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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: pratiksha2009

awesome update, but thank god abhay sense evil about alina, but i think they trust enougj each other its impossible to break abhiya, they come out form every problem, but i am worried about panchi, i hope jeh dont not any hurt to her

Thank you!
I hope so too!
Will pm you once Im done!
Thanks again!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: MiniMouse810

Thank you!
Will update soon!
I did! I dont know why it did not reach you!
Sorry!
Thanks again!



its ok 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
heyy ur fic is good!! pls pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

heyy ur fic is good!! pls pm me!!

Suree! and thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Fifth Chapter!
Jeh:*To himself*Panchi. That girl. I cant keep this on for long cause if mom comes to know about this then its all over and if that lil Panchi tells anybody about it...I have no idea what would happen! Today! Yes! I have a perfect chance tomorrow!  there is a dinner party here which Alina arranged! And after that I just have to make some reason and kill her.But I am not going to use my warewolf powers to kill her. Cause if I do, then Abhay will doubt me for sure. Just one knife and that Panchi is over! Let me invite the whole whole Dobriyal family.
Jeh calls Arnab.
Jeh:Hello uncle. Actually we have arranged a dinner party for tomorrow. Would be glad if you could comes along with your family.
Arnab:Sure but any special occasion?
Jeh:No its just a get together.
Arnab:Sure. We will be there.
Arnab goes and tells all in the house about the diner party.
Then next day...
Panchi was unable to sleep the whole night..She had decide that in today's dinner party she would try to find what that was. 
Just then Pia enters the room.
Pia:I am going for college. 
Panchi:Oh should I drop you?
Pia:*blushes*No its fine. Abhay is coming to pick me up.
Panchi:Oye hoye! Yaha tho bohoth kuch pak raha hai!
Pia:I am going! Byee!
Just as she reached down the stairs Abhay is at the door to pick her up. 
Pia:Your just on time,
Abhay:Always am princess!
Pia:Lets go!
Just then Misha enters the scene,
Misha:Where do yo both think that you are going without me? You both are free to call me any names like kabab mein haddi etc etc but I am coming with you! 
Pia:Misha you! I...
Misha cuts her off/
Misha:Looks like nobody has time for me. And then Misha makes her sad expression.
Pia:Its not going to work.
Abhay:Let her come na! After all she is your sister!
Pia:But... Okay fine! Chal nautanki!
Misha:Yaay!
All three of them get into the car.
All of them were quiet. Nobody said a word. Just then Misha broke the silence.
Misha:If you guys want to talk its fine. I shall close my ears,
Pia:You stupid! Just shut up okay.
Abhay:No Misha, its fine. We dont have anything to talk about.
Misha:See Pia learn something form him.
All of them reach the college and get busy with their work.
Abhay and Pia start talking about Alina,
Abhay:I dont see her here today,
Pia:See I trust your senses but are you sure that Alina would do such a thing?
Abhay:I know its hard for you to believe Pia but it its true.
Pia:By the way is your family coming tonight? And how is Maithili? I wan tot see her!
Abhay:No they arent and Maithili is fine. You can see her anytime you want..
Pia:Okay I gotta go now so byee!
Abhay:*Smiles*Byee!
The day passes by and all of them dress and reach at the Khuranna mansion.
Alina talks to Jeh alone.
Alina:You called Pia's whole family? Why?
Jeh:Dont ask me too many questions Alina. I know what I am doing!
Alina:Whatever! Thats all you say!
Alian and Jeh greet all the guests.
They all join in. 
Just then Jeh tells Alina to drop juice on Pacnhi's top. Alina does not ask any more questions and just does it.
Pacnhi:Oh no! 
Jeh:Come here Panchi, I will guide you to the washroom.
Pnachi:Okkayy...
Jeh and Panchi start walking..
She spots the washroom and starts walking ahead of him. Just then Jeh takes his knife out. And then Alina comes running.
Alina:Bro, what are you doing? 
Jeh:Dont ask me anything baccha. Lemme do my work.
Alina:I am not going to tell you anything but you are taking Panchi with you and if she dies when you were with her then whatever you do, the blame is all on you! Act mature,
Alina just walks off from there to get started with her plan. 
Jeh:To himself* What is wrong with me? I have to be calm.
Jeh along with Jeh go back to the main hall.
Abhay and Pia where staring at eachother all the while. Pia was wearing a beautiful white dress with some black sequence work. 
Misha starts laughing at them. 
Pia gives Misha an angry look.
Misha:Okay! Kadoos and jobless only you both are!
Abhay:In his mind* Something bad is going to happen tonight. Cant understand what!
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No precap for today.
Hope you like it and please do comment!

Edited by MiniMouse810 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
hey!!!me first...awesome update⭐️...wat is alina upto??there is no precap also😒...n liked misha !!! she is chanceless 😆...kabab main haddi😆...m really curious 2 read more...so jeh is really back of panchi!!m eagerly waiting 4 sid n maithli part😳...continue soon..n thnx 4 d pm😊Edited by madhuri16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
wow lovely update  i love misha she is too naughty bachare abhiya ko romance hi nahi karne deti and hope abhay know about alina evil plan and he fail also jey plan to kill panchi . waiting what happened next thnx 4 pmEdited by abhiyan_soni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awesome update
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: madhuri16

hey!!!me first...awesome update⭐️...wat is alina upto??there is no precap also😒...n liked misha !!! she is chanceless 😆...kabab main haddi😆...m really curious 2 read more...so jeh is really back of panchi!!m eagerly waiting 4 sid n maithli part😳...continue soon..n thnx 4 d pm😊

Lol about Alina you will know soon! 
Will do soon!
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
yaar please update the next part soon m getting curious . lovely part ye birdie to aaj jaati pakka agar alina nahi ati. thanks for the pm n update soon .