Liked the story. Nice one. One blooper or mistake which is that u cannot abort child in the 8th month of pregnancy. It is life threatening to mother. I wish u could have found out little bit about pregnancy. Another loop hole how can other family member did not notice Khushi's pregnancy?
One request can you either keep all the parts together or add a link to each pArt for next part as it was very difficult for me to rest of the parts after I read part 8 and wanted to read part 1 to 7. Thank you.
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