hey nice 1st prt...itz pretty suspenceful...i fink her marrige got finalized with angad wen they were lil π
yaa ur rite but still very suspenceful
hey nice 1st prt...itz pretty suspenceful...i fink her marrige got finalized with angad wen they were lil π
yaa ur rite but still very suspenceful
thank u
Originally posted by: Pooja922
terrific start!! continue soon π
thank u
Originally posted by: shahidlover24
Awesum job! The first part was way better than what I expected! π
well iam happy to be beyond ur expectations
well u both are rite but wait and watch π
~part 2~
soon after the conversation with kripa prithvi goes down and waits for her in his car........within an hour or so kripa walks down wearing blue capris and pink top and looking very cute
k- nani main college jaa rahi hoon hum dinner sath karenge ok
nani- haan theek hai beta take care
k- ok nani bye see u later
saying this kripa left .......nani watched kripa leave and then went near a photo that hung at center wall of her drawing room the photo was of a young and beautiful lady and nani's reflection could be clearly seen on the photograph a tear dropped from nani's eyes and then a sound started ringing her ears
--mom meri beti ko apni bacchi ki tarah palna usse kabhi meri kami mat mehsoos hone dena please promise me mom please promise me...this is my last wish-------
then nani wiped the tear that had rolled down to her cheeks and she remembered -----
purshotam and ambika mittal were one of the most rich famlies in dheradun after purshotam mittal's death it was ambika who took care of his property and business and also their only child and daughter gayatri... before gayatri colud make a wish it would be granted to her by ambika devi for her, her only child was her life -------
it was one of the most happiest days of ambika's life when gayatri got married to suryavan who loved her like crazy and she also loved him like mad.............those were such good days when gayatri and surya had shifted to mumbai in their new home which was an gift to gayatri from surya and soon gayatri was expecting her first baby ambika's and suryavan happiness knew no bounds when gayatri had given them this new the child was considered to be very lucky because it would have such loving parents and grandmom-----
but alas! destiny had its own plans at the time of gayatri's delevery she for diagnosed for excessive bleeding and the doctors had declared that they would either be able to save the child or the mother.......and they went in for an emmergency operation in which gayatri gave birth to a pretty baby girl ------when the doctors came out they had said that gayari was very critical and had just a few minutes left with her and she wanted to talk to her mom
---with a very heavy heart ambika had entered the room in which gayatri lay counting her last minutes--
g- mom
am- haan beta
g- mom main jaa rahi hoon
am- nahi beta tumhe kuch nahi hoga
g-(gave a hollow laugh)mom jhoota dilasa mat do
am- beta
g- mom main aapse kuch khena chahti thi
am- haan bolo beta
g- mom main chahti hoon ki aap meri beti ka naam kripa rakhe
am- haan
g- aapko pata main mom surya hamesha yehi naam apni beti ka rakh na chah te the
am- jaisa tum kaho beta
g- mom ek aur baat hai
am - haan bolo
g- mom main chahti hoon ki aap meri beti ko pale bilkul waise jaise aapne mujhe pala tha....karange na mom
am- haan beta zaroor
g- promise
am- haan
and soon after this gayari had breathed her last..................
soon after gayatri's death surya was soo shocked that he started blieving that some where kripa was responsible for gayatri death and hence he even refused to see her face after her birth and thus ambika devi had to bring kripa back to dheradun where she tried her best to bring up kripa the way she brought gayatri up but somewhere the thought also pricked her that kripa was responsible for gayatri's death and hence she was not able to take of kripa the way she had promised to gayatri ...........and thus poor kripa got all the things she needed except love which she had wanted but still she was happy because of the fact that some where someone loves her a lot and that someone was angad!!!!!!
it was decided even before kripa was born that if surya and gayatri had a daughter she would be married to naina and dilip's son angad (who was just two years old then) naina and dilip were very good friends of gayatri and surya and they lived in mumbai.........naina always took gayatri as her younger sister and thus this was decided with the consent and agreement of both the parties that when angad and kripa grow up they will be married ..................................... and thus ambika always told and brought her up with the fact that one day she will be married off into the khanna house hold and this fact made kripa the happiest person on earth she had started living in the world of her own the world which just belonged to her and angad.........
then ambika came back to the real world and spoke
am- sorry gayatri beta main tumhari last wish ko poori tharah nahi nibhaa payee i am sorry beta mujhe maaf kar do aaj mujhe yeh eshsaas ho raha hai ki woh bacchi kitni akeli hai ....yeh ehsaas ho raha hai ki main usse gale la ga kar pyaar karu per shayaad ab bahut der ho chuki hai i am sorry beta per main apni iss galti ke liye apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi ................π
~part ends~
hope u all like the part
comming up- kripa her life and her friends and one blow
please post ur comments about this
love
apraπ
Originally posted by: angadkripafan
that was such an emotional part plez continue soon π
well this is a emotional story
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