Hamari Kahani-(KYPH FF)UPDATED - Page 3

omg that was freaking aawesome! Cont .soon!

KArishma whoz continue next ???? 😕 😕

ok guys..the point is dat after Kashish and I write a part each..you r gonna continue...if u dun want to plz tell us soo..we firgure sumtin out. but for now..u all r continuing dats the piont of Hamari Kahani 😃
KArishma****

continue soooooooooooon!!!

take care
Laiba

ok..since no1 is continuing...i guess i will...but plz dun get mad if my part is stupid...cuz ive nvr rilly written a fanfice story before...

PART 3

Its the nxt morning after the party and kripa is sleeping. her cell rings and wakes her up.
K- hello? aliya?
Al- Hey Kripa! Good Afternoon!
K- Wht? Good Afternoon?
Kripa looks at the clock and sees that it 12.30pm
K- o shoot...God..we came back from the part really really l8.
Al- that the whole point of parties! stay up l8 and sleep-in....anyways...im going shopping in abt and hour...and then im going for lunch...and then i'll do sum more shopping....u wana cum?
K- sure! why not?
Al- ok then...ill pick u up @ 1.30? ok?
K- ok...see ya
Al- bye
Kripa got ready and all and Aliya picked her up and they both went to the mall. they did sum shopping...and then they went to the fod court for sum lunch
Kripa was walking to a table, she was looking the other way and then bumped into a guy.
K- omg! im so sorry!
Kripa looks up and sees the guy. the guy is none other than Angad!
A- **** ..uh...yea...its ok..
A sees tht the girl is Kripa
K- Angad?
A- Kripa?
K- Angad?
A- ok stop
K- o yea sry..
Aliya and Josh cum over. the cleaner guy cums over and cleans the mess. lol.
J- hey kripa, aliya...we're all here...so why dun we eat together?
Al- sure! gr8 idea
A- (mumbles to himself)
K-(all quiet)
J- me and angad are sitting rite there
aliya and kripa go take a seat. angad pulls josh back...
A- josh? wht was tht? why did u tell her to sit with us?
J- i didnt tell HER...i told THEM...angad, why dont u jus get over it?
Josh goes and sits with Aliya and Kripa
The 4 have their lunch. kripa and angad barly talked...it was rilly josh and aliya who were doing the talking.
so then after the lunch kripa and aliya leave...and josh and angad are jus hanging out.
J- so tht wasnt so bad, was it?
A- yea whtever...i dunno...u think shes moved on? u think she has a new bf?
J- i dunno...maybe...shes quite hot...she can find a new bf easily
A- shut up!
J- ok ok ok sry man...well..i rilly cudnt tell if she moved on or not....she most likely moved on tho...but maybe not..
A- will u jus make up yur mind!
J- sry..
A- its ok...i jus dont want her to move on and have a new bf...cuz i havnt moved on and it will seem like im a loser.
J- so why dun u play a game?
A- wht do u mean by game?
J- ok....nxt week theres gonna be another party.im sure kripa will be there. bring a girl along and introduce her to everyone as yur gf.
A- hey thts not a bad idea...but where will i find a girl?
J- well there are several girls we know who are crazy after u...u jus have pick the hottest and smartest one.

then a girl cums up to the guys
Girl - hey guys
J and A turn around
the girl is mishti. mishti was crazy abt angad (but not all possessive like in KYPH)...but angad wasnt too interested..he was jus friends wit her....but all the guys liked mishti and she was rilly smart....(like she isnt dumb like anitah is in KYPH. lol)
J- hey mishti!
J- (whispers to angad)hey i think u jus found yur fake gf.....
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ok guys...tht was my part...im not sure if its good or not...if u dont like it...jus tell me...but plz dont me too mean...lol

Moderator's Note: Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago

hello desi i sent u 3 pmss plzz reply

good job!!

love,
trisha

very good PAri..guys ders no limitations to how many updates u can post in a day..so griffin u can still post a part! i loved it though, pari write a ff...i promise i'll read it 😆 and yea..i sigh my name after every post-its Karishma..u can call me dat-(griffin) 😃 Kashish..i think this wasnt a bad idea 😆
KArishma****
continue sooooon!!

Originally posted by: meeraxyz

please write more i cant wait

u can alwayz write u noe😃

KArishma***

guys this is my 1st attempt so plz bear with me
                                                                Part #4
Angad thinks its not a bad idea to make mishti his fake gf
Mishti walks to angad and josh
She hugs each of them
Angad 4 the 1st time is kind of attracted towards her
M: are angad kab aaye I missed u sooo much
A: oh really..(then he stopped)
J: mishi so who is yr new bf
M: are tumhe to patah hai na mere bf's 2 hafte se ziyada tikte nahi hain filhaal to koi nahin hai why r u asking do u want to become mine (not looking at josh but angad)
Angad was stupidly staring at mishti
J: nahi yaar toh u r coming to next weeks party at Karishma's house
M: oh haan I am coming what about u?
J: no I won't be able to come but angad wanted to go but he wants company but I can't go so he is also not going
M: oh main hoon na
Angad is still looking at mishti
But slowly he realizes it was not KRIPA (he had tought it was kripa)
And then he put his gaze down
Angad didn't speak
A(thinking): I have to move on I am not a looser
Josh shaking angad
J: angad to its set u'll go with mishti
A: yeah
Mishi again hugs both of them and goes

Meanwhile Kripa had come back she had forgotten to take sumthing from the mall
She saw angad hugging mishti
She was quiet shocked
She immediately turned her way and went out of the mall

When she reached home
Kripa sat on her bed hugging her pillow
She closed her eyes and she remembered something that that she had buried ages ago those memories which she had left but now they came back
She remembered angad and her walking in the garens holding hands
She remembered angad hugging her
She remembered the warmth he gave her
She remembered the way he used to kiss her
When she remembered this suddenly
She threw her pillow and opened her eyes
K: oh no why am I remembering all this it is past I don't love angad anymoe now I know he has move on but why wasn't I ableto move on I have to I don't have to remember things which I never bothered all these years
But the she felt her face was full of tears she got up and washed her face
K(thinking): I can't let this happen again to me never
And she walked to her room and took out some work and started doing it

Angad in the mean time was also thinking the same things
He was in the garden that was at one time the most significant thing in his life
Some tears came out of his eyes but he decided to forget them
And he sat on one of the benches
Then only mishti came
M: angad……
Angad did not respond
M: angad josh told me everything I never knew u loved me so much
Angad completely shocked
He looked up
But there was his kripa sitting
A( thinking): kripa yahaan she loves me
Angad was so drained out that he couldn't see it was not kripa
He couldn't see that he never bothered to remember kripa all these years but now the feelings were again rising
As if the sun was coming out again slowly bringing its light again
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That's it guys this is my 1st attempt to cont a story I hope u guys liked it
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Edited by griffinmonster - 18 years ago