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Posted: 13 years ago

isse pehle ki yeh update padne ke baad saari kriyaansh fans meri band bajaye mei pehle hi bata deti hoon..

first of all i was sick nd upon tat my internals today k it went good but due to this i dint update this lately!!!

nd secondly as i told before i wud get SWARON CONFESSION too in this thread hence im chyanging the name of the SS to--- > kriyaansh &swaron love confession (SS)...

nd this part has a bit more of SWARON seq 😕 im sorry kriyaansh fans i cudnot stop writting SWARON part!!!!

nd SWARON fans get ready SWARON confession will also b GOOD!!! 😃

nd Kriyaansh fans plzz like nd doo coment! nd swaron fans looking forward to ur replies too..

nd anymore i dun want to call SWARON / KRIYAANSH fans i jus wanna say D3 fans!!! 😛

this was the best i cud to SWARON & KRIYAANSH love confession.,.. next part 2mrw...


PART 5:



Swayam held that GUNDA's hand spp strongly that he could even not move an inch!! He turned nd swayam gave a punch on his face..! it was thn wen that Gunda fel down Sharon noticed swayam nd was really surprised astonished and also shocked at swayam's bravenness!!

The rest came forward to hit him but swayam mashed every1 nd hit them to the ground!! Sharon had never seen swayam soo powerfull!!!!

All the Gunda's were lying on the floor crying out in pain but on of them slowly managed to come back of swayam nd pushed him… swayam dashed to the near by tree nd was left wid a pierce on his shoulder!!

He was unware of how deep it was! He could only feel a little wich cleared at the approach of that Gunda towards him..!! he gave a hard kick on that Gunda's chest making him attach to ground!..

Wen everything was setteled down all Gunda's ran away wid their broken body parts..

Swayam came forward to Sharon who was dumbstruck at swayam's act!! She was standing wid her eyes nd mouth open wide!!


Sw: "Sharon..?"


She did not react she was still not back to her senses..


Sw: "Sharon!!??? R u ok??"


Sharon yet in her thoughts!!"



Swayam losing his patience went forward to her holding his hands on her shoulders nd then giving her a shake!


Sw: "SHARON??????? Kya hua?? Tum teek hona???"


Sh: "haan haan haan mei mei muj muje kya hua hai?? Mei mei blcul teek hoon!!"


Nd pushes his hands off from her shoulders!! He feels the pain at his shoulder as soon as Sharon pushes his hands!! He was deep pain nd Sharon realised it!!!


Sh: "swayam?? Swayam kya hua?? Tumei koi chot thon hi ayi? R u ok??"


Sw: "(coming back to his angry mood) mei teek hoon!!! U don't bother!! Tumari car…??"


Sh: "but swayam I think tumei chot lagi hai..(she comes near him to show)"


Sw: "(moving a step back nd showing a stop signal to her) I AM FINE!! Tumei gar nhi jana??"


Sh: "(gets irritated) huh!!fine agar tum hi keh rhe ho ki u r fine thn thn y shud I bother!!!??? Jo krna hai karo!!"


Sw: "filal argument karne ke bajah tum yeh sochoge ki gar kaise jana hai I think tat will b fine!!"


Sh: "kaise matlab gadi se!! my car!!?"


Sw: "accha?? Toh chalo baito nd apna gaadi strt karo..!"


Sharon had forgotten that her car was not in gud case nd its door was also not opening!!


Sharon goes front nd tries hard to open but fails !!


Swayam was standing and starring at her!!


Sh: "haan toh gaadi teek nhi hai!! Ok ab kya kare yeh b tum hi bata do!! After all apne aap ko bahut smart samjthe hona tum!! Ab iska solution b tum hi do..!!"


Sw: "first of all yeh meri problem nhi hai!! Meine tumei yahan anjaan jagah mei drive karke aane k liye nhi kaha tha! Nd secondly mei tumara assistant sirf college mei hoon!! Nd im not ur alltime servant miss Sharon raiprakash!!"


Sh: "accha toh tum yahan aye hi kyun!!???"


Sw: "wo isliye ki kabhi meine tumse pyaar kia tha!! Tum bool sakti ho lekin mei nhi!! Nd ab tho uss pyaar ka koi matalb hi nahi hai soo just forget it!!!"


Sharon dint knw wat to say!!


Sh: "(aftr a long time) accha toh koi taxi pakadthe hena…!"


Sw: "taxi??? Ab raat ki 11 baj chuke hai!! Nd yeh kaafi sunsaan jagah hai yahan zyaada koi nhi aata!! Nd hardly u can find any vehicles soo lift b nhi milega"


Sh: "toh tum yahan kaise aye?? Cycle se??"


Sw: "NAHI mei yahi paas mei ek park hai wahan baita tha ..!! jab tumne call kia tho muje laga ki yahan aana chahiye isliye agaya!!


Sh: "fine! Toh toh ab kya kare?????"


IN ST.LOUIS… (KRIYAANSH)


Kria was sleeping in rey's shoulders holding his arm…


Kria: "rey..??"


Rey: "hmmm??"


Kria: "rey muje bahut pyaas lagi hai..!"


Rey: "kya?? Pyaas??"


Kria: "haan(lifting her face up)"


Rey: "ok chalo neeche canteen mei dekte hai shayad mil jaye muje b buk lagi hai..!"


They go to canteen and are trying to find something!! They are unsuccesfull! They could find nothing!


Kria made a straight face looking inside the canteen shelves.. rey was busy searching but Saw a sad expression in kria's face nd


Rey: "dude!! Kuch soch!! (slowly smiling) I think I knw ki kya karna hai!!"


Rey comes forward to kria..


R: "kria chalo..!"


K: "kaha???"


R: "meine kahana chalo!! Muje tumei kuch dikaana hai!!"


K: "kya rey??"


R: "kria?? Tum kabhi meri sunti kyun nhi ho???"


K: "par rey batao tho sahi ki kaha jaa rahe ho?!!"


Rey gets tired of convincing her comes closer to her keeping his finger on her lips..


R: "ssshhh!! Bas mere saat chalo!! Trust me!"


Kria was touched by rey's behaviour nods at him nd he takes her hand nd moves…


They reached fire exit! Kria throughout was only thinking of rey nd simling..! she came back to her senses when they reached fir exit nd she realised rey was taking her outside the college!


Kria stops in stairs (fire exit) rey too stops one step front of kria..


Rey: "now wat??"


Kria: "REY meine kahana muje abi bahar nhi jaana (crying tone like a baby) muje tumare saat rehna hai bas!! Wo b akele!"


Rey: "accha akele??"


Kria blushes!


Kria: "Rey mei kahi bahar nhi jaa rhi hoon!"


Rey: "toh mei kaha keh raha hoon ki hum saat nhi rahenge?? Accha ab suno.. (holding her shoulders) will u come wid me for a DATE"


Kria was SPEECHLESS at his words!!


Kria: "kya?? D d d date????"


Rey: "yes date!!!"


She is blushing to the core…. Giving a sweet innocent cute smile,


Kria: "rey wo wo wo.."


Rey: "toh mere saat Date pe nahi jana??"


Kria: "nhi nhi meri meri matlab hai hai haan!! Wo mei…"


Rey(laughing at her sweetness): "fir chalo..!! and trust tum aur mei.. hmmm nhi HUM bahut enjoy karenge!!"


Kria smiling..


Kria: "chalo…!"


They run out..


They come to the back of the college nd move out through back gate..


Kria: "rey yeh kounsi jagah hai ??? humari college ki back gate!! Muje pata b nhi tha!!"


Rey: "haan pata tho tumei bahut si cheez ki nhi thi..! lekin ab pata chala na…???(smiling nd hinting of their love esply kria who took soo much time to realise)"


Rey take kria to a street behind the college…


SWARON


Sh: "FINE toh ab kya kare??"


Sw: "Sharon will u really listen to me agar mei kahu ki kya karna hai??"


Sh: "haan!! I don't have an option!!"


Sw: "yahan pe tho koi nahi ayega itni raat ko ! nahi koi gaadi na koi insaan!! Accha ek mein rey ko call kartha hoon!"


Rey had kept his fone in rehersal hall itself nd kria too…


Sw: "yeh rey ka fone lag kyun nhi raha hai??"


Sh: "do u think ki meine usse call karne ki koshish nahi ki???"


Swayam stares at her giving an angry look then dials barath.. barath was busy in his garage couldnot hear is fone ringing..!!


Then dials Vicky: Vicky and his deewaani too wer in a date in a restaurant… Vicky widout evn looking at the fone cuts the call..!! nd continues to look in to deewaani's (neha) eyes who was sitting right infront of him…


Then dials Nilesh: nilesh nd simmi is busy dancing in a club..! the loud music nd drinks playing inside their body! Nilesh couldnot hear his fone..


Then dials amar: amar nd rinni to wer in same club.. but they wer busy starring at each other sitting in a couch.. same case even he could not hear the ring!


Swayam's anger reached to the core at his frenz wer busy in their lives… infact their love stories.. swayam says to Sharon


Sw: "koi fone reciev nahi kar raha hai..!! pata nhi sab ke sab kaha mar gaye!!"


Sharon OMG!!! She was SMILING at BAD LUCK???? She was suppose to be outrageous nd screem at swayam instead she was blushing!!!


Swayam had a choice of calling his driver (he dialled the number but… na na na na neither he wanted to mis the opportunity of being close to


Ultimately the night was Romantic for all couples nd gave A big twist to their love stories!! Nd SwaRon too wer not left out!! Read my next update to know wat happns in swaron's love story… nd how will KriYaansh First Date b!!

plzz gimme ur revies coz i work hard on swaron also nd kriyaansh date is gonna b rocking (hope u too feel the same)...

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Posted: 13 years ago



i can proudly say i am d3 fan


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Posted: 13 years ago
Looking forward for the Kriyaansh date..!!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... !! really looking fwd to the kriyaansh date.. hope next part mein khub saara romance ho.. mujhe apna FF ki date yaad aa gayi DATE sun kar... 😃 m sure this one will be even better.. 😊
Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
can't wait for kriyaansh date!!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ~~ MICK ~~

wow... !! really looking fwd to the kriyaansh date.. hope next part mein khub saara romance ho.. mujhe apna FF ki date yaad aa gayi DATE sun kar... 😃 m sure this one will be even better.. 😊




ty sooo much!! im trynn to make date to b the BEST part 😛
and haan acxcha hua date yaad agayi sooo update it as soon as poossible!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
just waiting for the kriyansh date...update fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay ... I LOVE your filmy Swayam !! Bilkul hero ki tarha time pe pohuncha !!!

And that line "Kyun ke mai bhi kabhi tumse pyaar karta thaa .. "

THAAA !??! <--- The past tense just killed me 🥺

But I love ke how Swayam abhi tak ussse attitude dikha raha hai ... and not just usske peeche peeche liek before .. Loving it Nams !! can wait for the next update !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow kriyansh ki 1st date yippee
n swaron part was awsom
mjhe ni pta tha swayam is a macho lolz
chalo sbki gadi track p h
waitin 4 swaron cnfsn n kriyansh date
update update update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice eps
waiting for u r next update :)

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