IPKKND SS | The Bet | Note pg. 1 - Page 15

Nads this is smoking hot...!! can't wait for the next part🤪

love it- speciallt the first few lines ;) Edited by Divvy - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fazzy-wazzy

But to her surprise, he laughed, a low breathy laugh, "Alright then, we tried this the easy way... but now... " Khushi felt each word against her skin, sending a thrill of excitement through her.

But before she had a chance to ponder his words, he swiftly slung her petite form over broad his shoulders, and carried her to his bedroom.

this last line has ur name written all over it yaar .. 😉😆 ... loved and now am going read the next .. wonder wht u have come up with ... 😳 

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omg ..just read the next part ... and omg .. u are getting started and my mind is in the overdrive and is coming up with all sorts of things .. pls update soon before i embrace myself ...😆  

-  -badra 

Edited by 143badra - 12 years ago

Aaah... That was more hawt and passionate nadz! Waiting for next update hon... :) im simply loving this ss... Short are the parts but enough to swing us to arhi dreamland... Updatee quickly! :);)

Ahhh first thing I did when I woke up this morning was read the two new updates! 😳

 Loved it! 😃

Arnav is so naughty...and khushi is so stubborn
This update is on fire...and how evil are u?????? Ending at a spot like that
U better update soonEdited by anita_21492 - 12 years ago

awesome loving it can't wait for more

Nadia...Bring on more!!...the "Lip" Style! U have to...after, the pre-cap in the show ...we are dying for more:-))) Edited by ashvez - 12 years ago

I am really getting frustrated with reaching a high point and then waiting for more... ;-) Please longer updates... we are begging for it :-))))

Why, oh why do you have to update in sooo small parts??? Continue continue continue!!!