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Posted: 12 years ago
lucky,
the love potion dose is really strong this time...😉 i think u finished the whole bottle😆...or do u have more left for another FF?
 
anyways well done again👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay...lucky nd d lov potion s back here😆😆😆...maza aya yr...fultu naughty phirse😛
aur end me PS nd poetry [do line ki hi sahi😛]...lucky babe...luv u😆😆😆
Edited by sweetaish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗Kya bolu abhi main😃 I am short of words 😛 Wonderful Lucky Very Very sexy and romantic scene...😳  Loved it 😃 ☺️ Thanks for maintaining the love potion dear 😛 👏
Loved the naughty Dakshu ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ mysti

Yaar, dakshna ke liye hamare pass unlimited love potions ke bottles hain..lekin dosage depends on situation😆.Honeymoon pe ho tho itna tha banta hain na😉..U liked it right!

@ Aish & dakshna fan

Thanks buddies..🤗.and poetry(I am trying😆) is for u aish 😉and love potion dose jyada maine tumhare liyae dala dakshnafan😉..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

❤️Dakshna honeymoon continution❤️

Iss tarah shower sse saath mein bahar aane ke baad..naina in arms of daksh😍..both lost in each other.Daksh slowly takes up naina's face into his arms..naina ke chehre pe kahi kahi paani ke boonde hain..😳tho daksh ne unhe hatane ka responsibility liya.
😆.
He starts taking them away with his lips...☺️slowly kisses naina on her fore head , then eyes..then cheeks...then.about to kiss her ..☺️
Phone baja..phone baja....😕
Daksh is not in a mood to pick up the( busy jo hai), 😆

Naina; daksh tumhara phone..( jaise usse pata nahi)😆

Daksh; bajane dona.aur tum mujhe disturb mat karo...aur phir se pane kaam mein lag jaata hein😉

Lekin phone bandh hona ka naam nahi le raha hain...naina asks daksh to pick attend the call first

Naina; daksh dekhona..kuch jaroori call hoga..warna itni baar call nahi karte..javo syaing this she puhses him way slowly😕
Daksh ; kya naina? acha mood kharab kar diya😕...iss phone ko tho😡...he starts going towards his phone which is on table..then he turns back and says; tum ye mat sochna ki tun bach gayi aur maine tumhe chod diya...😆

Naina;  gives cute smile 😛and says aur mein bachna bhi nahi chahthi😍..mr.daksh patwardan...saying this.she starts wiping her hair

..Daksh picks up the phone, sits on bed and looks at calls..naina comes and sits besides him and asks..
Nains;kiska phone hein??😲
Daksh ; ghar se ayi ka..😛
Naina; ayi ka? tho call karona..mein baat karungi pehle..she snatches phone away from daksh and calls PH number aur loud speaker pe lagati hein😊

Ayi picks the call

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Can't say in my words sooo goood...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Contd...

Naina; ayi aap kaise ho? hum..teek hain ayi..yaha pe sab kuch teek hein..
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Hamra dakshu silent betne walo mein se nahi hein.he comes and hugs naina from back.and phir se kaam mein lag gaya😉...😆naina finding hard to concentrate.😉.

Ayi; chintu kaha hein?❓
Daksh ayi; mein yahi par hoon..ghar pe sab kaise hain?😲
Ayi; hum sab bhi teek hain..tho tum log wapas  kab aarahe ho?

Dakshna look at each other..naina smiles and gives an expression batavo?

Daksh; ayi mein kab se keh raha hoon ghar chalte hein..lekin aapki bahu.😆..ghar wapas aanae ka naam nahi leti..😆...kehti hain ye jagah bahut acha hein aur..😆

Naina ; nahi ayi..daksh joot keh raha hein..jhoota..saying this takes a piloow and hits him

Daksh( acting); ahhh😛 naina.kya kar rahi ho? chodo mujhe, kuch dher bhi wait nahi karsakthi.😳.thoda sabr karo😉 winks at her 😆with naughty smile)😊

Naina opens her mouth looking at daksh..( saara iljam uss par jo laga raha hein)😉

Ayi understands the situation and asks them to take care and disconnects call

Naina..mrs kp look ke saath dakshu ko dekh rahi hein.😡

Daksh; aise kyu dekh raho?mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain.😆.saying this he falls on bed and starts laughing😃.Naina sits on bed and starts hitting him with pillows

,daksh; arey naina..naina..lag jayega..

Naina; tumne ayi se jhoot kyu kaha? maine kya kiya?pata nahi ayi mere baare mein kya soch rahi hogi?

Daksh; arey tumhe boora laga..tho ek kaam karte hein..pulls naina towards him..(daksh neeche pillow in b/w aur uske upar naina)..jhoot ko sach mein badlte. hain.kuch karne se maine tumhe rokha tho nahi.😳..saying this he takes of pillow b/w them😍😍
An intense eye lock..❤️.naina sharamake;😳 aaj kal bilkul besharam hote jaa rahe ho? kuch tho sharam karo

Daksh gets up sits on bed and says; excuse me ;sharmana tho tum ladkiyon ka kaam.jaise kuch dher pehle tum sharmarahithi..agar dono sharmate rahenge..tho honey moon kaisa hoga..😉

Naina; stands up( puts a hand on her waist) ; acha.tum tho aise baat kar rahe ho jaise tum kabhi sharmate nahi..
Daksh; main? aur sharmana? kabhi nahi?😆(jhoota)

Naina slowly gets onto the bed..comes closer to daksh aur daksh ko bed par giarti hain.daksh surprised at naina's behaviour

Naina( in very romantic way)❤️..😉oh daksh..tumhe pata hain..tum bina shirt ke kitna hot lag rahe ho😆,,tumhe aise dekh kar mere dil mein kuch kuch ho raha hein😆😆

Daksh ek dum se cute cute pink KP banjaata hein😳☺️..aur sharmaane lagata hain☺️

Naina sees at his face and starts laughing😆; ab dekho..tumhara chehra...kaise sharmarahe ho  continues to have fun..

Daksh lil angry., gets up;.; acha ,tho ye sab kuch apne point prove karne ke liye kiya..

Naina; haan aur nahi tho kya? lekin tum sachmuch hot lagrahe ho..kyu tumhe nahi lagta? saying this she gets up

Daksh;   pulls naina to bed..comes closer to naina and says;muje lagta hain mein hot tab ban jaato hoon jab tum mere saath hote ho...😉

Phir se dono khogaye..lekin ab position change..naina neeche, daksh upar😍

Naina; daksh ..aaj hamara bahar jaane ka programme?😲..they take turn on bed

Daksh; programme cancel😆kyunki mujhe kaam adhoora chodne ki aadat nahi hey...comes closer to naina...scene fades...😉

PS; Sunday jo aagaya..DDLJ khatam hogaya..was feeling lil bored..so thought of this..hope u will like this😉



I can bet u can try as a CV in any of the serials bcoz we enjoy alot 
soo good Please write like this aur likhna aisahi kushiyo se bhare naina aur Daksh ki kahani...

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Posted: 12 years ago

I absolutely loved it, love ur dialogues and the whole scene, so creative, esp Naina Daksh se bachna hi nahi chahti, daksh acting , sharmana ka kam ladkiyon ki hoti hai and then Naina making Daksh blush.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN

I absolutely loved it, love ur dialogues and the whole scene, so creative, esp Naina Daksh se bachna hi nahi chahti, daksh acting , sharmana ka kam ladkiyon ki hoti hai and then Naina making Daksh blush.



Thanks yaar..😊..I am just trying to make u ppl happy and bring few smiles on ur face😃
 as real SSBn is bent upon spoiling the happiness😕...really happy that u all liked this part
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Posted: 12 years ago
@sousou

I can bet u can try as a CV in any of the serials bcoz we enjoy alot 
soo good Please write like this aur likhna aisahi kushiyo se bhare naina aur Daksh ki kahani...

Wow...thats really a very big compliment..thanks bud..but u know what, even If  want to try as CV these tv channels will not let me because,I dnt have basic qualities required for daily soap CV's.😆.neither can I drag them so..much nor use same routine formulas.., wamps..shad yantr..etc etc...😆

If I were CV..I want Daily soap to be realistic where ppl act normal with common sense.. and it should be like beautiful painting..😍which ppl love to see again and again..agar itne boore qualities he tho cv ka job koi dega nahi naa..😆

And hamare saare FF's writers isi category mein aate hain.tho kisi ko bhi CV ka job milna mush kil hain..kyu?iss liye hum tho forum se hi khush hain😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Honey moon continution

❤️Ek khoobsurat shyam, dakshna ke naam❤️

Evening...( Noon mein kya hua mujhe pata nahi..dakshna ne bataya nahi..busy honge iss liye)😉

Naina getting ready.daksh just comes in from balcony after attending a call
Naina; kiska phone hain
Daksh; ek client ka..tum tayar ho tho chale
Naina;lekin hum jaa kaha rahe hain daksh??kab se pooch rahi hoon..batate kyu nahi?
Daksh; surprise hain!😍

Naina comes near daksh and starts palying with his shirt buttons;😳 pls batavona..mujhe nahi batavogi( bechara..ishq ka mara..aur kya kar sakta hein)..😆

Daksh;  puts hands around her; agar tum aisa poochge tho...teek hain..dinner per jaa rahehain..ek dum romantic candle light dinner par...😍
Naina excited with all smiles; sach..😛
Daksh ; much( cute head butt)( aish tera formula copy karli)😉
Naina;.oh daksh..u are so sweet and kisses him on cheek😳
Daksh;pulls her closer; looks into her eyes and says( soft tone); phir se programme cancel karvane ka irada tho nahi..😆
Naina; bilkul nahi.hum dinner par jayenge..bas..pushes him away
Daksh;sits on bed..streches him arms laziliy; pata nahi kyu jaane ka mood nahi hein😆..
Naina; teek hain mat avo, yahi bete raho..( lil angry)😕
Daksh; gets up comes near naina;  gussa hamesha naq par chada rehta hain mere pyare biwi ko(pulls the nose).😊..mein tho mazaq kar rahata..naina..ab jaise hi mam ka mood teek hojayega..chalenge😛
Naina; smiles teek hogaya..chale..stands up
Daksh; haan chalo..lekin jaane se pehle kuch tho dena padega..😉
Naina comes near him kisses his both cheeks; ab chalona..baaki wapas aane ke baad..
Daksh; promise
Naina; haan baba..promise..and gives him one more kiss😳..dakshu khush hogaya aur apne pyare biwi ke saath dinner ke liye nikalgaya...
                                                                             

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