Originally posted by: Angelskiss
A good start to the story... "Sunshine" so aptly fits Gopi - assuming that it is her. I really liked Ahem's characterization... waiting to see Gopi's... Is Jigar going to be related to Ahem and Rashi related to Gopi?... the ff has definitely got my interest...will be waiting to read the next part...
PS: Although I would like to make a request to please prove English translation... not really that good with Hindi...
Originally posted by: rashi.krishna
thanks for coming back.. please update other ffs too.. and one more request please give raji scenes too...
Originally posted by: vaishali667
hi dear thank for another great ff wow! yaar u made my day u r very good writer plz plz plz plz plz plzzz update next part as soon as possible plz dear
Originally posted by: shaina.sharma
wow its really very different good ff...
so they have troubled lives..thats new...
and congrats for becoing goldie...
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