Muskaan, You are portaying your characters quite well yaar, but what happened all of a sudden such a sad one! nevertheless Maan's anger seems all justified, reading such abusive charcter moisted my eyes , still feel like crying reading what Geet has to undergo!
Hope he could heal his wound of what happened to his sister, but would that be possible? Shame that we had to face people like brij, Brij has done that with a 15yr old and killed her, feels all scary being a girl/woman!! really how much a girl's parents has to undergo to bring their childs up and give them a good life? protecting from all such evil eyes?? me in sad mood dear!!
is there reason you are portraying such a story ? even in DA you have written a track on kidnapping girls?? I really appreciate that you have written to the girls to be careful and not to trust anyone!! as in any tom dick and harry, such msgs are much needed!! and you given it in a good way!! keep going, really would like to see how the story is going to takeplace now and especially as you said will end in 5 parts!!
Geet is also 18yr old, what can she do at that age?? how is she going to survive having no family to support, how is she going to challenge her life, I'm looking forward to dear!
Keep going muskaan, love you lots!!
Edited by cyberprincess - 12 years ago
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