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Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

Hum guess nhi kr sakte. Phle kiya tha to wo geet ke jgh piya nikli. Ab no guess. Nyc update

Well first and foremost i am very upset as my likes and comments are decreasing day by day. if you all not that interested in reading my story then say me I'll stop writing . But, so less likes and comments upsets me. i write for you all taking out time from my studies but what i gets is so less comments.

Nevertheless, this part is for those who love my work and appreciate it.

Hello friends, here i am back with part 10.

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maan and dev were highly shocked to see the person standing in front of them. Then slowly thier shocked face turned into a smiling face. Both maan and dev says together- rahul

dev- rahul oh god, what are you doing here. u r in patiala na.

rahul comes towards dev and hugs him.

rahul- dev yup i was in Patiala but now i am here. i am dr. rahul gupta here.

maan- what u really became the doctor.

geet who is witnessing all this was in utter shock how they know each other.

geet- rahul, u know them. How?

rahul smiles at geet and says- geet , yup i know them. In fact dev is my cousin from hosiyarpur, and i know maan through dev.

geet- cousion . oh wow. really this world is so short.

maan- u are right geet. i never expected that I'll meet rahul here.

rahul- anyways maan, how did this accident happen.

maan- oh nothing rahul, it just a car hited me.

rahul- oh. but how come you guys here in mumbai.

the question made both maan and dev sad again.

seeing thier sad face, rahul- what happen, why are you both making so sad face. is everything okay.

listening to rahul, they remains mum.

rahul- dev, whats the matter. Why both of u r mum. Tell me. i am getting worried.

Maan- I 'll tell you whats the matter. And maan said all the events up to ram uncle's death.

Geet and rahul who are listening to it have tears in their eyes. Rahul comes forward and hugs maan and dev, who are crying by now.

Geet stops crying and removes her tears- maan, dev, rahul chalo stop crying three of you.

Geet to maan- maan u r not alone here. We are here for you.i am always there for u.

Maan listening to geet stopped crying and now smiles at her.

Maan takes geet's hands in his- thank u geet. U r very sweet.

Geet just blushed listening to it.

Geet – thanks.

Both maan and geet were looking at each other with beautiful smile playing on their lips.

This whole scene is witnessed by dev, rahul and abhay-piya and muskan who have just came.

Piya smirks at them and started faking cough.

Listening to piya's cough, maan –geet comes back to senses.

Piya to maan- maan bhai how are u now.

Maan smiles at piya- I am fine piya. How are you?

Piya- I am gud too.

Dev who have seen maan's talk with piya was surprised when piya addressed maan as bhai.

Dev- maan bhai?

Piya- yup bhai. He is like my brother, who I never had.

Maan just smiled, so as abhay. { haan haan ab to abahy smile karege ga na, maan ko bhai jo bol rahi hai}

Piya to dev- aap jarur dev honge/

Dev was surprised again- yes, but how do u know/

Piya smiles and says- maan bhai ne bataya tha apke bare mein.

Dev- ohh

Rahul- dev, maan mujhe tumlogo ko kisise milwana hai.

Maan- kisse

Rahul- 1sec

Rahul went upto muskan who is standing and witnessing all the scens. He holds her hand and brings her forward and made her stand infront of maan and dev.

Dev- muskan. Wow tub hi yaha hai.

Muskan smiles at both widely- yup me bhi yaah hun

Maan noticing sindoor and manalsutra in muskan- oh god muski tu ne shaadi kar li.

Dev too notices it.

Dev- muski tune kisse shaadi ki, kab ki.

Muskan-arre mujhe bolne doge tab na batungi. Haan maine shaadi kar li wo bhi rahul se.

Dev , maan- what…………… and they started laughing

All looked at them as they have seen some alien.

Muskan getting frustrate- why r u both laughing.

Controlling them.

Maan- oh sorry but mujhe yakin nahi ho raha . I mean tum donone shaadi kar le. How come. Tum dono to chuhe billi ki tarah ladte the.

Muskan n rahul were embaressed like hell.

Geet smiles and says- maan ye ab bhi aise hi ladte hai. Par ye bhi to sach hai ye ek doosre se pyaar bhi bahut karte hai.

Rahul- ok enough of you all.

Rahul to muskan, abhay, piya- guys hume chalne chaiye. Duty bhi to karni hai.

All- yup.

They bid bye to maan and dev and left promising to come to meet in evening.

Maan to dev- dev tu thak gaya hoga. Tu hotel ja kar aaram kar . mein thik hun.

Dev- nahi maan main tujhe chod kar kahi nahi ja raha.

Geet- dev, maan thik keh raha hai. Tum jao . aur hum hai na maan ka khayal rakhne ke liye.

After much to drama, dev accepted to leave. He left for hotel saying maan to take care.

Maan- thanks geet.

Geet just smiles at him.

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Ok here I end part 10.

So now our maaneet are alone in ward. Guess kya hoga.

Waise that 3rd person was rahul, par kisi ne sahi guess nahi kiya.

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