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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AmarMoti

There should be some way someone cold submit these ideas for the producers to take into consideration, looking forward to your next chapter...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thanks!
I think the CVs do visit the forum sometimes...
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Posted: 12 years ago

**Chapter 11**

Runjhun walked down the steps of the beautifully decorated interior of the Pandey Niwaas,she was dressed in bright pink Lehenga with gold embroidery accompanied by Barkha and Mandy.Today was her Sangeet and tomorrow ..her wedding ,it sent shivers up her spine to the think of it,being separated from Guddu for eternity. Abhay looked up at her and a smile came across his face.

"Arre'.look at how the groom is staring at his bride!"A cheerful voice said.

"Dekho!Abha aur Karan aa gaya!(look Abha&Karan have reached!)"Barkha exclaimed.

"Dev aur Radhika bhi!" Mandy said.

"So glad you guys could make it!"Abhay said.

 "Of course we had to come,its our best friend,Runjhun's Sangeet!"Abha said.

"And if we didn't come we would've had to hear tantrums from our wives all night long!"Karan said jokingly.

"Well now that we're here there should be some fun,what say?"Dev said.

"Of course!"Radhika said.

 

Radhika and Abha took the dance floor.

Maahi Ve Maahi Ve That' s The Way Maahi Ve

Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke

(Karan and Dev pull Abha&Radhika up)

Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re

Maahi Ve

(Dev puts his face near Radhika's suprising her)

Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke

(Karan holds Abha's wrist)

Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re

Maahi Ve

(Abha&Radhika dance to matching moves with their partners by their side)

Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba

Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba

(The guys and girls separate as Dev&Karan lead the guys in dancing)

Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba

Tu Soniye

(Dev points to Radhika who is blushing)

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

(Karan and Dev take Abha and Radhika to spin them around hold them in a back hug)

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

 

That' s The Way Maahi Ve

O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali

(Runjhun imagines Guddu pulling her up and looking into her eyes as she blushes)

Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha Hai Re

Maahi Ve

(Guddu places his fingers down Runjhun's face outlining its features)

Tere Rangat Jaise Sona

Tu Chaand Ka Tukda Hai Re Maahi Ve

(He pulles her by her waist)

Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba Rabba

(Guddu places a kiss on her cheek)

Chal Sharabi Rabba Rabba

(Runjhun comed back to reality as Abhay pulls her up)

Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba Rabba

(Runjhun stumples into Abhay's arms as he smiles)

Tu Soniye

(Karan and Abha come around them and Abhay snaps back into reality)

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

(Everyone dances on matching moves)

 

Barse Rangini Kaliyan Hai Mehki Bhini Bhini

Baje Mann Mein Halke Halke Shehnaiya Re

(Mandy places her arm on Runjhun's shoulder)

Jitne Hai Tare Aanchal Mein Aa Gaya Sare

Dil Ne Jaise Hi Li Angadayee Re

(Barkha spins around with the rest of girls)

Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke

(Neel and Jay take the dance floor)

Chal Bajke Oh Soniye

Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye

(Jay and Neel dance with Mandy and Barkha)

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

 

Chanhda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjhaoon

Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re

(Amma comes and tears flow as she sees Runjhun)

Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon

Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re

(Runjhun ,Mandy and Barkha all hug Amma)

Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke

(Jay,Neel and Abhay come by their sides)

Chal Bajke Oh Soniye

Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

 

 

 

Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke

Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re

Maahi Ve

(Abha&Karan dance alone)

Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke

Tere Pairo Payal Chanke Hai Re

(Dev &Radhika join them)

Maahi Ve

Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba

(Jay&Mandy come)

Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba

(Barkha &Neel finally join them)

Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba

(Everyone goes around Abhay and Runjhun)

Tu Soniye

 

Jind Maahi Ve Jind Maahi Ve Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

 

Hours passed by with the gang dancing to many songs and teasing Abhay&Runjhun.

 

 

"Bohot mazaa aa gaya!(We had a lot of fun)"Abha said

 

"Haan,we 'll take your leave now ,all the best for the wedding!"Karan said.

 

"Aur haan ,Agar Suhaag Raat ke liye koi advice chhahiye to mujhe phone karde na!(If you need any advice for you nuptial night call me)"Karan whispered naughtily.

 

"Karan!!"Abha's eye widened in shock.

Karan laughed and they took their leave.

"Runjhun,sach main tum bohot kismatwali ho,tumhai itna achha pati ,itna accha parivaar mil gaya(Youre very lucky,you've got a good husband and a loving family. )"Radhika said.

Radhika,if only you knewits my bad luck not my good luck''.

"And if at any time you feel that Kanha is trying to lead you in any direction ,don't ignore the clue!"Radhika said smiling.

"If the friends are done talking,shall we leave?" said Dev putting his arm around Radhika.

"Yes ,you can take your Radhika now,but do come back tomorrow!"Runjhun said.

"Of course we will !"Dev said.

After leaving Pandey Niwaas ,the couples went straight to the Carom Club.

"You and Runjhun are meant to be together,glad we could be of help!"Radhika said.

Guddu smiled.

"We're coming back tomorrow and we'll bring the evidence with us."Abha said

"Thanks so much!I don't know what I would've done without you guys!"Guddu said

"Well that's what friends are for!"Karan said.

**Midnight**

Runjhun was awake ,she wanted to live every moment of her last day as a unmarried girl in Guddu's memories.

A letter flew in her room along with the wind.

It had a heart on the envelope "Must be from Abhay''.."

She got a shock on reading it.

Dear Runjhun,

A lot is going to change tomorrow.I wouldn't let you get married to Abhay,I wouldn't let your life be destroyed.I swear upon you,the love of my life, that tomorrow will change both of our lives forever and ever and our lives will be entwined for eternity...

                                                                                                                                            Yours forever,

                                                                                                                                                Guddu

Pre-cap:"Maybe I never had the courage to say this before but now I will! Guddu Shukla,today with everyone as my witness ,I confess that I love you and if there is anyone I want to be with ,its you!"
 
So what will make Runjhun confess?And what is the plan that Radhika,Dev,Abha ,Karan& Guddu are hatching?Keep reading to know...
Edited by -Ishana- - 12 years ago
tereliyex thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Forgot to add one more thing...

A BIG sorry for updating so late!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ya u sld be sorry.kitna wait karwadiya yar.wel the update was superb though i missed gunjhun moments.i feel reli sad 4 dem.precap ke baad toh wait karna aur vi muskil hogaya.ishbar late mat hona hun.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Naina - absolutely lovely!  Impatiently awaiting your next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Can't wait to read about the plan. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey naina I read the FF all in one go... Its just amazing dear... Keep writing and do post asap...coz i toh can't wait...its oxom...LoVe Gunjhunโค๏ธ and the romantic sequence was too good yr...I like ur concept on bringing in character's from PKYYK nd CB2 with different background ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Lovely dear... just keep posting as much as u can

Currently waiting for d next updte!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi naina yaar ..kya updt tha ...awwwesum ๐Ÿ‘... ๐Ÿ‘ ... ๐Ÿ‘ ..d dance sequence was gr888 wish it could b gunjun n not abhay...ye kya chakar hai kya evidence lane wale hai vo sab ...interesting yaar updt sooon super duper sooon ...intezaaar mat karvana plezzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

I really loved this chapter.With my 3 favourite couples:Gunjhun,Radev and Abharan and their dance.I could just imagine!

It was really well done Ishana๐Ÿ˜ƒ...I like how Radev and Abharan helped Guddu in his plan...The precap sounds really good.
 
Definately looking forward for next chapter...
Edited by NivanaLuvsZeetv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Naina sorry for coming late yaar
Awesome update happy that Abha-Karan nad Dev-Radhika are helping Guddu.  Am looking forward to their plan and Runjhun's confession am smelling a dhamadekhar confession and update๐Ÿ˜‰
Thxs for the pm love ya๐Ÿค—