully laying still he slightly bent over manvi holding back his tears and slightly kissed manvi on his cheek and whispered in her ears

Virat: wake up princess prince charming has gave u his special kiss

He carefully sat on the bed he grabbed her hand and held on tight

Virat: manvi tumne toh mujhse vaada kiya hai ke tu mujhe kabhi chor ke nahi jaoungi lekin ab yeh kya hai… promise torne ka iraada hai lekin main kabhi aisa hone nahi dounga samjhagaye

He heaved a sigh and slowly placed her hand down he caressed her head and began to hum a little tune and then began singing manvi's favourite song

Virat:

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka
na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka
dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein
saansein saansein tooti bandishein
kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai
kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko
koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko
aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein
tooti footi sab farmaaishein
kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai
kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
ho o o o ho o o o
na poocho dard bandon se
hansi kaisi khushi kaisi
musibat sar pe rehati hain
kabhi kaisi kabhi kaisi
ho o o o... rabba, rabba ho o o ho
rabba ho o o, ho o ho rabbao

he couldn't control hi tears anymore he sed:

virat: manvi please utt jao tumhi ho mere partner tumhi ho mera future tumhi ho mera pyaar tumhare bigar main jee nahi paounga please utt jao… tum hot oh main hoon tum nahi toh kuch nahi tere bigar main marjaounga I love you manvi I love u!!!

he got up as he tears uncontrollably flowed one tear dropped on manvi's cheek and she flinched he unnoticed that he walked back and let out a scream containing love, pain, agony and anguish he walked forwad but stopped himself he turned to head towards the door when someone grabbed tightly his hand his eyes opened in shock he looked below and….

To be continued… do comment and like guys

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Posted: 13 years ago
Uff...2mhe kbse adat ho gyi itne short update dene ki
bt jo v h .it was amazing
Do cntinue soon
and thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww! Virat is such a lovely hubby 😍

And love Vanshika how she can be a sweet mom all the time, loved this update.. hope VirMan's relation will help Mannu come out of the coma.😍
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Sad but sweet update..😭 love it though.🤗🤗
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Thanks so much for the pm and plz is baar a lengthy update okay? Lol

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww...so emotional
Truly made me cry
Now u have to continue ASAP
And yes
Don't forget to pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...datzz was a sad but ofcrs amazing part...loved Virat-Vanshikha convo...dat was really amazing d way she consoled him...n the things Virat said to Manvi in d end really made me cry 😭 he z sooo loving...hope manvi will b out frm coma soon...😔 pleasee update soon wid a long part...!!

thanq soo much 4 d PM..!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oho hoor amazng updt
n short updt wel nxt tim mak dat
updt longer n updt sun n pm me
Thanku fr d pm swety.

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