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Awww Shreya that was so Sweet and Beautiful ...Loved it
Thnks Poo...hope u sacchi me liked it and it was not a torture...😳
Awww Shreya that was so Sweet and Beautiful ...Loved it
Originally posted by: 7thHeaven
me doing happy dance . . . 🥳 Gosh this was great😃 . . . the best part was the realistic touch to it, i mean Geet was practical😆 OK a bit over practical . . .😆 and the husband wife fight well which couple doesn't fight😆 . . .
And btw how long have you been working at it . . . It was long as in real long . .TO BE EDITED AGAIN... m on mobile, lemme get to the PC
@Shreya-- Its the first time I've read one of your OSs but I enjoyed it thoroughly - the entire range of sentiments and dilemma Maaneet went through were tangible & touching😳 But most of all moi loved the happy endings coz I am a pankha of it😆
Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
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edited: i am finally here😃where do i begin...u penned a beautiful yet realistic Maaneet journey in which they took slow steps towards a happily ever after...😳Both Maan and Geet's character were realistic in what they wanted from life...i liked how u showed Geet as a strong girl who wanted to make her own future...yes...the confession was definitely one of my fav making me go awww...and when MSK shed tears..i like 😲...but the whole scene was written wonderfully 👏and which a couple doesn't have tiffs and misunderstandings...but nothing major to kill them over so i am glad u let them have their happy ending...i only suggested a happy ending because i did think that they truly deserved it...and plus Sano wouldn't have to cry over another OS 😆
and thts one of my all time fav scenes..so the tears in confession have their own flavour and i didnt want MSK to confess i wanted Maan to and that made all the diff..and hppy ending...i still wanna kill two three people..the urge is defining..😉
Reserved :)
I am here...phinally...kaan pakading for being so lazy...😆😆Lovely OS... happy OS...hehehehe... my fav part is the whole confession scene...i totally went Awww... just like u hoped ur readers would. It was Maan and Geet not Msk n Geet..u know what i mean...the tears in his eyes...the whole dialogues...beautifully written...I was dreading when i stared readign the party scene but u took a whole different route and it touched my heart just like Maan's gestures touched Geet's heart... what to do I am a sucker for happy endings...shukkar hai babaji ka...this one had it... she gives him what he always wanted and his heart desired...they start a new chapter of their lives together...😳Beautifully written Shreya... my only dread.. who u r going to kill in ur next one...coz this would have left u thirsty for blood...haina?? vampire kahi ki... Ek kaam kar..kill the CVs...leave Maaneet alone...😆😆 I need to gang up more with my happy campers..aka Sana and Aashu 😉Thankyou for writing this 😃Much love-Jia
No problem lazy bones..itna lambaaa reply makes up for that na..😳and thnks for that awww scene i wanna read that too...i mean i wrote it but never read it in continuity with the story...i so wanna do that...this is called MASTER LAZY BONES..😆 and u get an epi too next weeked..and thts gonna be more fun..coz u have kids in there..no keep count how many will be there..u never know the no.😉 and kills CVs idea is good but then i will miss SADOOO nahiii..so next one how abt kill both..i didnt kill anyone here so i am like pretty thirsty for blood..😛Thnku..love u too...
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