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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#571

OH Dear,
please allow me to thank you from my heart,
yes..it's true,
I liked it ?
I JUST LOVED IT,
you are an awesome writer,
A unique Story OF Arnav and Khushi..
very beautiful love story,
You did a wonderful job dear,
every song you chose as the title of the Update.👏
the emotional turmoil of Khushi ⭐️
the only place where she find peace HER CABIN,
the little help that bring them together..(first ride to her home),
next meeting at the temple and the conversation,👏⭐️
the answer He gave..why didn't he believe in God..⭐️
everyday the little talk in her cubical (very special moments for both of them),
Lavnya's behavior was obvious and liked her character...
London trip cleared his mind and the conversation between him and his parents...
and it ended very beautifully...
I loved each part of this SS but the most beautiful according to me is part 5, and second most beautiful part is 7...I think it's a base of this SS.

thank you very much once again..

and a gift for you..

Edited by shakrobaaj - 10 years ago

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#572

AWESOME STORY👏👏👏 short nd cute😛😛😛 loved it😊😊😊

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Thyme

@Thyme

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#573

Thanks!

Originally posted by: shakrobaaj
OH Dear,
please allow me to thank you from my heart,
yes..it's true,
I liked it ?
I JUST LOVED IT,
you are an awesome writer,
A unique Story OF Arnav and Khushi..
very beautiful love story,
You did a wonderful job dear,
every song you chose as the title of the Update.👏
the emotional turmoil of Khushi ⭐️
the only place where she find peace HER CABIN,
the little help that bring them together..(first ride to her home),
next meeting at the temple and the conversation,👏⭐️
the answer He gave..why didn't he believe in God..⭐️
everyday the little talk in her cubical (very special moments for both of them),
Lavnya's behavior was obvious and liked her character...
London trip cleared his mind and the conversation between him and his parents...
and it ended very beautifully...
I loved each part of this SS but the most beautiful according to me is part 5, and second most beautiful part is 7...I think it's a base of this SS.

thank you very much once again..

and a gift for you..

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#574

One...of the Best stories...I've ever read...flawless!

Wish you would write...one more!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#575

This story is so good!!!!!!!

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StripePurple

@StripePurple

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#576

How did I not find this before???😲

I don't generally appreciate office romances. But this...is so much more than that. The beauty of the writing. Reading this gave me such a feeling of contentment. Very rarely have I found myself reading an FF and truly believing that Arnav and Khushi belong with each other and nowhere else. And you made me believe that wholeheartedly. No angst, no OTT drama, and yet their love was so tangible, such a precious delicate thing. Beautifully fleshed out characters, set amidst poetic writing. Thank you. :)

I really liked Lavanya here. She's oh-so-human. Usually one just waits for her to walk out of Arnav's life so that the epic Arnav-Khushi story can go on. Just another side character whose dignity lies in her exit. What can you say to that? Here, I truly didn't want her to leave. I don't know what I wanted her to do, but she became so real that I can only let her go by hoping she finds her place in the world some day.

Payal-Khushi and Arnav-Anjali. Sibling bonds which started out so strongly in the show and then just got lost in the haze of the love story. I like that these siblings disagree with each other , voice it, and are confident enough in the other's strength to depend on it, to count on them for support. Khushi refusing the man who rejected her sister. Arnav going to the temple because he believes in Anjali's faith. I loved how Arnav and Khushi, by finding and accepting each other, also found a deeper connect with their siblings in the process. It made for such lovely reading.

Arnav and Khushi...they didn't make me twirl or sigh or cry. I didn't want yo shake her for being obtuse or smack him for running away from what is between them. No extreme reactions there. They just made sense to me, you know? I can find no other analogy for it except maybe, a musical one. Like two deep notes coming together at just the right moment between the notes of a soprano. And our expectations are fulfilled; our hearts are at peace.

Thyme/RB/Sookie, your variety never ceases to amaze me. Thank you for sharing your work with us here. :-)

Edited by StripePurple - 10 years ago

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#577

beautiful story, loved it😊

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Preethi

@blackdove

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#578

Beautiful. Very refreshing and different. Mostly just simple. Beautifully simple. This is how the story was.❤️

* Thanks to rasgulla_sp for recommending this story.🤗

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meera30

@meera30

IF-Rockerz

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#579

It's unfair to pick favorites in art but in its jane austenish essence and yet incredibly believable characters, this is my favorite piece of fiction ever written with these names.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#580

Meera..this story is of my favs..I have read it so many times!

So glad to see to see your comments here!

Thyme...I have said this before here, this is beautiful work, Thank You!

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