Start is good and wish to have a unique and different fic. π
update soon
Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks very much
I love the title and the concept!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - i'm glad u really did
What a thrilling concept with lots of action and romance!!!!!π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ - yeh wanted to try out something new
The poster is just awesome!!!!!π π π π π π π π - thank you
I am glad that finally you have started this story!!!!!π π π π π - yeh finally the right time came for it
She was sleeping peacefully after an exhausting day at work!!!!!π π π π π π π π - yes she had worked really hard
She struggled violently when she was grabbed and didn't give up fighting for her release!!!!!π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ - of course she is a strong fighter
She had even worked out how her capturer must have gotten inside her room!!!!! π π π π - she is smart too
But unfortunately her attempt failed and she was carried off and thrown inside a black limosine and then it sped off!!!!! - yeh sadly
Then she saw him sitting there all clad smartly with that arrogant smug expression on his face!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - yes he is a smart and powerful personality
I am sure that the sleeping beauty who is abducted is Naina!!!!!π π π π - hmmm perhaps it is
It seems like she knows him and I wonder why he has abducted her!!!!!π€ π€ π€ π€ - yeh the mystery shall reveal slowly in the following updates
Her kidnapper can be none other than Rajveer who is the Don!!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - aaah now lets see
She isn't one to keep quiet and showed her displeasure and asked how dare he abduct her like this!!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - yes she isn't the one to be defeated easily
Her appearance in that thin white satin nightdress had enticed his already heightened senses but he kept control over himself!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - hehe after all he is a man so has to be aroused
He behaved as if he couldn't even hear her and just gave her a look which showed full authority!!!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ - yes he was well composed
Woh kaha chup rehne waali thi and kept demanding that the car be stopped and yelled as much as she could!!!!!π π π π π - hehehhe yeh she is very adamant
Finally the car stopped but only when it reached its destination which was a huge compound!!!!!!π π π π - or u cud call it his fortress
She just wanted to get away from him and ran but the place was like a maze and she was lost!!!!!π π π π - yeh she was stuck badly
He cares for her and that's why warned the guards not to hurt her!!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - of course he does otherwise why wud he have kidnapped her
Finally the stress of the whole incident came down upon her so much that she fainted!!!! - unfortunately yes
I loved his authority and his killer attitude!!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ - well thats what makes his character so interesting
I am waiting to know what had happened between them which led to this kidnapping!!!!!!π π π π - surel ywud cum soon
Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Hi Arwa - Hi Suhaana
Thanx for starting another RN fiction.π - I'm glad u liked itIntro part is totally captivating.ππ - thanksI think Rajeev is obviously playing the Don who isn't afraid of anything.Why has he abducted Naina?? - hmmm well the answers will cum in the following updatesI think they both knew each other and something has gone very wrong somewhere. - hmmm perhaps, lets seePls continue soonBye
Originally posted by: sainiayshi14
Hi Arwa..π€ - hey Ayushi
your new fic sounds very intresting..ππΌ - thanks very muchthanxx for the PM - ur welcomecont'soon.βοΈ
great start
seem really interesting
plz continue soon
Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes
hey n new fic... π π π ...congratz - thanks very much
well coming to part, it was nice, sp it was none other than him who kidnapped her...n seems they now each other.. - hmmm perhaps it is like that, now lets see
so curious to know what had actually happened... - surel ywud cum up soon
cont soon
Originally posted by: sanjana25
wow
looks soo good
contd soon
do pm me
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