Originally posted by: Blushsarika
Sorry for the late review,
Welcome back Achiever, you took very long time to update, but I can understand it.
Well regarding update as expected from you it was fantastic update, beautifully written.
Feeling of Nidhi missing Ashu was so innocent, pure and beautiful.
She was feeling his presence everywhere. This is the magic of love. She was keeping the promise which was tuff for her but she was keeping it for Ashu's sake whom she loves a lot. She is completely smitten by Ashu's love.
The way she was looking at Ashu's picture in her laptop that was so...sweet.
It was like her day Starts with Ashu's name and Ends with His name. It's such a beautiful feeling.
You have worded it so nicely and smartly.
She decided to spend her day by making a good impression of Ashu on his baba and discussing about her mom and there love story.
Only thought coming to her mind is Ashu and only Ashu.
You have described her emotions so beautifully that it's a pleasure to read.
Seeing that Ashu has already impressed her Baba by telling him the truth about her car .she admires him and ultimately got the idea to interact with him.
She calls HK and passes her message to Ashu that so romantic even Ashu was missing her.
She came to know about Ashu's favourite dish and decides to prepare it
her odd behaviour creates doubt in DB mind. But her Baba seems more worried about her health.
She was missing Ashu so much that she needed someone with whom she can share her feelings, so she decides to share it with Anjie her best friend.
That part was very nice when Anjie was teasing Nidhi.
While speaking to Anjie that both the important men in her life thinks that she was suffering from PSTD. She actually diagnoised her own disease, reason why she used to faint seeing a open wound.
What is Nidhi upto can be revealed in the next update only.
Atleast I am not able to guess it.
So eagerly waiting for the next update
with expectations of some Ashni scenes.
You took so long to update , so we readers deserve a next quicker update, so make it sooner
and thanks for the pm