VirMan FF - Game of destiny - chap 5 UD 29/04 pg16

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princess14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

loving the story!! plz add me to the pm list..thank you

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aamina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Jaffu 🤗

first of all I'm really sorry for not reading your last update.. i have been really busy. Got your pm today and thought i'm dead if I don't read it today.lol so hear I am to comment on my HL' s wonderful FF!!!

The 1st update was awesome!! virat and maanvi fighting as soon as they meet. loved the little argument.lol

the 2nd update.. Maanvi in trouble and Virat saves the Day!! wow

you write so beautifully hun that i could imagine both chapters!! love the dialogues, it's exactly what we would see and hear in the show. Even though I don't watch the show much I like both viraat and Maanvi and your FF describes the characters so well.

okay, i think i best shut up now!! once again soweyyy .

Mwah

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Fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Amazing update please do continue soon and Thanks for the PM. 😊 🤗

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Great chapter, loving these twos nok joks!!!!

Many thanks for PM

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

I loved it really
pls pm me

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jafrina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

@khushi15 welcum hun and thanx

@thank you abhi

@juhi im glad u liked it hun thanx for the sweet comments

@niha12345 thank you luv

@shehroon thanx sweetie will continue asap and sure will pm u

@princess 14 thanx and sure will add you to ma pm list

@talli happy you enjoyed it hope i keep entertaining yall

@Mina angry with you why say sorry i know youre busy meri pyari behna no worries. But since you accepted youre mistake you need to get punished *evil winks* only joking no crime commtited so no punishment needed. Besides you called my ff wonderful awww love sweet. your to sweet hun love you always 🤗mwah

@thank you fiza and vasu

@sweet1210 thanx hun will pm u wen i update

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Aww Jaf, so sorry for reading this update late. Loved the way Virat saved Manvi from the goons and their fighting never ends. Can't wait for the next part yaar. Thanks for the PM, please continue to PM when you update.😉