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Hooria

@hooriaa

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Awww so cute i loved virman to bits and the starting was dhamakedaar argh hate rocky the doggy but loved all the sweet loving and protective realtionship of the bhais...
Do continue soon and update longer and when u do please pm me

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Thanks for the PM

Loved it👏

Continue soon!!!!

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Damini

@VarunKiBiwi

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Aww was super cute!! Thanks for the pm and please pm me when you update!😊

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Preethi

@preethis

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

awww loved it dear... waiting for next part...

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Love how you've shown the strong bond of the brothers here, willing to do almost anything for each other.
I really enjoyed reading Virat and Manvi conversation and them holding hands... aww 😳

Lovely update Sabeeha ❤️

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kavitha

@meg_met

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

thanks for the pm...

sorry for replying so late... was caught up in work. in college...

amazing loved the way u have poigantly described the feelings of each character... coming to the update... i just love the v bros... tey are just amzing loved the essence u brought out here...

its gr8.. so finally maanvi nd virat unite to join viren nd jeevika...

waiting for the story to unfold..

keep updating...

update soon

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shahriddhi

@shahriddhi

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

hey sabeeha! its been a while since i checked the forum. but your writing is worth the wait and time! i must congratulate you for the amazing updates! i read the last 3 together and i am elated to see how you handle each and every scene and character

loved the viren - virat bonding scenes

i am repeating myself but i love the way you paint a complete picture. keep going and please update soon!

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Safina

@miss_choxz

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

amazing work...please add me to ur pm list

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350519

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Awesome Story! Read it all at once.

I really like how you have written about the relationships they all share (especially between Viren and Virat as well as between the mother and her sons).

I can't wait to read more! Please continue soon!...

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