Dastaan(kyph)~1 year leap~pg 146! - Page 6

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

that was great plz cont soon. 👏

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Originally posted by: hawoo

wow!!! THAT WAZ SOOOO SAD i feel bad for kriipa...plz cont sooon 😃

well i bet u will fell sad for her throughout the fanfic

Originally posted by: del_geo

its gr8!ur all ff's are just gr8! i luv it. continue soon.

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Originally posted by: blah_blah

great part!

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Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

just read ur new ff 

lovely parts

cont soon                                                                                         

thank u soo much 😃

ok iam gonna continue this fanfic in a few minutes'

hey thanks to everyone for the comments

thanks to everyone for the comments i just loved them well i hope to make the story more interesting

part 3:-)

ambika devi after staring at her daughter's picture for a few minutes more goes near the phone and makes a call ( we can not hear the conversation )

on the other hand we see kripa and prithvi in the car

p- toh kripa tum kal raat ko bhi wohi puraana tape dekh rahi thi

k- yes

p- krips don't u get bored

k- noo

p- don't get soo damn obsessed with this kripa agar kal ko woh sab kuch nahi hua jo tumne socha hai toh u will get hurt

k- prithvi meri dost ,meri jaan tum ne angad ka koi bhi interview nahi dekha hai na

p- dekha hai tum yahi khena chahti ho naa ki angad apne her interview main yehi kheta hai ki he loves someone since his young days

k- good toh phir why do u worry

p- kripa i am just concerned because ur my best friend

k- i know prithvi but i trust my love and my god a lot i know nothing wrong will happen

p- hope soo let ur wish come true

k- yaa remember that this is a secret just between us and no one knows about me and angad

p- yaa u trust me

k- good now drive the car properly

p- what iam a good driver

k- yeh sirf unhe khena jo tumhe nahi jaante

then we see kripa and prithvi fighting all the way towards their college

at the college-----

k- hi tarun, akki, aaliya, rani

t,r,ak,aa- hi kripa

k- kya hua tum sab ke chere pe 12 kyoun baje hain

t- yaar u know na there just a few days left for our college to finish and ab jaa kar faculty ne bola hai ki we have to make a video project

ak- yaa one song and a full shoot

p- no ways

aa- prithvi tum ne aage ke bare main kya socha hai

p- bhai iam going to u.s to study music

k- cool prithvi i fell soory for the girls in u.s

p- shut up krips

ak- uff u two stop fighting and lets think for the problem that has come up

r- yaa iam deciding the song and clothes

aa- me directing

t- me producing

ak- iam the choreographer

then all of them looked at kripa and prithvi

p&k- what!!!! no

ak- yes

p- iam not doing this

t- u r

k- no ways

aa- yep

r- u both are our pair on whome the song will be picturised

p- do we have to

ak- yes baby u have no option left

k- ok then lets get down to work

then we see them all join hands and start preparing for the shoot

kripa and prithvi shoot for the song aao naa from the movie kyoun ho gaya na the same way its picturised on vivek oberoi and ash (except for the kiss)

on the last day of college

k- ab toh bol de tarun

t- no yaar

p- come on yaar have the guts to say it today

t- noo

just then rani come near him

r- tarun i love u will u be mine(man what guts)

t- ohh

k- of course rani(poking to tarun)

p-(wispering) ab toh bol de bhai

t- yes !!!!!!~

k- yes yes iam soo happy

then prithvi watches kripa dancing in her happiness he feels good and blushes and  pats his head

k- prithvi tumari flight kab ki hai

p- aaj

k- (then kripa become sad)tum mujhe chod kar jaa rahe ho

p- nahi buddhu kabhi nahi

k- toh phir

p- carrier bhi toh important hai naa

k- yaa wapis kab aaooge

p- jab tum yaad karoge and mera maan bologe  u will find me there

k- promise

p- hmm try kar ke dekh lo

k- ok i trust u 

then prithvi bids good bye to all his friends and kripa and leaves for u.s

part ends

hope u all like the part

comming up- wait and read 

please post ur comments and i want more comments this time

love

apra😃

Edited by apra - 18 years ago

its absolutely wonderful! continue soon apra.

Prithvi's gone!!!!! 😃 😃 😃

Awesum job 👏