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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: moon_mine
wow!!!
wonderful part 5!!!!
n m so hating nani!!!!

Thanks moon_mine for your feedback. I'm happy you liked Part 5. Yeah, I thought it was a obvious thing for Nani to do. I thought it would be great if Anjali could have some sort of confrontation with her grandmother. Anyway, I'm gratified that you liked Part 5 :-) KF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Loved the fact that Nani is into that whole hamarey khandaan ka naam, hamara rutba, woh tumhara pati hai akhir...and Anjali gives Nani a heckuva reply!

WOW!

Please develop this track a bit more...I love the confrontation...

Awesome as always KFan...our resident novelist! Thanks for taking the time to entertain us...

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Vera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Do pm me when 6 is up...10-Q!

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Archanafan
Loved the fact that Nani is into that whole hamarey khandaan ka naam, hamara rutba, woh tumhara pati hai akhir...and Anjali gives Nani a heckuva reply!

WOW!

Please develop this track a bit more...I love the confrontation...

Awesome as always KFan...our resident novelist! Thanks for taking the time to entertain us...

Hi ArchanaFan, thanks once again for your great feedback:-) I'm glad you liked this confrontation between the 2 women. Nani belongs to the old way of thinking that your hubby can do no wrong and here we have Anjali who is a girl of today and is more emancipated and is reacting to Shyam's lies with hurt and anger. Yet, Nani who only cares about her "khandaan's rutba" doesn't understand Anjali's rage and the pain she is going through.

I'm happy that you liked Part 5. And I love reading your feedback as always. It encourages me to write more. KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Archanafan
Do pm me when 6 is up...10-Q!

Hi ArchanaFan, yes I will PM you when I'm done with Part 6 and post it. As always thanks for your interest :-) KF

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xxMizzyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

hey ur doin a great job...i luv da way u write...but plzz can u hurry i cnt wait for part 6

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: xxMizzyxx
hey ur doin a great job...i luv da way u write...but plzz can u hurry i cnt wait for part 6

Thank you xxMizzyxx, for your kind comment/feedback. Thanks for the compliment on my writing. I am working on Part 6 right now. Hopefully I will be done sooner rather than later :-) KF

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Loved This Updateee . Want Arnav To Save Khushi :) 😍 Sorry For Commenting Late Actually College Is Stressfull 😆 Updatee Soonishh 🤗

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Loved This Updateee . Want Arnav To Save Khushi :) 😍 Sorry For Commenting Late Actually College Is Stressfull 😆 Updatee Soonishh 🤗

Hi Sanzz, thanks for your feedback/comment. No need to say sorry, I'm glad that you read it and liked what I wrote. I know what you mean about college being stressful, it really is for everyone.

Yes, I am working on Part 6 right now, but work is so hectic that I really have to find time to write. But, it's fun so I make the time. Good luck with college ;-) KF

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Ritika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

I love this story so much! I can't believe that Nani would force Anjali to take Shyam back! It makes me so mad at her! But I am glad that Arnav got out of jail, obviously. I can't wait for the next part!