KriYaansh FF "Love v/s Hatred" Part 22 on Page 139 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 1:

KriYaansh FF… "Love vs Hatred"..

Scene starts from the garage where REYAANSH was parking his car.

Suddenly Kria also comes in her car to the garage. She was talking on the phone and SUDDENLY she banged into Reyaansh's car and there was HUGE DENT in his car.

Reyaansh was in full anger. He comes out of his car-

Rey: Samjhti kya ho tum apne aap ko Ms. Kria? How dare you to destroy my love? My car?

Kria: Oh! Hello… chilate hi rahogey ya mujhe bhi bolne dogey…galti se hogaya..and puhleez..go show this attitude to someone else…jitna bhi kharcha hoga..le lena mujhse… huh!

Rey: oh! Great…so abh tum mujhe paise dogi… mujhe tumahri bhik ki zarurat nahi..bt u hav to say SORRY ..

Kria: Sorry my foot! [She says this and goes off with full attitude]

Rey: Sorry toh ye bol kr rhegi…By hook or by crook…

[As soon as Kria enters the college..all boys start drooling over her… she was looking exceptionally beautiful and hot..]

Random Guy 1: Heyyy K K K KRIa.. I I I I lllooo…

Kria: what? Loser….i love you bolna hain na?

Random Guy 1: Haaannn … K

Kria: SAY SOMETHING NEW!! ;)

[kria moves to her class and sits besides NEHA (her childhood friend)]

Neha: Why u late to class Kria?

Kria: areey neha…kya bataun…mill gaya tha panoti..REY.. uff..!!! Disgusting Character..

Neha: U Kria.. :P

[Rey enters the class and sits behind Kria (as he wants Kria to apologize to him)]

Rey: Tayaar ho jao Kria… Sorry bolna ka time aa gaya hain..so be a good girl and SAY SORRY..!

Kria: Main aur sorry vo bhi tumhe..HAHA..NEVER .. better luck next time..

Rey: you….

[Professor enters and they hav a boring class]

Vicky: Kyaa yaar yeh phir aa gaya…isko koi bimaari nahi hain kya? Buddha..

Nilesh: yes DUDE..issi baat par gimme the beat guys…

Vicky: Chup bhak…hamesha beat beat…sach ka beat dunga.. hospital mein milega..

[Class gets over and Kria goes near the FIRE EXIT and Rey finds this the best moment for his PLAN…SORRY PLAN]

Kria: OH! Aaj toh maa ke saath shopping jana hain…offo..! L

Reyaansh pulls her inside the FIRE EXIT

Kria: Kya hain…chup chap khade raho and let me go…chichore..

Rey: OH MADAM..mujhe koi shok nahi hain tumahre saath romance krne ka…just say SORRY and leave

Kria: Kisse pala padh gaya…. UNIVERSE JI… OK OK OK…S-O-R-R-Y-.. Happy?

Rey: Jao tumhe maaf kiya….wush wush!

Kria: LOSER!!! :/

[They both leave for their next class]

 

PROMO:

RDX sir throws a party…FRESHERS PARTY..!!! J

 

 <<Reviews>> 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
continue soon
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pm nhi kiya!! :( u knw I dnt thot ki kria sry kahegi.. Bt kria nd Rey to full attitude me he.. I'm likin dis.. gud 1!!


-Ishita
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dancedevil

Pm nhi kiya!! :( u knw I dnt thot ki kria sry kahegi.. Bt kria nd Rey to full attitude me he.. I'm likin dis.. gud 1!!


-Ishita

I am so sorry Ishita.. 🤢
But i am glad u liked it.. and Next time..pakka u ll get the pm...btw pls send me the BUDDY request... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum kriyansh nok jhok...i luv it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ff its like rishta wahi soch nayi...😊loved your idea👏 and please pm me for the next update Edited by cherrysood - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrysood

nice ff its like rishta wahi soch nayi. loved your idea and please pm me for the next update

haha..
rishta wahi soch nayi...sounds funny bt true in a sense... 😉
and thank you..!!!! will PM u pakka..!!! 😊😊😊
PS... everyone thode lambe comments pls... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rishitaaa!!!!!!!🤗
It's awesome girl...😃
I loved it...😳
This new avatar of Kria is hawt...Ms. Attitude...😳
And She said Rey "Chhichora"...🤣
Real awesome work...😊
Please PM me next time you update...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc keeping writing 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing part n kria with so much attitude love it