ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148 - Page 17

Originally posted by: dumas

fantastic start that was perfect your  description  were  perfectly done her journey was well thought of awesome love it thanks for thew pm

        

Originally posted by: peehu24

amazing update..piya's day 1 on earth was described beautifully...ayaan is really cute...but he has a sad story...waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: seabeauty

awesome!!! Could u add me 2 ur pm list??

Originally posted by: farroo

wow nice update ayaan is so cute poor boy he has a hole in his heart and poor kabir too his sister but misha she is not what she has to be right masti wali misha now what happen when piya meet with abhay luv ur update shivani update soon 

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

thnx for d pm

gr8t loved it very int 👏👏

congrats for new group ff

cont soon

Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

It's absolutely fantastic ff... so pia an angel and abhay is evil... that would be interesting to see how they meet...

and kabir ... bechara ... he has a sad past because of his sister...
and ayaan is so cute ... he didn't want pia to go ... awww
so adorable ... continue soon ...

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

superb update dear .

pia entry on earth was awesome and she met with kabir was superb . kabir story was so sad . ayaan was so cute . now pia find a job  .i m waiting what will happen next . continue soon . 

Originally posted by: mandy1024

This is one hell of a captivating story 👏 Brilliant. Very well written.

@Shivani: Loved the way u have written the second part. Very well portrayed. Loved Ayaan 😊 He's so cute. Good to know that Kabir will only be Pia's friend and not love interest 😉 brilliant story. Please PM me once u update it.

@Aysha: Thanks for the PM 🤗

Originally posted by: anukrati

SORRY FOR LATE REPLY
WOW
REALLY AMAZING
SHIVANI
really love u dear u are superb writter
love pia as angel appear on earth and her INTERACTION with human
like kabir story and aayan is so sweet.
love pia is eager to meet the monster abhay. hope they meet soon
love the update
update soon wonderful writters.
thanks 4 the pM

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

Great update shivani...!!! :-))
Lovd d way u intrducd pia to kabir,ayaan n thn misha...!!! Pia being an angel s very emotional...nd hr emotions hs been very well xprssd..!! Oh..Kabir hs gt a sad past...nd ayaans so innocnt...bt hope angel pia will surely cure ayaan's illness...!! Humm...so nw pia s goin to wrk n d nyt clubs...abhay's fav8 destnatn...!!!
Lovd d entire update!!! :-D m lovng dis story mre nd mre...!!!!
Thx fr pm...hope n d nxt update abhaiya will cme face to face...cnt hold my excitmnt!!! :-)
nxt update s by tanzie,i thnk?
K..tcr...

--indu