FF:You belong with me*ch.13 pg.24*

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GuNjhun FF-You Belong With Me

Character Sketch

Runjhun Mishra (Nivedita Tiwari)' A simple ,sweet,loving girl from Kannauj,she lives with her cruel aunts&uncles .The only love she has received was from her Nani, cousins Mandy,Barkha and best friend Abhay.She is much more modern than she is shown in the show.

Gaurav "Guddu" Shukla (Himmanshoo Malhotra)'The local goon.He secretly loves Runjhun.He appears to be stone-hearted and cruel but has another side unknown to many.

Jay Khurana-(Rithvik Dhanjani)-Guddu's best friend ,he is your typical Casanova who spends all his times wooing girls.He is also Neel's brother.

Abhayendra "Abhay" Raichand(Vivian Dsena)-Every girl's dream guy-smart ,rich and handsome,Runjhun's best friend.He loves her and will go to any extent to make her his.

Mandhira "Mandy" Pandey(Jyotsna Chandola) -Fun,loving,lively girl. Runjhun's cousin(Mittho and Rajju's daughter) she treats Runjhun as her own sister.

Neel Khurana(Suyash Kumar)-Guddu's friend ,and Jay's brother.He is the complete opposite of Jay&Guddu.He is decent and loves his wife ,Barkha, a lot.

Barkha Pandey Khurana(Benaf Dadachanji)- Runjhun&Mandy's cousin(Billo&Bantu's daughter).She is a lively ,loving girl who ran away from her house to be with Neel, they are married.She treats Runjhun&Mandy like her own sisters and Guddu&Jay as her brothers.

INDEX
Chapter 1=page 2
Chapter 2=page 3
Chapter 3=Page4
Chapter 4=page 6
Chapter 5=page 7
Chapter 6=page 8
Chapter 7=11
Chapter 8=Page 13
Chapter 9=Page 15
Chapter 10-page 17 Chapter 11-page 21 chapter 12-page 22 Chapter 13-page 24
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cool! Awesome character sketch. I like how you added the characters from choti bahu and pyaar ki ye ek kahaani are you gonna add dev and radhika in the character sketch too in the future? Start soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: wasnadivay9

Cool! Awesome character sketch. I like how you added the characters from choti bahu and pyaar ki ye ek kahaani are you gonna add dev and radhika in the character sketch too in the future? Start soon 😃


Thanks!
I dont think I'll add them in as MAIN characters but I might bring them in dance sequences etc...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaiiNa1


Thanks!
I dont think I'll add them in as MAIN characters but I might bring them in dance sequences etc...


ok that's cool. Please start soon😃 (I'm I being a little annoying)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi naina meri jaaan ...kya CS tha veryy interesting ...updt sooon plezzz eagerlyyy waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

hi naina meri jaaan ...kya CS tha veryy interesting ...updt sooon plezzz eagerlyyy waiting

Thanx Tehzeeb!
Ill update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sur001

hey naina
sounds interesting...
continue soon...

Thanx Sur!Ill update ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi NaiiNa... It's great👏👏...
So many characters... Hope it is very interesting one...
Waiting for ur update😍... Come soon da...

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<font size="4">Chapter 1


Runjhun was sitting in her room alone ,looking at her mom's photo.

"Why,Ma?Why did you leave me in this world alone?Why didnt you take me with you?"


A knock disturbed her ,"Aay Hay Bhojarani! Are you going to spend all your life in there?" Mittho said with anger evident in her voice.


"Abe oh Heroine ,there's so much work to do and you are sitting inside having fun?GET OUT!" Kalsanwali screamed.


Runjhun opened the door and her Mamis held her by her arm and threw her out to get started on their work.It was nothing new for Runjhun this was her usual lifestyle ...to be humiliated by her own family everyday.

She went out into go get flowers from outsidewhen she saw Guddu and his gang across the street.She hated them ,last month they had harrased the whole family so much just to get their money back from Vishnu Pandey.


"Runjhun!Runjhun!"she heard her Billo Mami yell from the terrace.


"Runjhun,go pick up my Sarees from the shop now!"


"Yes,Mami" she replied.


Runjhun came out the gate when she heard a whistle.

She continued on walking and when a hand pulled her back.


"Hey babes,itni bhi kya jaldi hai (whats the hurry?)"

She recognized Jay's voice.


"Mera haath chhod do!(leave me hand!)"She replied boldly.


"Why?Mein taras raha tha iss haath ko thamne ke liye ab mein is haat ko kyu chhod do? (I was dying to hold this hand ,why should I leave it?)"


Runjhun pulled her hand away and gave him a tight slap.


"Remember this slap the next time you even try to touch me.!"

Runjhun said .


Guddu and Neel saw the whole scene,Guddu smirked while Neel just rolled his eyes.


Jay returned back to the Carom club lookung disgusted.


"Jay,how many times did I tell you not to go running behind these girls?"Neel asked Jay.


"Chhodo na yaar he will run behind her now since she 'marked him with the touch of love'" Guddu said laughing.


"Did you pay heed to me when I told you not to go behind Barkha Bhabhi?No!And you guys are happily married now.So just shut up!And you Guddu Bhaiya,when you fall in love with a girl then you can tell me that!"Jay said to them.


"Arre mein tum dono ki tarah pagal nahi ho! (Im not crazy like you two) I dont go crazy for girls!"Guddu said back.


"Yeah ,sure.Thats why you stay back here every night to watch Runjhun."Neel said in his mind.


*Scene changes to Runjhun in market*


"Disgusting! He touched me! Him and his useless friends are good for nothing.I wonder what was wrong with Barkha Didi the day she eloped with one of them!"Runjhun said to herself.


On her way back home she bumped into Abhayendra.


"Arre Runjhun tum!" Abhay said ecstatically as he gave Runjhun a friendly hug.


"Abhay,Tum kaha the itne saal tak? (where were you all these years?)"


"Dehradun mein ,sorry mein jaane se pehle aapko baata nahi saakte(In Dehradun,sorry I couldnt tell you before leaving)"


"Woh sab theek hai,accha yeh bataao Haseena Aunty ,Chand Uncle or Sid Bhaiya kaisa hai?(Thats fine,how is Aunty Hasseena,Uncle Chand and Sid Bhaiya?)"


"They're all good ,Mandy aur Barkha kaisi hai?(How is Mandy&Barkha?)"


"Mandy is fine but what can I say about Barkha...sheeloped with Neel!"


"Khurana?"Abhay asked looking disgusted.


Runjhunsaid yes.


"Is she mad?Shehad so many options but she chose him ?"


"Anyways ,you came after a long time so you MUST cme over!"


"No Runjhun,I have some work and..."


"I dont care!You're coming with me ! And Mandy will happy to see you too!"


"Runjhun,you havent changed at all " Abhay said smiling.


Runjhun smiled back.


Pre-cap:Abhay insults Jay and Guddu.




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Edited by NaiiNa1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeahhh me 1st ...😆...

aweesum prt ...but jay behind RJ ...i dont like him ...guddu dint mind jay misbehaving wid RJ..????anywayzzz amazing prt ..eagerlyyy waiting updt sooon plezzz

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