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Part-13....Kshitij & kumud on a disco floor danding 2 Bandh…{koi aap sa}.Kali cums there & sees it with irritation & drinks liquor.kali cries & hugs ks.Kumud was shocked.Kali:don't leave & go kshitij.
She hugs him tightly. Ks:kali..plz…
K becomes upset & runs away. Ks:kumud,listen 2 me.
K does'nt care & she goes.Ks becomes sad.Kali falls unconscious on Ks' chest.Ks becomes irritated.
Kumud is at home with tears.she sends her x'mas uncle a message:uncle,where r u?I need ur presense as a comfort.I'm really depressed.the person whom I luved most cheated on me.

Bajaj laughs:kusum,all these days,u were trying 2 hide from me no?I new that U'LL DO SO.i cud've caught u b4 itself so easily,when I dropped kumud 2 her house..in the shopping complex tho u hid urself from me,I'd seen u.but I waited 4 a situation where only u & me r there.so that I can open my mind 2 u.
Kusum:why r u after me Bajaj?why r u taking my peace?
B:not purposefully,but…my circumstances make me do that.
K:this is cruel.
B:how can it b cruel?bcoz 4 me what I'm doing is right.
K:u r purposefully becoming close 2 kumud 2 destroy my peace.
B:u r right.i'm purposefully becoming close 2 kumud.its my right.
K:I won't allow her 2 go 2 ur office anymore.thus that relationship will end.
B:never,bcoz b4 kumud joined my offce itself,I was close 2 her.u'll no everything later.let the right time cum.u can't run away from the truth kusum.
K:what do u want Mr Bajaj?
B:u no what I need?I want kumud.
K:what rubbish!that'll never happen.
B:why not?
K:bcoz I'm her mom.
B:don't 4get that Abhay is not kumud's dad.Kumud has only 1 father & that me.None other than Rishab Bajaj.

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Posted: 18 years ago
     😲      😲     😲 dats me right now
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part-14....K felt that she'll faint.B:I'll get kumud back.
Bajaj goes.K gets depressed.K thinks:the truth I tried 2 4get is haunting me.oh god!

Bajaj goes home.Apo*na stands there with burning eyes:Mr.bajaj,what r u upto?I'm talking about ur relation with kumud.how cud u trap a girl who must b seen as ur daughter?that girl is not bad.she is after u 4 money.
B gets angry & slaps her:stop talking nonsense again.
A:u beat me
B:I'll again slap u if u talk bad about my daughter.
A:ur daughter?
B:yes,u r doing a sin by gossiping about me & kumud .bcoz she's my daughter,my own blood.
A was shocked:kumud is the daughter of the famous business man Abhay Kapoor.
B:no,b4 the public abhay is her father.but the truth is that I'm her father.
B goes. A cries:kusum..so my real enemy is u?

Apo*na meets kusum at a place. A:Mr.Bajaj told that he's kumud's real dad.i want 2 no whether he's lying 2 escpe from the rumour of having affair with kumud.tell me kusum,was he telling the truth that he is kumud's real dad?
Kusum weeps:yes,
A was shocked:enuff.so u both were lovers?then why did'nt u both get married?u married abhay with Mr.Bajaj's baby?
K:u r misunderstanding us.
A:what misunderstanding?
K:plz listen 2 me.
A goes.K cries:whats happening 2 us?

Apo*na arranged sum ppl 2 2 kill kumud:I don't want kumud 2 b an obstacle 2 our family.so kill her.
Those guys go.Rishi hears it. R:mama,why did u tell them 2 kill kumud?was the rumours correct about kumud & papa that they r in luv?
A:no,the truth is that kumud is Mr.Bajaj's & kusum DEshmukh's daughter.
R:what?then Mr.Abhay Kapoor?
A cries.R becomes angry with bajaj ,kumud & kusum.

Rishi goes 2 Abhay's office room. A:I did'nt understand u.
R:I'm Rishi.Rishab Bajaj's son.
Abhay was shocked.He thinks:oh god!bajaj's son..the terrible thing I did'nt want 2 happen is going 2 take place?
R:do u no my dad?
A was speechless. R:I'll tell u if u don't know.bcoz I think u r innocent & os getting cheated by ur wife.my dad is ur wife's ex-bf.
A is shocked. R:I hope u'll digest another horrible truth that kumud is not ur daughter,but my dad's daughter.that's why my dad appointed kumud in his office.
A is shocked.he thinks:kumud is working in bajaj's office?oh!I did'nt no.if kusum nos that …how can she tolerate it?
R:1 thing u make sure.kumud will b sent 2 another world soon.
A was stunned.R goes.
Kumud's cell phone rings.K sees kshitij's no & she switched off the ph.Ks who was standing on the opposite direction becomes sad.The ppl sent by Apo*na cums near kumud & grabs her hand.K screams.Ks gets shocked.


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Posted: 18 years ago

arre post next part so I'll read....I'm waiting...

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Posted: 18 years ago
PART-15....Kshitij beats them & they run away.Kumud's eyes r full of tears.
Kshtij:get inside my car.its not safe 2 b here.
K:why do u care 4 me?leave me alone.
Ks:kumud plz..
Ks forcefully pushes into is car & drives 2 another place. K:what r u doing?where r u going ?
They reach another place where no 1 is there.K:I want 2 go home.how can I sit with u alone in this evening?its already dark.
Ks:I can understand ur feelings.everygirl gets scared in this situation.but bwlieve me kumud.i've no bad intention.i want 2 marry with our parents' permission.b4 that I won't behave badly with u.bcoz I luv u that much.
K was surprised.Ks:I no that u believe what u saw in the disco club.kali is crazy about me.i tried 2 make her understand that I don'y luv her.but still she is after me.nothing else kumud.i luv u.
K:I'm sorry kshitij.   
K looks at ks' eyes. Ks' fingers go thru her face. Song:kuch to {kal ho na ho}

Kusum is tensed:its so late.kumud has'nt cum yet.
Abhay:don't worry kusum.kumud wil cum soon.she's smart.
K:however smart she is,certain circumstances can do anything 2 her.
A:what r u tensed about?
K:I hid a secret from u 4 not making u upset.kumud is working in Mr.Bajaj's office.
A was shocked:so u new it.
K:u new it?
A:2day I realised that truth.
K:I'm scared whether he'll snatch her away.
A thinks about rishi telling that he'll send kumud 2 aother world.A becomes upset.
Ks drops K 2 her house. Kusum goes near her:kumud,r u ok?
K:ya mama,I'm alright.why r u this much tensed?I'd lot of work 2day.that's why I became late.
K thinks:no need of telling mama the truth.she'l b upset.
A becomes happy 2 see K.A:how did u cum?by taxi?
K was speechless. Kusum:Mr.Bajaj dropped u?
A was shocked. Kus:how many times did I tell u not 2 b close 2 him?
K:I came by taxi.
A-K r relived.
K thinks:how can I tell that kshitij dropped me.
K goes. Kusum:abhay..that bajaj is so cruel..
A:we can't blame him,bcoz he's trying 2 get his daughter no?
K is stunned;no,kumud's dad is u abhay.only u..

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Posted: 18 years ago
fabulous
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keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey Jasmine!!!

Good start with the fan fiction ... its really fabulous 😆

I just came back from watching kkusum .. they finally aired here in canada.. but i missed the first and second episode 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
Fantastic..... 👏
plzzz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART-16..Abhay's eyes r full of tears:kusum,why did kumud take b'th as my daughter?
Kusum:but kumud is ur daughter abhay.
K hugs A & comforts.

Kumud gets x'mas uncle's message:Kumud,b careful while u fall in luv.its dangerous.
K mails back:don't worry uncle.i was misunderstading my luver.he's very nice.

Apo*na talks on oh:what?u did'nt kill kumud?dammed!
She turns back & is shocked 2 see Bajaj there.B slaps her:how dare u try 2 harm my daughter?u can't do anything 2 her while I'm alive.
A:ya,I did so,otherwise I'll lose u.
B:u'll lose me only if u harm kumud.why don't u understand my feelings?
A:ok,I understand ur sentiments 2wards kumud.but why did'nt u marry kusum & had kumud with u?why did u marry me?do u hav any affair with kusum now?
B:I've no connection with kusum.
B goes.

Kusum:Abhay,we shud'nt allow Mr.Bajaj 2 hav kumud.so we shud get her married soon.
A:yes.

Kusum & abhay show kumud sum guys' photos. K:whom do u like more?
K becomes upset.A notices it:what happened kumud?u did'nt like any1?
K:no papa.i don't want 2 marry
Kusum:it's the correct time 2 marry.u finished ur studies & got job also.
A:do u luv any1?
K & kusum r shocked. A:I'm like ur friend no.tell me.
K:yes.
They r shocked. Kusum:who is he?
K:Dr.Kshitij.
A:r u gous serious about it?
K:yes papa.

Kshitij cums there.kumud is shocked. K introdces him 2 her parents:this is kshitij.
A:nice 2 meet u.
A:kumud told me everything.
Ks:that's true.i luv her very much.i want 2 marry her.i'll bring my parents soon.i'll tell them 2day.
A-K –kumud smile.

Kshitij tells his parents Aryaman-Saakshi:I luv a girl.
Aryaman:kali?she's mad about u.
Ks:not kali.kumud.plz papa..i luv her.
They smile. A:We won't stand against ur wish.
Ks becomes happy. S:we want 2 see kumud.
Ks:I'll bring her soon.

Kumud gets up from the bed.Abhay-kusum with a smiling face:Happy b'day kumud.
K smiles:thanku papa…mama…
Abhay gives a family packet of chocolate:ur fav 4 u
K:thanku papa.u r the most wonderful father in this world.
Kusum:my present 4 u is in the evening.i've prepared a sweet cake 4 the bday party.K:I'm waiting 4 it.

Ks phones:happy b'day kumud.
K:thanku..in the evening there is a party.i hope u'll cum.
Ks:sure.

Kumud gets ready 2 go 2 the office.Kusum:2day u don't go 2 the office.
Kusum thinks:Mr.Bajaj on kumud's b'day…Oh!he'll do sumthing.he can't 4get this day.
K:mama,I'll go & cum now.i've 2 invite Bajaj sir.
Kus:what?why ?no need.he is an outsider.
K:he's not an outsider 4 me.
Abhay-kus r stunned. K:he's my boss & I respect him.so…bye..
K goes.Kus & A r mood-out. Ku:Abhay,whats happening?
A:cool down kusum.
K:how can I?sum1 is trying 2 snatch our daughter.
A:believe me,we won't lose kumud.
It was a sharp voice.

Edited by jasminerahul - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon