I just read all the chapters, and I have to say- you are an amazing writer!
Brilliant portrayals of feelings- fabulous description of the tug-of-war taking place between hearts and minds- I could feel it happening inside me- it was so descriptive!π
you take the reader into the story with you- and make them feel what your characters are going through.
I cried when Arnav and Khushi did, chuckled when they were amused, felt sorry when they were confused... and yet- I could see it all from a third person's point of view too!
So in short- BRILLIANT!
Please PM me when you update next! and keep writing!π€
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