Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#711

WOW TANZIE..THAT WAS GREAT~!~ JUST AWSOME... PIA FEARS AND ABHAY CARING SIDE IS JUST GREAT!!!

EVERYTIME U BRINGS AN AWSOME SUPERB UPDATE THAT I HV NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE..

BUT I GOT VERY TENSED WHEN U SAID ABHAY GOING TO ROTHAD ISLAND...AS I THOUGHT CHAND WILL COME THERE!!!

ITS GOOD THAT U R TAKING THE STORY SLOW...ABHIYA MUST ENJOY NA!!!

HOPE U R PLANNING TO GIVE GREAT HAPPY ENDING!!!

LAST PART WAS AWSOME...THE ROMANTIC WAS HOOTTYYY...

UPDATE SOOON...

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#712

tanzie that was a very beauful update...loved it😊piya asking age of his boss😆hey i wanna confess something today...plz dont feel bad or dont get angry on me...actually maine is aaj he is ss ka PROLOUGE padha u know maine kabhi dhayan hi diya tha us pe...i had started from ch 1...but padhne k bad laga ki...pia will run away with their baby😲😲😲😲meaning a sad ending😲😲😲😭😭?????????????????????

anyways wo sab bad me...very nyc update continue soon and thanks for pm😊

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#713

😍abhiya 😍tanzie ye le kiss 😆enough ...aww jst loved their romance...and pia missing him 😳that was so nice and she came out of bath tub naked 😲itna miss kiya 😉 and ya see our abhiya this was their condition after all they met after 2 days😆 😆 and ye le aur tere liye...🤣cont soon ...and ya no more girl or lady falling 4 abhay pls 😡as it is problem is going to cum it will not be easy 4 abhay to lead normal life

p.s. see this

😆 enjoy

Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago

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bubble_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#714

Wow..!! Love u for this amazing update Tanzie...

Abhay made lunch for Pia..aww..how cute..and Pia who refused to even touch french fries when she was literally starving..ate all the oily food Abhay made for her with so much of love...

I love the way both make each other happy by doing small things for each other...

Both are so passionately in love ..I just can't stop admiring them...

He wanted to buy everything for me even on which I rarely set my eyes on. Then I have to explain it that girls look at lot of stuff to check doesn't mean they will shop everything. He just smiled and shook his head in disbelief.

This was so cute...

Moreover, Pia is tagged as 'handle with care'. She is very sensitive and irrational at times and doesn't matter she says it or not she loves me insanely. She might be frustrated with my stubbornness and often insecure about my past but deep inside I know there's noone who would love me like she does and that's why she is so possessive about me.

Loved this part Tanzie...

and someday I would love to see Pia meeting Abhay's boss..kya scene hoga..

And the last part was so hawwt...and lovely at the same time...

continue soon Tanzie...

And I would love to read this even more..if u make the story go a l'il slow..which means we would get to read small cute things which make us feel even more connected to this ss...

Edited by _Sonu_ - 13 years ago

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sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#715

awesome part yaar ...
Loved the way you have shown abhiya, getting to know each others feelings, understanding each others pain & enjoying every moment of their togetherness..
The last part was hawt !!
It was intense , passionate & sensuous

continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Edited by -Sonia- - 13 years ago

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#716

awesumm update tanz!!nt even remotely boring,...loved how abhiya r trying to lead a nrmal life...they're so happy and so much in love...bt through ths wondrful relation...while reading sum lines i cn feel that da darkness is cuming..

Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#717

Updated page 100 and PMs tomorrow... I'm sleepy 🥱

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#718

This was such a clam nice and peceful yet hot passionate update👏. Wow Abhay is writing wondr what he will write about and Pia the Jalkudi is jealous of Abhay's boss. Do make them come together once face to face. 🤣

The last part no need to tell I think ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#719

Amazing tanzie...
It just adorable...the way u described their relationship is amazing...super...brillant...

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#720

wow!!!!!!!!! its amazing😍 & nt bored at all 😃
in d mrng 1st thng which cm in2 my mind is "i hv 2 read tanzie's updt"😆😆😆
abhay is sooo caring d way he md lunch 4 her,at ngt dey slept in each othr embrace , piya's jealousy , obsession ,fear 4 2mrrw.👏everythng ws PERFECT!!!!!!!!!
i enjoyed each & every moment😳😳... last para. ws breathtakin abhiya in bathtub ...☺️☺️☺️
pkyek is stil livin in deep in2 my hrt & all credit goes 2 u all ff writers.. thx 4 mkin it sooo special 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago