OS: Smitten with Kitten (Arhi, the morning after)

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Tandrima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Its so cute very well written...👍🏼👏

Edited by Ms_Perfect - 13 years ago

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goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

sorry to find u this late, but for sure i'm going to read your other works..

and let me tell u... i always leave comment! 😆

erm, just one small req,

could u also add the eng trans for the hindi dialogues?
i don't understand hindi... 😳

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: goguma
sorry to find u this late, but for sure i'm going to read your other works..

and let me tell u... i always leave comment! 😆

erm, just one small req,

could u also add the eng trans for the hindi dialogues?
i don't understand hindi... 😳

I added the English subtitles. Sorry, got lazy. I usually add them..

It's great, I am looking forward to your comments then.

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lovekkg

@lovekkg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

This is such a cute OS .. Going back now to read your other works :) Keep writing..

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@abracadabra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Totally totally loved it. My imagination is running wild now 😉 I hope we get to see a morning like this with Arnav and Khushi. So dreamy 😍

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neena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

loved it!!!!!
anjali always enter in wrong time...

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Richa

@cutie_pie21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

very cute
lovely :)
do cont. soon

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Sweeet ...Would you continue please... 😍

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Damn! I was so busy reading ur Poolside Love that I didn't even notice you had written a new OS.

Looks like I'm having quite an impact on you. *Looking at my knuckles*😆

Eeehhh! That was so cute and nice!😳

U know, I really loved that line -"she looked a kitten but scratched like a cat"🤣 That line sent my mind into overdrive imagining them doing *Ahem* U know what!😉

Now all I can hear is Meow Meow!😆

Do keep writing! I really love reading such light moments between them.⭐️

P.S. I absolutely love the title. It is so cute and AWW...😳

Edited by molten_lava - 13 years ago