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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: KC294

This is for part 3 Oh no... Laad governer meanie... Why does he have to shout... lol nice update please continue soon


and this is for part 4... yay laad governer... he saved her... please believe her and be happy again :D
 Continue soon


He will he will don't worry...I am a die hard romantic...meri story kabhhi tragic ho hi nahin sakti...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Very nice short story 
Can't wait to see wat happens
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Nice!!! Please PM me when you update,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Wow this is really good!! Can't wait for more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i don't know why but i want the misunderstandings to be cleared soon just like this os soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pleasant update, waiting for the next part :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant update.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈ
Loved it. Yey Arnav saved her from that creep.
Continue soon. Thanks.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5:

Cursing under his breath for the disturbance he opened the door... Di stood outside ..seeing her Arnav automatically smiled and asked her to come in she declined and said "chote humain na bas woh shaadi ki video dekhni thi to hum DVD lene aaye thay"..."Di HP ko bol diya hota ya mujhe bula lete khud aane ki kiya zaroorat thi...aap chaliye main aap ke room main le ker aata hoon"...Arnav closed the door and went to his cupboard to take out the DVD he turned around to see Khushi staring intently at him..."What" he said..."Kiya aap ko waqui hum per bharosa nahin hai, kiya aap ko waqui lagta hai ke hum aap ko aur aap ke ghar walon ko dhoka de rahe thay" Khushi inquired...Arnav looked at her and his heart melted she looked so sweet and innocent asking that question with her eyes searching the truth in his gaze...he wanted to console and hold her in his arms and tell her out right that he does have a heart that has completely won over his mind, he has a heart that just beats for her and he has a heart that trusts her completely...but he also wanted to make sure to let her know that though a bit late but his mind had also accepted the fact that she was honest and sincere and true to her word. After witnessing the scene this morning he was sure that his lady love along with his sister had been wronged by that creep Shyam...he had  to come up with some way to protect both his Di and his precious wife...he couldn't let them out of his sight till the creep was around...he came out of his reverie to answer but found out that she had left the room...he cursed himself again for not speaking on time but then inwardly smiled at the thought that how he would surprise his darling Khushi and muttered to  himself "Khushi aaj main tum se apne dil ki baat khul ker kahoon ga...aaj main tumahin aise manaon ga ke tum kabhi bhi muhjse naraaz nahin hogi...ya shayed baar baar hogi ke main tumhain baar baar waise hi manaon" he smiled at his own naughty thoughts and walked out of the room to give the wedding video to his Di...He reached  the room to find it empty..."Hari Prasad...di kahan hian"...."Arnav bhaiyya woh Khushi ji ke saath mandir gayeen hain"..."Oh acha theek hai..."he kept the the DVD on her dresser and walked out of the room to plan his evening surprise for  his wife...after about an hour Anjali entered the house...he looked up from his position in the sofa expectantly to find Khushi but his Di was alone..." Di Khushi kahan hai"..."Woh chote unhain thori der aur mandir rukna tha isi liye hum aagaye...unhon ne kaha woh bhi thori der main aajayen gi..." an uneasy feeling settled in the pit of Arnav's stomach but he ignored it and started waiting for Khushi and absently informed his sister about the wedding video on her dresser.

 Anjali excitedly played the video and was thoroughly enjoying NK's goof ups with the camera..."yeh NK bhaiyya bhi na video bhi dhang se banana nahin aati peechay peechay ghoom rahen hain her aik ke...ab yeh dekho terrace ki decorayions ki video banane gaye to camera ko aik jaga rakh ker bhool hi gaye."...with that she picked up the remote to forward the scene when she saw khushi enter the frame in the video..."oh acha is liye NK bhaiyya chat per gaye thay..." smiling she saw shyam enter the frame and keep a hand on her shoulder..."yeh bhi" she mused...then the whole terrace scenario played out in front of Anjali and she stared at the screen with  an expression of horror and grief...with one hand she clutched her mangalsutar and the other she place protectively on her stomach as if guarding her baby...she could not believe it... she was weeping inside out and wanted  to wail loudly when a horrible thought struck her mind she quickly dialed Khushi's number and moved downstairs as fast as she could calling Arnav "chote...chote hamari baat suniye isi waqt"...Arnav heard the terror, anguish and pain in his di's voice and shot like an arrow in her direction.."kiya baat hai di...kiya hua...aap theek to hain"..."haan chote  aap hamain choriye magar hamain lagta hai khushi ji mushkil main  hain"...that alarmed Arnav even more..."Khushi matlab kiya hai aap ka di"..."dekhiye chote hum jab mandir se waapis aarahe thay to humain in ka phone aaya tha aur yeh pooch rahe thay ke hum kahan hain...humne inko bataya tha keh hum mandir se waapis aarahen hain to inhon ne hum se kaha ke aap akele kiyun gayeen to hum ne in ko bata diya ke khushi ji hamare ssath gayeen theen...bas mandir per thorii der ruki hian is liye hum waapis akele jaa rahen hain aur driver hai hamare saath...hum samjhe woh sirf hamare liye pareshan hain isliye pooch rahen hain lekin ab hmain shak hai ke kuch garbar hai..." Arnav's warning bells started ringing but he maintained his calm outwardly though he was dying a thousand deaths every second..."aap kehna kiya chati hain di?" ..."Dekhiye chote aap abhi sawaal mat kijye...magar bas itna samajh lijye ke hum ne abhi shaadi ki video main kuch aisa dekha hia jis se hamain yaqeen ho chala hia ke khushi ji ko inse bohat khatra hai...."... "Di...yeh aap kiya.."..."chote aap hamari baat suniye...hum itne kamzor nahin hain jitna ke her koi hamain samajhta hai...sach sehne ki taqat hai hum main aur aap ko bhi laani pare gi...hamain abhi andaza hua hai ke yeh jaise dikhte hian waise hian nahin yeh Khushi ji ko pasand kerte hain aur unke peechay pare hue hian..aaj se nahin Lucknow se...hum inke liye koi mayine hi nahin rakhte...yeh kaise patalga yeh hum aap ko baad main batayen ge...lekin is waqt hamain khushi ji ki chinta ho rahi hai...woh apna phone nahin utha raheen aur chinta ki baat yeh hai ke abhi aadhe ghante pehle hi inhon ne baton hi baton main hum se khushi ji kahan hain yeh maloom kiya...is liye aap jaiye aur khushi jee ko foran dhoond ker ghar laiye...bas woh theeek hon..."

 

Arnav was dumfounded...He the Arnav Singh Raizada who believed in making his own destiny and tried to control of those around him was looking at his sister who was like a new person all together she was standing like a pillar of strength in a raging storm...he had been quite for her sake but she was showing a strength which he failed to recognize she had...he on the other hand who was so sure of himself always was shaking a like a leaf while calling khushi...the dread was spreading fast in his system...why was Khushi not answering...he was fast realizing that all things did not happen according to his wants and there was definitely a greater being up there controlling everything...and that was when he felt a fist like blow to his stomach for he remembered Khushi's statement at the mandir months ago..."jab aapko yeh ehsaas hoga tab hum aap ke saath nahin honge"   no no no he thought this cannot be happening...this cannot be true...he turned to his di with tears in his eyes...she said "hum prathna kerte hain unhain kuch nahin hoga tum jao jaker unko dhoondo...with that Arnav ran out of the house and drove in a mad dash to the mandir and looked everywhere for khsuhi...shouting her name...but to no avail...he ran up the steps of the mandir and asked the people around there...no one could help...he ran outside and was fast losing hope when he saw a beggar sitting on the side of the road...he asked him...the beggar said he had seen a lady matching the description he gave but while she was walking home he saw a van stop close to her and they took her in the van with them...the beggar had no further information apart from pointing out the direction in which the van went...Arnav gave a lot of money to the poor soul but the land had slid away from under his own feet...he was sure Khushi was kidnapped and that too by none other than shyam!!!!!

The great Arnav Singh Raizada was standing in the middle of the road with a feeling of dread and guilt consuming his being...the fear of losing khushi was back and this time it was back with a vengeance...he could not lose her...the feeling he was having now was worse than the one he had had when he thought she was in an ambulance for then atleast he had thought he knew she was there in the ambulance fighting for her life but now he did not know where she was at all...his hands fisted with anger at t he thought of the creep Shyam being near her...he would kill the ba...rd with his bare hands...

Part 6:

Edited by Arhimaniac - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u r fast😳..lovely...now more please..i love it...πŸ˜ƒ Edited by shybabe - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shybabe

u r fast😳..lovely...now more please..i love it...πŸ˜ƒ


Its 3:45 in the morning..I have fever but had panadol with caffeineπŸ˜† ...the creative juices were already flowing ...so here is the result...πŸ˜†