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Posted: 12 years ago

Holla guys!! I am back! Hope I am not forgotten by anyone. So the FF I was thinking about for too long. I am posting it. Only the prologue I have written since I got 3 days gap for my next exam so enjoy. Phew! Got the title.

Destined to Love
Prologue

"Mom! Where are you? I
need you. I am not able to handle this responsibility. I need your hand over my head.
Please come back. Please!!!" saying so he broke down . He dropped on his knees
over the sand.

"Please support me!! I
can't stand this anymore,. Failure at every step. Insult at every stage!!" He
cried covering his face with his hands. His locket dropped from his neck. He
felt a certain kind warmth enveloping him. He removed his hands from his face.
He saw his locket falling on the ground. He picked it up. He opened it. He
remembered his mother's last words:

"Beta!! Never let anything weaken you. Try to keep
up your father's pride. Never let his name down. If you feel down anytime just
open this locket. Close your eyes. Remember me. I am always with you. In your
heart. And when you find your soul mate give this locket to her as your father
gave it to me." She smiled with tearful eyes. " And do show her this not so
beautiful mom of yours" She winked at him though she was in pain. "No Mom Please
don't!!" He cried. "Beta I have to!! Take care of yourself and your father too!
I am going ! Be happy always" saying so she closed her eyes as her hands
dropped down from his. "MOM Nooo!!!!!" He wailed. He was immediately pulled
away by the nearby people.

He opened his eyes as
tears spilled from his eyes. He closed his eyes while dropping his head
backwards and placing the locket over his chest near his heart.

"Mom!!!!" He cried
spreading his hands on either side. He again felt the familiar warmth. He
opened his eyes looking at the sky.A star was falling down. He was curious
about the sign.

" Is this the sign I
waited for, from my Mom?" He questioned himself.

Still he was at his
previous state. His father had left India after his mother's death trying to
cope up with the loss. Since then he hasn't heard anything about him. His Daadi
tried to manage him as well as Khurana Constructions expenses. At the tender
age of 13 he lost his mother. Since then he has been struggling. Sometimes for
food and sometimes for money. Now he is
almost going to be 19. Everything has changed but not the struggle. He couldn't
manage the expenses of his Daadi's medicines. Their living together cost too
much. She had to join an orphanage and live there while selling off their
ancestral house. Till now he had tried almost five business ventures but still
failed. After selling off their ancestral house he is living in a flat rented
to him by his friend. He is trying to manage two jobs. One at a hotel as a
waiter and second trying to be MD of Khurana Constructions since KC is at the
verge of shutting down.

Remembering his past,
his shoulders dropped down with defeat as he kept on roaming on the beach
looking at the night sky. He suddenly stumbled upon something. Due to the dim
light of the street lights he could just see the colour of the sari. Red. It's
a girl err woman. He bent to have a closer look at her.

"Whoa! She has an
angelic face" He murmured to himself in a trance. He leaned over her face as if
trying to carve her face permanently in his mind.

"Beautiful!" He
whispered. He was almost about to kiss her on her lips and was inches away from
her lips when a car horn broke his thoughts.

He abruptly came back
to his senses.

"Gosh!! What was I
about to do?" He said all frustrated as he turned away and started walking away
from the woman.

He stopped in his
tracks when he heard her payal sound. She was struggling to move but couldn't.
He re-thought his decision.

"What is she doing here
all alone in this state?" A question popped up in his mind.

"Why should I care?" He
spoke back with his rationality.

He continued walking
but again stopped.

"What if anything
happens to her?" His heart spoke.

"Why should I care?"
His mind spoke again.

"What if she is hurt?"
His heart said.

"What if she hurts me
or is involved in criminal case?" His logical mind spoke back.

"Do you really think
she can hurt you?" His heart questioned his mind as he turned back towards.
With her one look every rationality of his mind flew away,

He walked towards and
practically running thinking she might be hurt.

He bent down checking
whether she is alive or not. She seemed too fresh.

"Phew! Alive" He sighed.

"Hmmm! Still
unconscious!!"

He bent further placing
his ear near her heart. She seemed breathing faster than normal when he neared
her. He felt her heart beating errtically in a crazy speed.

"Woohoo!! Crazy heart
and Insane girl. Her heart is doing somersaults" He said surprised as he felt
heat flushing through his cheeks.

"She isn't crazy! I
have gone mad!!" He said to himself smiling while holding his locket.

He tried to pick her up
by putting her arm around his but she fell back. He immediately held her by her
waist. Their first physical contact on her bare waist felt as an electrical
spark passing through his spine.

"Uffo!! How am I to
carry her now?" He said to him still staring
idiotically at her face.

"Arey budhu godhi main
utha le!!" Someone spoke from his back. He turned and saw a drunkard staring
wierdly at them.

He was intimidated and
immediately picked her up in his arms. She cuddled up in his arms resting her
head near his heart. He felt as if his heart would explode with her close proximity.

He started walking
towards his car which was rented to him by his friend still staring at her
angelic face.

He felt as if she was
blushing as a bright red hue crept up her cheeks.

He smiled.

PRECAP:"Err I am Maan. Maan Singh Khurana. MD of Khurana
Constructions""I am Geet Handa. 1^{st} year student
Interior Designing."Both shook hands with each other.Both fumbled trying to formulate words. "Woh.."
"Main'" "I mean'" " Kal'""I am sorry!!" Both spoke at the same time.*********************
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So so so this is what I got to write. Hope you all enjoyed it. Do shower me with all your criticisms, likes and comments. Waiting eagerly.
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Love
Ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX
Prologue above
Part 1

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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana:

He lost his mom at tender age of 13. His father left him and went somewhere still unknown. He lived with his Daadi till he was 17. He couldn't bear his as well as Daadi's expenses. He now lives in friend's rented flat. Has a locket always to remember his mother.

MD of Khurana Constructions.

Geet Handa:

Mysterious. Past and family background still unknown. Very much bubbly and innocent. Tries to make every one happy. She wears a bracelet inn her right hand always. It has her name engraved in it.

Savitri Devi:

Maan's Daadi Ma.

Struggled a lot to raise Maan and manage KC. Now works and lives at an Orphanage. Waiting for Maan to get a good job and settle down with his marriage so that she can be relieved from the orphanage.

Pratham Singh Khurana:

Maan's dad. Loved and still loves his wife a lot. Location still unknown.

Simran Khurana:

Maan's mom. She is dead. She has a great impact on Maan's rational thinking. A very lovable wife and daughter-in-law.

Adi:

Maan's best friend. Helps him in all matters. Isn't very rich but helps him as much as he can.

Will introduce more characters. For now these many only.

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504887

Posted: 12 years ago

For PMs send me buddy request!!

ANd I would PM after my exams are over i.e. 10th March

and Let me know too if I should continue this or not!!

Anyone interested????😳

Phew! Finally decided the title:

Destined to Love

How's it?😉

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Pearl

@Pearl_27

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

hey!!!!!!!

sorry for being late
umm actually i am the last

anyways

Awesome concept and your writing skills are mind blowing
i just love ff's
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504887

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth
great start

Thank you!!😛

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504887

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd
awesome do continue

Thank you!😃

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Sarita

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Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Liked d prologue.i m looking forward to it:)

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

interesting concept...
continue soon plz...

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Durga

@mrk-1

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

wow i loved the start .. do continue soon also pm me too..

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