NEW FF:TODAY WAS A FAIRYTALE!! - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
that was a sweet update
wanna see the reaction of those letters when pia comes to know about them
abhiya fights like kids😆
thansk for the pm and do update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Wowww Nice update:-) Abhay is too much hehehe:-) love him:-)... cant wait 4 next update yaar:-) continue soon ok...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

nice update ...

abhay is very irritating ...
 waiting 4 letters reaction ...
 thanx 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
😆 really abhay is 2 much pia wont leave him for this update soon n plz pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Chapter  four: Misunderstandings

Jeh  went  to  his  locker  and  found  a  letter  and  opened  it.

Dear  Jeh,

       Mujhe  tumse  ye  kehne  ke  liye  bohot  der  lagi  par  ab  main  tumse  kehna  chahti  hu  ki  I    LOVE  YOU ...main  meri  poori  zindagi  tumhaare  saath  guzaarna  chahti  hu ..kya  tum  mera  saath  doge?

Tumhari  PIA.

After  reading  the  letter  Jeh  was  on  cloud  nine  he  immediately  ran  outside  and  went  straight  into  Kabir.

Kabir: HEY  DUD...

Jeh: Gotcha   go!!

Kabir  confused  2  himself: Pata  nahi  aaj  kal  logo  ko  kya  ho  gaya  hai...(opens  his  locker and  found  a  letter  too)  opens  it  and  gets  the  biggest  shock  of  his  existence! And  he  too  runs  out  to  find  Pia.

Pia  was  talking  to Misha  in  the  cafeteria. When  Jeh  came  running  to  her  and  kissed her  on  her  cheek.

Jeh: YES!!! Main  tumhara  saath  dunga!!!

Pia(confused): WHAT!?!?!?!!?!?!

A  big  mob  had  enclosed  them  already.

Jeh: I LOVE  YOU  PIA!!! I  ALWAYS  THOUGHT  THAT  YOU  WILL  SURELY  CONFESS  YOUR  FEELINGS  TO  ME.

Pia: Jeh  im  telling  you  the  last  time  that  I  DON'T  LOVE  YOU!!

Jeh:but  pi...

Kabir : What  the  hell  Pia  I  thought  you  were  my  sister  my  PRINCESS...n  you  LOVE  ME!!

Pia: what!?!?!!?!?

Kabir:  What  is  this(he  hands  the  letter  to  her)

Pia: Hey  I  never  wrote  this!!

Kabir: Thank  goodness...then  who  did  this...

Pia:  I  don't  know  but  im  gonna  execute  him...

Misha(waving  her  hands in  front  of  his  eyes): HELLO  JEH  U  DER?

Jeh:  I ..i...i..gotcha..go

All  of  them  leave...Abhay  had  a  jovial  laugh behind  the  pillar. Afterall  his  plan  had  worked. The  rest  of  his  day  was  dull  cause  there  was  no  Pia  in  any  of  his classes  which  thwarted  him but he  denied  the  fact  that  he  missed  her.

AT  RAICHAND  MANSION:

The  door  bell  rings  and  the  butler  opens  the  door.

Haseena:Who  is  it ?

Abhay: Its  me  mom.

Haseena: OH ABHAY  I  HAVE  A  SURPRISE   WAITING  FOR  YOU  IN  YOUR  BEDROOM  COME  UPSTAIRS!!

Abhay runs  upstairs  to  find  his  room  dark   and  puts  on  the  lights to  find hi  bro  and sis  with  his  mother   sitting  comfortably  on  his  bed.

Anayka  and  Aditya:ABHAY!! SURPRISE!!

They  hug  each  other .

Haseena: Com  on  now  get  ready  for  the  party!!

All  three:  YES  BOSS!!

At  Dobriyal  mansion:

Pia: im  so  DAMN  SURE  it was  ABHAY!!

Misha:FORGET  IT!!agar mamma  ne  humme  20mins main  taiyaar  nahi  dekha  na  then  she  is  gonna  execute  us!!

Pia:  ya...what  should  I  wear?

Misha: I DON'T  KNOW!!

At  raichand  mansion  the  guest's  were already  enjoying  themselves  when  the  Dobriyal's  arrived .everyone  was  staring  at  Pia. She  was  looking super hot.(she  was  wearing  a  lbd)

Host:Ladies  and  gentlemen  welcome  to  the  Raichands  party as  you  all  know  this  party  was  for  welcoming  the  Raichand  siblings  Abhay,Anayka  and Aditya. So please  put  your  hands  together  for  ABHAY:-(in  black  suit)

ANAYKA:-(in  a short  dress)

AND  ADITYA:-(in  a  suit)

PRECAP:Abhay:  Can  I  have  this  dance  with  you?

Edited by pkyek.roxxxxxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
beautiful ff
waiting for the next update
abhay pia character r amazing and very interesting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

I hope its piya who abhay asks for the dance in the precap!

update soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
What a Cute update:-) Abhay na hehehehe :-) really funny... please update soon :-) thanks :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
The letter mess ws good.update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
nice update dea😊r letter misunderstanding was good😆 continue soon