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Originally posted by: valliyah

 CONGRATS VALLIYAH FOR UR FIRST POST 😃Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago

As valiyah is not here today so update 2morow...

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

tumhara kuch nhi hosakta,,,..already taken per line mar rahi hoo...tumhari tu baat kerni paray gi yaar...

lol...

yeah love story hai..kiya kiya kiya...hum ny kab kaha k yeah love story hai..uf itni pari galti,..yeah ek yud hai maha yud...jis k end mein ek saaza meilay gi ..lets see woh kiy hogi

dekh tumhin pata hai k hum tumharay sath kiya kiya ker sakty hai...nhi ridi mein tumhara sir per sing  nhi nh...asai nhi hoon mein...sorry just joking

thnks fo renjoying this update

dekh men chori kerti hoo aur woh bhi seena thook ker...yeah valiyah ny kaha hai

will cont ASAp...actaully three ffs hard to mange ...

tc lov ya

tujhe aj patachala ki mera kuch nehi ho sakta...mujhe toh paida hote hi pata chal gaya tha...😆
assa tpoh ye yudh hey...toh phir thik hey...ab toh bahut maja ayega by god...😉
aur kya kahamere sar pe sing...par mere sar pe toh already sing hey...😆
aur chori karna maat chodna...main ashirwad deti hoon ki ek din tu bahut badha chod banegi😆...
aur raha sawal update enjoy karni ki toh tum dono uske alawa aur koyi rasta choda hey kya...toh chahu ya na chahu mujhe enjoy karna padhta hey😆...
i know its difficult to manage 3 ffs at the same time...don't worry take ur time...i don't mind to wait...take care nd love u too

FIZA Api n VALLIYAH Api...😳 Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 18anila1

FIZA Api n VALLIYAH Api...😳

kya hua?????????😳😳

abhi tak app dono ne update kyun nhi kiya??????😳

kyun hum masoom logo par itna attyachar kar rahe hain ap dono...😔

thori si toh daya kijiye hum par!!!!!!!!😔

hum bechare masoom insaan😳...baas thore se nautankibaj!!!!!!😎😉

kab se aas lagaye baithe hain!!!!!😳

plzzz update na!!!!!!!!😒

12din gujar gaye hain update miley hue...🥱😔🥱

meri do do APIs itni busy hain kya?????????😒

FIZA api toh mujhe maregi ke do update milne ke baad bhi m calling her busy!!!😆😆😆

bt VALLIYAH Api...ap kaha hoon??????😔

waise last uodate apne kiya tha na toh dis time toh Fiza api ki bari hain na!😉

leee... aur mujhe bolti hain main baas update update karti hoon..😛

waise meri pyari API...😉

12tarikh ko kaha tha will update tomorrow...😳

uss tomorrow ko gujre bhi 2days ho gaye!!!!!!!😲🥱🥱

ab bolo wen will dis "TOMORROW"" will come!!!!!😳

its seemed nt tomorrow bt Tu-marooo!!!!!!! hehehe🤣

ps: ok now imp note...agar mera yeh comment accha lage den update asap!!!!!😳

     agar nhi den update ""NOW""ok!!!!!!!😉

love ya 2 APIs...🤗🤗

2 mooro...lol

update k liye hum log tarap rahe hai
aur ap waha maza main time spend karrahi hai
veryyy bad
we want a super long update...
so update asap

Hello Guys,

Here is the next part, thanks for ur love and appreciation at the story.  We have rplyd to you all. Enjoy this part too, hope so.

 

I AM EXTRMLY SORRY FOR BEING LATE

Love fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

Chapter: 3

 

Nupur: ..wasy aj k dinner humaray ghar kerna...

MAYANK-kiya baat hai india modren hogay hai...

Nupur: kiya matlab hai tumhara

Mayank: ab larki mjhy khud date k liyan poch rahi hai...

Nupur: mera deemgh karab nhi hoa hai...mom ny tumhain dinner per bolaya hai..mein ny tu kafi mana kiy atha...per than...ab mom ki tu addat hai..daaan kerny gi, bhooko ko khana khilany gi...

Mayank: he glared at her..n than smile...sum people nevr change haina...

Nupur: yes perfection ko improve ker na muskil hai...

Mayank: wasy hum chay tu sath bhi jal saktay hain..its almost evening...maa ny tu wasy hi kaha tha k she will cum by herslf..

Nupur: shilpa anty subha hi agai thi..i meet her...n no thanks i'll cum by myself

Mayank: yaar jab ek hi jaga na jana hai tu problem kiya hai..

Nupur: mera abhi appointment hai.i need to meeet sum1...

Mayank: aur aao gi kase..ur car is out of order...

Nupur: public transport bhi koi cheez hai..

Knock on door

PA: ma'am mrs warsi wants to meet u...

Nupur: han bus 2 mins ..

Mayank: oki tum apna appointment handle kero ...cya thn...

Nupur: ya aj tu ghar ja ker bhi tumahri shakl dekhi paray gi...

...

Meeting her clients it was 45 mins, when she finished her work and get out of the office biding bye to cologue...pressing her neck she came out n stoped in her track,,

Nupur: tum yaha kiya ker rahy hoo...

He looked at her ..

Mayank: jhasi ki rani nupur kumari k wait..ap ny kahin dekha hai unko..

Inspite of herself she smiled at it...

Mayank: chalo...jhasni ki rani can make u smile still haina

Nupur: han..abhi bhi sochti hoon tu hasi ati hai...kiya kiya tha hum ny us colloge play k sath

Mayank: kiya kiya tha...itna entertaining bana idiya tha...ab mera kasoor tha tum dialogues bhool gai...kitni daar book hoti thi na tum ...

Nupur: stage se mjhy itna daar lagta tha k bus...per by god kiya play hoa tha woh….she said full grining

Mayank: larny mein tu hum no 1 hain...so dialogue aur script ki zarrorat nhi pari...

It was a colloge play and nupur was use to me not so confident person, was scared to face such a big crowd, she was playing jahsi ki rani. But forgot her dailogues...n than mayank came in front, n spontenoulsy start argument and so the play was ful on masti,  and made this play humour, my naming it jhansi ki rani k new avatar...n the play was super hit in collage festive...as whole crowd was ROFL...

Mayank: agar ap meray kayalo se bahr aagi hoon tu ghar chalin

Nupur: han…..mein aur tumhary kayalo mein..in dreamz..

Mayank: han tu mein ny bhi tu yeah h kaha in my dreamz dear..

Nupur: mayank tum kitna filrt kertay hoo ...

Mayank: aray yaar chal meri bhook k maray jan nikal rahi hai...kanjoos rhisty wali anty ek cup chay bhi nhi pilai...huh

They reached home silently...as she was too tired and he can see it...

NM: hello beta...

Mayank: namsate anty..he bow down n touch her feets..

NM: khush rahoo...kiya baat hai shilpa yeah tu bara handsome hogay hai

Mayank: han han anty ap bhi bol do mein teeli tha...

Nupur: rasty se hatoo teeli...namsate anty..

SA: hello beta..kasi hai meri princes

Nupur: bulkil thik

Mayank: yeah princess hai...uff ..duniya ki sari princess  suicide ker lay gi..

Nupur: she gave him nt so interested look and went to freshen up...

SA: yeah asay kam keray gi tu is k kiya hoga

MN: samhja sakti hoo tu samhja lo...kisi ki nhi sunti...

...

MN: tu mayank koi larki achi lagi

Mayank: anty wasy mjhy lgata nhi hai apki beti chahti nhi hai mein shadi keroo...

MN: kyun bhi

Nupur: mom..is ki list dekhi hai...uff...

SA: list nhi check list...tumhain pata hai yeah larki dekhny jata hai tu check list per chk n cross kerta hai

Nupur: w\WHT...heloo tumhain larki chayi ya mehinay k saman

Mayank: mehina k nhi zindagi k samaan...aur tum tu SOUL MATE finder hoo..tu dhoondao...

MN: aur wasy bhi mera beta itna handsum, intelligent...he rised his collar ..aur itna acha hai...tu larki bhi us k qabil honi chaiy bhi

Nupur: mom dekho larkyon k khuda ny aankein di hai...teeli  se kaun shadi keray ga...how tacky

Mayank: oh hello ..kis ko tacky kaha tum ny...aur teeli tu tum lag rahi hoon yaha sirf...balky yeah   stick ...

Nupur: mein jo bhi hoon na tum se buhat zayada achi hoon samjhy...

SA: ek min mayank tumhain chain nhi hai...aur wasy bhi yeah sahi kah rahi hai..itni sari requirements...

Mayank: maa tu bhi...anty ap sunay agar mein ny dil khol ker apni feelings bata di tu kiya galat kiya

NM: aur nhi tu kiya...itna sacha tu ha mera beta

Nupur: hello is ko feelings nhi requirement khatein hain...

SA: correct...over the top requirement...

Nupur: ap yeah batein...butter jasy nazuk haath k yeah keray ga kiya...subha nasaty k sath kahy ga...

SA: aur nhi tu kiya...phool jasay hath..garden mein sachy ga...

Nupur: antique museum pieces chaiy us ko

Mayank: he stood up ...dekho agar tumhara paas agar khubsoorat larkiyan nhi hai tu kah do...mein ek maago ga na 1000 milay gi

NM: arahy nhi beta..dekhna tumahin tumahri pasand zaror milay gi...

Nupur: han asamn se utray gi is langoor aur teeli k liyan...hoor

Mayank: mjhy kiya bool rahi hoo khud ko dekha hai khabi...

Nupur: roz dekhti hoon..islayan janti mein kiya hoon...she said raisng her hand in air...

Mayank: han janti hoon per manti nhi hoon...

Nupur: kiya nhi kiya nhi manti

Mayank: ankein dekhi hain tu ny khabi apni...itni bari hain k char admi ghoom ker bahr aajy..

Nupur: tu tum kyun jealous horahy ho...tumahri tu chasmay k bad bhi nazar nhi ati...andhay...

Mayank: aur baal...chirolai jasy…cut ker jahroo lagany k kam aay...actually cut kerny ki kiya zaroorat hai...zara chuk jao..wasy hi jahroo lag jay gai...per kamar mein tu tumhari pahtar haina...toot jay gi jhoko gi haina...

Nupur: tum se tu buhat behatr hoon...atleast useful tu hoon..useless teeli...jal jal ker khudi dhona hojati hai...kali teeli

Mayank: nupur ek baar aur teeli kaha tu ..aur kya qali…tum kiya hoo, bhoot naath, saafad..bhoot ki taraha…asa lagta hai fair lovely ki factor tum se hi chal rahi hoo

Nupur: huh mjhy koi zaroorat nhi hai..yeah natural beauty hai…samjhy…teeli

Mayank: ek bar bhi mjhy bhoot nath tum ny teeli kaha tu …

Nupur: tu kiya kiya

MN/SA: BUS...BULKIL CHUP TUM DONO>>>>EK LAFAZ AUR BOLO TU  TUM DONO KI SHADI KERA DO GI..

Mayank: mein khud khushi nhi ker lo ga

Nupur: zaroorat nhi hai..mein khud tumhara murder kerdo gi ..agar tum ny asa socha bhi tu…

Mayank: mein kyun socho tumharay baray mein, raho akeli zindgai bhar..wasy bhi tumhain shooq hai, aur umhara yeah jo attitude hai na, actually arrogance hai na us ko koi bardasht ker bhi nhi sakta…. aur bhoot nath ko yeah suit bhi kerta hai…

Nupur: han tu tumhain kyun fikar horahi hai, jasay chaho raho mein…to hell with u..

Saying so she left the place….and mayank look at the her moving away figure..

Mayank: uff…a bap dono mjhy asay maat dekhain…u know I didn't mean tht…n he too left the place…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

very sorry ppl for this late update as for compensation we are planning to give u all the next soon...!

Fiza-ish update as usual LOL...ur too good( bolne ki jaroorat hai kya), comments dekho sab ko rula diya but yeh hansi ke aansoo hai😆...!
Edited by valliyah - 12 years ago