Originally posted by: Smileyface
soumi!!!! woohooo ur 1st!!!dont worry hun...i will guide u with my stalker skills! and then u shall become as good as me ๐คฃ ๐คฃ ๐คฃAND HAHHAHAHHA!!! u cant hunt me down -___- cause then u won't get an update...hmph! heheheeh thank so much hun! im glad u liked it =D and psht..i cant ever be as good as u!and yeahhh...he is a bit of a mule no? men -_- but dont worry i shall set him straight...maybe...hmm =Pim shocked at the response i got...people actually like this...everyone is so sweet <33LMAO some people PMed me and demanded to turn it into a FF and not an SS hahaaha...im like uhhh i dont even have anything planned yet...but we will see lol!sigh everyone on this forum is so nice =)thanks again soumi loveee <33333xoxhershi
Originally posted by: Aussie2011
PLEASE PLEASE pm me! loved you SS , you should start writing more stories about arhi, your really good ! great job ! ๐๐ผ ๐
Originally posted by: Mysticnavya
Hats off !!!! It was very gud !!! Plz do continue and pm me !!!! ;)
Originally posted by: minimuffin86
me love this ss!!! make it an ff!!! *munching on albino jalaibies and sighing contentedly*
nothing like a monday afternoon, great ff's on IF and a whole week of IPKKND to look forward to!!!
omg! this sounds great!! love how arnav is feeling and i just drawn to khushi.please please please pm me!
I loved every part of it you are realy good
Originally posted by: KaushalyaFan
Hi Hershi,
Great stuff. I enjoyed reading it. Your writing is great. :-)
Best,
KF
Originally posted by: PurpleFairy
OMFG, Hersh, lovely start and I love the title๐
Haha! Same as your Ian's siggy text๐.๐I'm looking forward to this. Poor Khushi, ,man and I love how Arnav wanted to take all her pain away๐The poem's beautiful, omg๐.๐Continue soon๐ค
Lovely start! Please continue and add me to your PM list! xxx
Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Add Me To PM List : D
Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven
wow di that was sooo awesome...
it was really beautiful...He would be Arnav. Her Arnav. i loved this line...and the poem you wrote at the end...it was amazing di...really beautiful...you have to continue this...i know you will make it awesome...and do pm me when you update...-mah
Originally posted by: ccuteaangel
Hey, I really liked this first part. Please do continue and PM me when you do. You write really well and I feel you capture the characters as they are. Great job :)
Herrrsheee!!
Great going and there's nothing wrong with your stuff! Keepo it coming. Btw, ''This girl will definitely drive me crazy'' reminds me of Maan Singh Khurana. I thought that was his patented dialogue but I guess Arnav Singh Raizada managed to get the rights...lol!
Hershu...I knew you were good but never realized you will be so good๐
Starting is so good and I liked your version..Lets hope it happens in real show too๐
Cont soon๐ณ
Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.
Yo!๐
So, i have no idea what was happening in the story and what you were going on about but hey! You're good.
And i read this only for you so you better feel honoured. I no longer read any FF's, or OS's or whatever. ๐ณ
But. Wow. You went for the story format this time. Me like. You're good at it. Continue it. And you've improved. ๐ฒ Like, when i started reading it, i was like, woah. She's good.๐คฃ
oOo. That little quote/poem thing is good too. *frowns*
So, yeah. That's my comment. ๐
-Jot.
Originally posted by: malluangel
hello my jaani <333
i finallly got to reading this!
HERSHI!
bitch.write. ok ill say it nicely.
didi didi. please write O_O
haha ok sorry dude, just UPDATE!
she cant stop at that! he has to flip out and like drag her to the temple n drag her around the saat pheras and everything before she can go hai devi maiyaa!
Originally posted by: evanjaidan2226
hi hershi my name is hershi also i really love part 1 of this story. can't wait to see what happens next
Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Loved it! Can't wait to read more!
Originally posted by: meenaluma
pls continue pls pm me when u update next part
Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani
Amazing beginning ... I like ur writing style Hershi .its really gud ..pls continue as I want this to be a big big FF with lots of ARHI scenes ๐ ... n I have likd d post for d PM ...thanks very much ๐
hey i rly loved ur ss yaar๐i rarely read such good ss's. most of them go overboard and show the 2 to be totally different. its rly hard to maintain their character while writing ss's.i would rly love to see arnav finding out about khushi marraige in da show.so currently im living wid da ss's and stuff. keep on writing ok??u rock!!!!!and dont 4gt to pm me๐
woow this was amazing please update sooonn =)
Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi
It's by YOU
M sure it's gona be greatWill read it whenever I get time :)
Originally posted by: aquablue17
Off course you will help me silly! I would be horrible at this if not for you!!๐๐
Ahh true. Fine I will just make you surfer in other ways... Maybe not talk to you... nahh that would be more me suffering๐๐ I will just update later then usual!! Kay?? ๐
Oh please! You are a much better writer! Do you not see your responses? I do not get pms telling me to change my stuff into longer pieces of writings! I am just happy I don't get pms saying "Stop torturing me! It burns!!"๐๐
I am not shocked at all๐ค๐ค I sooo saw this one coming! I mean come on? This is just amazing here!!
Yes people are so nice here! It makes you wanna abuse their kindness even more by updating ๐คฃ Well I try to give them a break haha ๐คฃ
Why are you thanking me silly?? Thank you awesome writing skills!!
Soumiโค๏ธ
plzzz continue and make this into an FF!!! it was a brilliant start...dnt even think about throwing this away...or else!!!
LOL
Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
awesome start dear...
plz continue soon...
do add me to ur pm list...
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