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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Awesome part.
I just loved it.
Why did u stop at such an adorable point yaar?
I wanna read ahead.
Plz try to update soon.

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Mannat Shonaholic Royal KaShian (Mannat SRK)

@.Mannat.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Firstly Reply to ur PM Thing
So YES YES YES i do want PM for ur each n every story update.. got it? great
Now lets tok abt update..
Wow such a cute adorable couple they r :*
I love them :)
n lol @ 'phir se wahi drama shuru' haha
both of them have treasures of cuteness i guess.. bs i am hating this kabab m haddi sumit :/
hey ha btw u didnt put in the other parts of last precap(ek convo to tha, what bout others?)
n Thanks for the PM
update soon
Luv u n ArSh :* :)

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#633

OMG i am commenting after soo long

sorry Laddoo😳 but now i am doing it

well i loved this part

well i think Anjali shouldn't interfere between them...Its all between husband and wife.

and then this Summit 😆 there will be a time when he will be beaten up by Armaan 🤣

and Summit is already a langra 🤣

what i really liked was the convo between ArSh and in the end the both slept on the same bed☺️

Waiting for the next part...pls continue soon and thanks for the PM

~~~Bharti~~~

Edited by sweet1210 - 12 years ago

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divi1oct

@divi1oct

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Superb part..

Loved their convo..

Thanx 4 d PM..

Continue soon..

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Sameera

@sameera_12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

kahan se laun main dimaag..tumhare chakkar woh bhi to khota ja raha hun main

You cracked me up yaar!!!!🤣🤣 Kya halat hogai hai bechare ki😆

He shifted closer to her and gazed at her passionately.

"Huh😲😲😲"

She felt butterflies in her stomache due to this sudden closeness.He touched her hand and she turned her face on the other side..her hair was blowing due to the wind which he tucked behind her hair with his another hand..

😳😳 That was cute... warna pehli line parh ke to ankhein bahar a gai thi meri😆

meri taraf dekho shilpa..aaj mujhe tumse kuch sawaalon ke jawaab chahiye...

Bohat bohat shukriyaa... Ek dhung ka step uthane ke liye...

meri aankhon mein dekho aur jawaab do tumhe kya lagta hai ke maine tumse shaadi kis liye ki thii...tumhe paane ke liye ya apni khushi ke liye..

Ummm... tumne jab shaadi ki thi tab tumhare farishton ko bhi nahi pata tha ke tumhare saath kya hone wala hai🤣

armaan-kya shaadi ke baad maine tumhe kabhi yeh ehsaas hone diya ke..main tumhe haasil karna chahta hun...yahan tak ke humari shaadi ki raat ko maine tumhare saath kisi bhi tarah ki zabardasti ki thi?

shilpa-aisa nahi hai armaan..tummm kya bol rae ho

armaan-to phir kyun...tumne itni bari baat soch li...main tumhe yahan is liye chorkar gaya tha kyunke main chahta tha ke jis rishtey ko tumpe thopa gaya hai tum usey dill se apna sako...mere ghar meri family ko apna bana sako..yahan tak ke mujhe wapas akey yehi mehsoos hua ke maine jo bhi faisla liya tha us waqt bilkul theek tha..main chahta tha ke mujhe wapas akey woh confused dari hui sehmi si ladki nahi balke ek strong himmatwali ladki miley...maine tum mein kabhi ek achi patni dhoondna nahi chaha shilpa kyunke maine janta tha ke shaadi shuda zindagi to dur ki baat hai pehle humein ek dusre ko samajhna chahiye phir kuch aur...lekin tumne mujhe galat sabit kar diya...meri aankhon tumhe vishwaas aur pyaar nahi tumhare jism ko paane ki chaah nazar ayi..you disappointed me...itne waqt mein thora sa to vishwaas kar leti mujhpe..kya main itna gira hua insaan hun?

O...o... Yeh to serious hogaye...🥱 Achi baat hai, kabhi kabhi serious talk bhi honi chahiye!!👍🏼

shilpa-tumhare jaane ke baad aisa ek din bhi nahi tha jab..jab maine apne aap ko sabke dukhi hone ki wajah na mani ho.ma ho ya papa..sabko huq tha mujhse naraz hone ka kyunke meri wajah se is gharse inka beta chin gaya...tumne yeh sab mere liye kiya lekin main itna samajh nahi payi ke aisa kya akrun jisse sab khush ho jaye aur...aur tum..jo itne dur hoke bhi sabse baat kiya karte thay sivae mere..mujhe yeh lagne laga ke shayad tum mujhe face karna hee nahi chahte thay...armaan rishtey kaise nibhate hai mujhe nahi pata...pati kya hota hai patni ke kya farz hote hai kuch bhi nahi pata hai mujhe...maine bas shaadi ke baad yehi jana hai ke main tumhare mujhse door jaane ki wajah thi aur isiliye apni galti ko sudhaarna chahti thi main...tumhare iraade kitne nek hai yeh shayad mujhse behtar koi samajh nahi payega..tum jaisa pati shayad hee kisiko milta hoga..aur...yeh tumhari badkismati hai ke main tumhari patni hun...

😲Arre Shilpa Boliii

armaan-mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum itna bol bhi leti ho

Mujhe bhi nahi pata tha😆 But this Husband wife moment was too cute...😳 And much needed😊

sumit-tumhe dekhta hun to jee karta hai ke apne dill mein chupe feelings ko tumhare saamne zahir kar dun..lekin...abhi thora aur time baki hai..bas kuch din aur phir main wada karta hun tum mere baahon mein hogi..I love you shilpa...

Beta! Bahon mein leyne ke liye tumhari baahein bhi to salamat rehni chahiye naa???😆😉

armaan-ab itni raat ko jogging to nahi kar sakta na to sone ki koshish karunga I guess

Hehehehehe!!! Good One!😆

It didn't felt like it was a rush... Infact mujhe laga it was a good, sweet update😳 Infact that little cute teasing talk for bed sharing and then the last bit of the part!!! It was fab...loved it completely!!!

Thanks alot for the pm... yeh update karne se zyaada mushkil kaam hai jo tumne kiya hai aur mera abhi tak pending hai

Continue soon...
Love,
Sameera
😊😉
😳

Edited by sameera_12 - 12 years ago

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Shivani Dhawan

@shivi17

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Precap kyun nai diya yaar.. Ab beth ke sochna padega ka ki what you are planning to write next... So many possibilities and dimag ki dahi ho gayi hai 😭 pls ek precap bhi dedo..

Edited by shivi17 - 12 years ago

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Sonya

@Ianoconic

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Loved the way you described everything. Gald they were talking about their relationship.

Comntinue soon.

Love

Sonu

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

hey loved the parts finally they are talking about their relationship and feelings ... loved armaan n shilpa's moments and conversations ...soo beautiful... finally they are understanding each other ... i hope sumit doesnt creat a problem between them anywaz pls continue soon and thanks for pm... take care... love aish :)

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: shivi17
Precap kyun nai diya yaar.. Ab beth ke sochna padega ka ki what you are planning to write next... So many possibilities and dimag ki dahi ho gayi hai 😭 pls ek precap bhi dedo..

Lol zyada socho mat abhi part ajayega precap ki kya zarurat😉

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: -SmokySapphira-
Loved the way you described everything. Gald they were talking about their relationship.
Comntinue soon.

Love

Sonu

Thankyou Sonu glad that you loved it😳