::ONE SHOT::Magic Potion 22 October - Page 2

Monkey

@TISA0711

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nyc one.really gud.u write so well.m amazed.Edited by TISA07 - 12 years ago

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome ayesha..loved it to the core...

loved the way piya managed everything..and the story was too good...i have no words to describe it...so all i can say is fanatabulous..keep up the good work!!

Edited by peehu24 - 12 years ago

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great part Ayesha Di!!

Love the character sketch and write up!!

Story line is so different!

great part!

thanks for the pm!

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668837

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing!

There can be nobody better than you!

Truly Awesome!

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 12 years ago

👏ayeshu u are awsum yaar kaha se ye ideas ate hai aur itne saare ff aur os how do u manage yaar thanks for the pm loved it

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673340

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update👏 damm aline so sweet u babby u help abhay and say run abhay run save u r mother so sweet of u . and pia babby u also understand abhay situation but hamesh hi latelateef kahi ke but and most important humari evil vampy back with bang and say run abhiya run kyoki mein aa gayi hun haa ha ha and plz dear kya sid nahi aasakta tumari os mein kyon matz bapsa aa gayi to sid kyou nahi with same attitude cvs to pata nahi kab sid ko vapse lane wale hai but u can do it na to plz think about it waiting for what happened next .thnx 4 pmEdited by abhiyan999 - 12 years ago

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532166

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb shot
luvlyyy
luv u
vritika

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 12 years ago

ayesha simply superb!!!!

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Murphy369-
Great part Ayesha Di!!

Love the character sketch and write up!!

Story line is so different!

great part!

thanks for the pm!

U know me Murphy. I was planning on writing this Os for so long actually i have 4 OS in my head

Abhay and Maithali-Lost In Time

Maithali and Sid-Lck me in your Love

Abhay and Alina-Mine to have and to hold

Funny shot on Alina and Maithali-The One

But time nahin milthi. I am updating my FF today and my OS hopefully

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Selina

@Selinapiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res..
i will edit it soon...😆

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